The Defiant Disciple Is Hard to Tame [Reborn]

Well, I wrote a long review, but it's all gone. Ahhh, rewrite it again It's a real deal, I read the two books together. Master's character is relatively rare and does not follow the crowd Although the world framework is not novel, it is large-scale and systematic. It beats half of the fairy tales I have read. As far as this article is concerned, the ending does feel rushed. Comparing the previous and later stages, it can be seen that the carving in the later stage is obviously rough. The early stage is very exciting, the main line of the story is very detailed, and the various introductions, whether it is the family background or the character image, are relatively full. There is less talk about the later stage, and it feels like there are some traces of patchwork (this includes the introduction of Liu Fei, Lan Ling, the reveal of the true purpose of the face, etc., In a popular way, it does not look like a real person, and the character creation has a sense of contradiction) The meaning of the branch line (the Prince Regent part) was not highlighted very well, which led to the feeling that the branch line was taken for the sake of taking the branch line. After reading the connection and opening the branch line, I realized that the branch line was to make Hongyi realize that the master was incapable of emotions. However, I felt that the emotional line in the branch line was not particularly emphasized in the later period and was relatively rushed, especially after the branch line. It was a quick batch, but it is understandable. This is usually the case before the article becomes popular, so please do it (??ω??)?? Another point is the writing. The pace jumps quickly without being overly incoherent. It is like this throughout the story. For example, in a fighting scene, after the preparations and psychological description of the characters are in place before the start, the blow that determines the outcome is immediately followed. It is very confusing when reading. But overall it's pretty good-looking, with minor flaws. The overall logic is clear and the structure is smooth. The two novels of this length together don't have a lot of watery plots or stories of conscience (but why do so many small animals and monsters appear? It doesn't really highlight anything, and it takes a lot of ink, including the second one. The maid, I wrote it but felt like it wasn't written. I thought it was too much in the background and it was not a supporting role. Besides, there are so many supporting characters in this novel. Even the little emperor had to write a sequel, but this little emperor almost only appeared in the sequel in the whole branch and was not mentioned before. I felt that he was very important. As a result, he received a box lunch after the branch ended) However, the copywriting of the two books is really bad, but it is really difficult to write copy for this kind of article with a light emotional line and not too popular. Looking forward to the next cultivation article

It's a pity that I didn't get the whip. Am I a bad person? As bad as it is, be bad. Master, use your thin whip to beat the Hongyi lamb😄

Who stabbed Yu Qing? I don't understand why Liu Fei was so seriously injured again?

Hahahahahaha, it's so cute when Feng Shuyu runs away.

I finally found and read the article I have been looking for for more than a year, happy! I really love the last episode! ??? Ahhhh! The author is great!

Is there any follow-up? So looking forward to it woo woo woo

Sprinkle flowers, spread flowers, spread the magic of love in circles

I remember watching it a long time ago, and I saw it again today, (*^▽^)/★*☆ I successfully followed it.

More, updated! I love you so much!

Hey, my master, hurry up and come out quickly.