Get Lost! I Don’t Have a Defiant Disciple Like You

The author's structure outline is not detailed, so the writing is a bit messy. In the end, it feels a bit off-topic. The writing style is a bit childish and many sentences are not very fluent. It feels like writing whatever comes to mind. Although novels can be entertainment and can have an empty background, the logic should not be lost, such as learning The setting of the school is very vague. It is said to be a university but the description is based on high school. For example, Qin Chuan is set to be a rich man, but the description of his family's assets and business gives off a feeling of nouveau riche. There are also the supporting characters' mentally retarded words and deeds that I don't want to say more. Why do the supporting characters have to be mentally down when they meet the protagonist? Maybe you will think that I am too serious, but I hope that the author can check more information when writing another article, make a detailed outline and write according to the outline.

The writing is really beautiful. The only drawback is that you have so many chapters locked.

Yeah, I love this kind of writing so much

It's a pity that I can't watch the extra episode [crying] [crying] [crying]

Looks good, cheers up

Damn, that's it? That's it? The author's two books always leave me hanging at the end.

I love this book so much. How come you are so talented?ヽ(*?з`*)?

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Brother Ba is a bit much though! But the article is still very sweet! ! If you like the article, please give it a try!

I really like DaDa's writing. I read the comments below and many of them said it was messy. I am a relatively white person, and I haven't found any bugs, so I think DaDa's writing is great. I like the writing style very much. I hope DaDa will write again.