Hua Qiangu: A Fated Trial, a Love Affair

Dear author, which article was revised?

Haha~The author is so cute~(???????)O

My intuition must be right

This girl must be Ni Mantian

It's my mother, not my mother. At that time, there was no such thing as mother.

The drawings in the article are too polite

They usually use luminous pearls in the Jueqing Palace.

The idea is good, but the dialogue is a bit long-winded and fails to reflect Bai Zihua's character traits, and there are a lot of typos.

The writing is very good~ It's just that some sentences are not broken~ But it's okay~ We are reading novels and not taking a Chinese test~ The author's writing is very good~ Kiss me~ Bo Yi

There are some places missing. Hope it can be modified. . .