Come Here, Kids' Dad

I, the male protagonist, want to call the female protagonist "female bodhisattva"

I was really a little depressed. I read Saturday with My Ex-Husband. That one was very well written. This one may have been a little longer. The previous one was okay. From the time when the heroine got pregnant, she got sick inexplicably and reconciled inexplicably. The characters of the male and female protagonists were completely ruined. A four-year-old child who never spoke suddenly suddenly became fluent in both Chinese and English. I decided to read the whole book on impulse, but then I abandoned the article every minute? I hope the author will write better and better in the future.

I like the kindness of the heroine. But too kind. I can't understand Xu Qian, her best friend who wanted to bully her. Like Xu Qian, the male protagonist has obviously said that she is not a good person and has seduced him. Why do you still listen to her? Torturing? This is not easy to accept

Everything is easy to say, at least the logic is clear. But the heroine got pregnant, and the hero asked her to beat her, and said he could give her anything besides marriage and children. Is everything in such a bad state? They even got back together somehow. Just because the male protagonist regretted it, and he didn't do anything to make the female protagonist move and forgive him. Instead, he found someone to stimulate and force her. I really don't know what to say later. The good tragic heroine suddenly turned psychotic later on, becoming more and more mean and brainless. . Both the male and female protagonists are unlikable.

It looks good, Yuzi's writing is still so comfortable, although the age difference between the male and female protagonists is much different, but overall it looks good, but the heroine's illness came a bit suddenly, and the wife chaser is a bit confusing, overall it is good

The heroine was so annoyed when she saw the marriage part.

It's a mess, the logic behind it doesn't make sense.

I really want to say that the male protagonist who combines all kinds of disgusting qualities perfectly illustrates what it means to be invincible when a person is the meanest.

Uh, what did you write at the end [covering face, laughing and crying] The male protagonist's waistcoat was shattered on the floor, and the contrast between the front and back of the female protagonist was too abrupt, right? [Mixed] When I saw the back, I felt as if I had bought a cake but there was a fly on the cake. [Covering face, laughing and crying]

It can be seen that the plot at this time is not smooth enough, the characters are also problematic, and the writing is not up-to-date and sophisticated.