Blurb One
I have to admit, I was a pretty terrible princess. I came down to the mortal realm to undergo a trial and ended up as the lowest-ranking kind of immortal. I even forgot my past. The worst part was that my brother had been teaching me since childhood, "On the Ninth Heaven, you can offend anyone you like and I'll protect you. Just don't ever provoke Donghua Dijun of the Shaoyang Palace." When I asked him why, he only coughed and said, "You have to show your elders some respect, you know." Only later did I learn that my brother, the Heavenly Emperor, could punish anyone and beat anyone, with just one exception: Donghua Dijun. But... Brother, I'm afraid I've failed your teachings. Even as the lowest-ranking immortal, a little seed-planter, I still managed to provoke the Dijun... I really should go to Taishang Laojun for a few brain-boosting pills one of these days.
Blurb Two [Siming's Version]
Siming, the Fate-Arranging Lord of the First Heaven, has recently run into a troublesome case:
The ancient deity Donghua Dijun, whose heart had remained untouched for countless millennia, has suddenly blossomed with a huge peach blossom. The news terrified Siming, who immediately went to look through all the stories he'd written. It turned out that one of the scripts he'd written just for fun had somehow been saddled onto the Dijun.
Thankfully, this involved only a little immortal from the Ninth Heaven... Mm... and a rather foolish one at that.
Siming was delighted and thought he could quietly take care of things himself. So he secretly wrote a few fated paths for the little immortal.
But he never expected... that this would end up offending several of the great gods of the First Heaven.
First, he offended Yun Jin, Princess of the First Heaven. Second, he offended Jing Yan Dijun of Qingqiu, the princess's sworn elder brother, who naturally took her side. Third, he offended the Heavenly Emperor. The princess was the Emperor's own sister, so how could he tolerate anyone bullying her? Fourth, he offended Donghua Dijun. The venerable Donghua Dijun put it this way: "You're not senior enough to meddle in my marriage."
As Siming was being punished by the Ninefold Divine Thunder, he cried out to the heavens, "I'll never write another play again!"
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It's pretty good~ Come on, come on
Lang came with the fairy sword. . . . . .
Didn't the author sign a contract??
There is an error in this chapter! It's not Taishang Laojun who writes the storybook, it's Si Ming!
There is such a big gap between the author's update time!
The pace is a bit fast, but it's okay. The relaxed writing style is better.
The writing is good, but the writing style is a bit windy, but the setting has its own thing, and the writing has some beginnings of style. Come on
The article has just begun. Give the author some advice and rewrite your copy. To be honest, I was a little surprised when I read the article, because the writing is good and the story is interesting, but the copywriting is too ordinary. If you just practice writing, forget it. If you really plan to write well. Personally, I feel that each article can be longer and contain more objective descriptions, such as environment, background, atmosphere, etc. This way the article will appear majestic. A very good article, come on, come on!
I feel like the writing style is so relaxed and I like it
Happy Chinese New Year, keep updating~\(≧▽≦)/~