The Prince's Husband Keeps Trying to Get Himself Killed

There was no foreshadowing, and it was very strange to find out that the man was the "favorite concubine".

It took me half a day to read this book. Make a review here. In terms of content, the main plot of this article is okay, but there are some ups and downs. But there are deficiencies in the logic and coherence of the article. The protagonist's personality changes too quickly, like a split personality... The description of details is relatively lacking and not detailed enough. The article progresses quickly and follows one path to the end. In fact, some of the scheming and routines in the court, as well as the affairs of the world, can be supplemented, which will be fuller. The most inappropriate thing is actually the constant emphasis on the difference between ancient and modern times. It doesn't matter if you do it occasionally, the contrast effect is good. But if you always emphasize it, and often feel that it has nothing to do with it, it will appear abrupt and artificial. In general, the pit is too shallow. Bugs flying everywhere However, this is a debut novel, so the author's rawness is understandable. Keep up the good work

This article is so embarrassing... And the logic is too ridiculous... Hahaha... I have nothing to do, I'll finish reading it.

It's a top priority, my dear. What impressed me the most was your words about delaying. It feels like an infinite loop, haha

The emperor's entire background board_(:з∠)_

Why no foreshadowing? Didn't I say that if the prince was not naturally gay, he would have almost been straightened_(:з∠)_

The plot progresses too fast. The protagonist Qin Chuan's mental journey is unclear. His attitude towards Lie Jinghong and his emotional changes are unclear and very abrupt. It feels like a forced ending at the end. It makes people feel speechless after reading it. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Dear Daddy, in the first dozen chapters, apart from dealing with Shui and having sex with him, I didn't see Lie Jinghong's affection for Qin Chuan at all.

Awesome, write Gay can be so good!

How do you say transformation is transformation? This is too fast, there is not even a chapter yet!