[Naruto] Unfinished
[火影]未完成
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 286k Words
- Chapters
- 81
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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To be honest, the ending of this extra chapter gave me a feeling like La La Land. It was the ending montage. Commander Gao kissed Mia when they first met, and then all the regrets in reality turned into perfection - as complete as a mirror, and then it was in sharp contrast with the ending in reality. Damn it, it was so damning, tears flowed down like money.
Looking at the heroine's character along the way, sometimes I really want to punch her. The heroine's body is abused. I wonder if it's her own mother? But I have to say that it is a masterpiece with laughter and tears. I spent the entire afternoon reading it.
Teacher, I really want to praise you. This book is really well written. Wei is one of my favorite protagonists in the anime. She is smart, talented and mature, but also has the purity and innocence of a child. Of course, she also has super interesting Gintama-like speeches. Like Dazuna chose to save this country? , Risking his life to assassinate Cardo, including my favorite in the whole article, he did not choose to hide the truth after the night of genocide. He watched Sasuke hate his brother from a high position and finally knew the pain of the truth. It was called growth, and then he easily asked Sasuke to forgive his brother because he had his own reasons, making Sasuke's goal of more than ten years a joke; instead, he gave Sasuke the right to accept the truth, and his body Lixing and Sasuke deal with the Uchiha legacy rationally, which is really good. It saves Sasuke a lot of unnecessary pain. Also, watching the younger sister succumb to socializing and drinking and finally squatting and sobbing outside the village really made me cry. It was written so realistically that the little girl who was doted on by her brother was forced to grow up and face the malice of society. It also made Xiao Wei more real and charming. The article portrays Xiao Wei very well. It can be seen that you are really talented, teacher. Unlike most writers who are not geniuses, they have no difficulty in entering the cruel world of Naruto from a peaceful world. All the way to the top of life, they are very miserable and are oppressed by the cruel world without the ability to fight back. The only one has grown up all the way, from a quirky little girl who was doted on by her brother to taking care of the Uchiha legacy calmly. She has used her intelligence and hard work to overcome many difficulties. However, while overcoming difficulties, she will also make mistakes and shortcomings, which will hurt herself and make her companions worry. She will feel uneasy and uneasy in her heart. But she will succeed in the end. She is not like a paper man, but like a real person with flesh and blood. As a Sakura fan who admires Sasuke, I mostly don't read the male protagonist Sasuke's novels. It's not that it's hard to accept the CP, but most of these novels are very unfriendly to Sakura. They write the marginalized Sakura like a tool, amplify Sakura's fascination with Sasuke, the inner uneasiness of a girl and the courage to pursue love, and negative it to highlight the excellent independence of the female protagonist. This kind of thing makes me sick. But I was really happy to read the teacher's article. The teacher not only gave Sakura many highlight moments, such as cooperating with Xiao Wei's illusion, firmly blocking the decapitating knife in front of Xiao Wei with his hand and kunai, etc., And wrote about Sakura's initial uneasiness and childishness, He bravely said to Xiao Wei, "With Sasuke, even you, who I admire and yearn for, will not let you go." It created an image of an innocent girl who is timid but brave to pursue love. It perfectly matches the original work, and the writing does not have the feeling of female rivalry and dog-licking in other works. After Xiao Wei said that girls should aim to improve themselves and perfect themselves rather than men, she became more determined, brave and confident, which made me, a Sakura fan, very happy. When it was said in the Chuunin Exam that one of the members would be separated, Sakura felt a little inferior and sad. Xiao Wei quickly noticed it and did not use her words to escape but said that she would separate the team and it would be difficult to come over to comfort Sakura and divert her attention. I felt so weak. Xiao Wei really regards Sakura and others as friends, not as tools to advance the plot. The heroine is really charming, careful and intelligent. I really like this article by the teacher, I hope there will be more output [laughing loudly][laughing loudly][laughing loudly]