Long Live the Empress

The whole text doesn't tell what General Yan has done. The heroine has always taken the initiative in the relationship between the two. General Yan didn't even fight during the whole process. After getting married, he slept with his wife and fell in love soon. It felt like the emotional scenes between the heroine and him in the early stage were all to add hardship to the male and female protagonists' relationship, which seemed to be ups and downs. After reading the full text, Li Zhuozhen was deeply impressed, and the characters were very vividly drawn. In addition, until the end, the male protagonist is really worth it.

15. For the novel written in 2016, I would be a little more tolerant. I feel that the author may not have grasped the relationship between the male and female protagonists and the male and female protagonists well, which is why it makes readers so uncomfortable. Even me, a staunch male protagonist, feels uncomfortable. I believe that if you write this article now, you must have a better way to write it. I think this article mainly relies on the character of the little emperor, because the male protagonists in today's novels are generally deified and perfect. Even though it is quite novel to see such a flesh-and-blood character with flaws. However, this degree is still not grasped well. If the emotional lines of these three people are not grasped well, it will be very uncomfortable. It feels like the second male lead is taking over the spotlight. The reason why the two protagonists take over the lead is that the emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are too superior, and the male protagonist cannot compete with them. Secondly, the emotional scene between the heroine and the male protagonist came very suddenly, because the emotional scene between the second male protagonist and the female protagonist in the early stage heightened the overall tone. Later, the lack of writing power in the heroine's emotional relationship with the male protagonist will make the readers feel uncomfortable everywhere. I only got to know the author when I read The Eunuch in Zhangyue many years ago. At that time, I was very obsessed with this kind of imperfect male protagonist. Then I came to Jinjiang and watched the "Big Brother" movie in one breath yesterday. The emotional line of "Big Brother" was very well written, including the logic and so on. It is much better than some of the ones on the Jinjiang list now, and it is not embarrassing to watch. All in all, I wish you a better and better writing!

I know the author has something he wants to write, but I felt really uncomfortable after reading it. If there hadn't been so much true love between the heroine and the male counterpart, or if the two of them had missed each other and felt like destiny, I wouldn't have been so uncomfortable seeing the little emperor tearing off his lover... And there's a high chance that my aunt would have applauded. In fact, I can also understand that the heroine fell in love with him in the end. After all, life is all about looking forward. The heroine does, the general does, and so do Zhuang Fei and the concubines. It's just that the huge deviations and regrets caused by such a small mistake are too disappointing.

I always feel like something is wrong

Emancipating women is not just about running academies, right? In ancient times, the things learned by rich ladies were taught by teachers. It is about liberating the mind and enlightening the people across the country. It is about the system. It is the support of imperial power and patriarchy under the feudal system. In a wealthy family, the male protagonist seems to be praised for his wife after leaving. This is really going to change. It shouldn't be so commonplace. Opening academies to liberate women, they have changed something from father to husband to son. If knowledge increases but the status quo does not change, it will aggravate the pain. To teach knowledge, it is better to popularize genetics, don't drink rotor soup, and talk about Nanchu no Jiao to have a son. This is better than being fake and empty. It's so uncomfortable not to write it. I wanted to read the ending first before reading the previous ones. The first few pictures are more emotional and interesting, but in the end I still can't escape the ending of this kind of novel. They are all bad, so I might as well not write it. There is not much difference between you being awakened and not being awakened. Future generations still appreciate it. Why are you praising it? Reading is reading and being an official. After all, this is not possible. It is the upper class who have the qualifications, but ordinary people, they are the majority. Equality between men and women has never meant that if I study or become an official, I can be like them. It is about liberating the mind and changing men's thinking. It is scientific knowledge. It is better to use iron and blood to order the abolition of the reality that women cannot be divorced if they cannot give birth to a son. What the hell.

Uh, I'm speechless. Changes only appear in the surface of spoken language. It's better not to do it like this at all. What are you trying to do? If the male protagonist says "boy and girl," imagine whoever comes out with this sentence means he can do it. He treats human life like a piece of grass and is as dim as a fool. Still there, where is the female protagonist? I heard that my master is the only one who refuses to eat. Why? You really have a master from the immortal world who really eats. You acquiesce? Whether he eats or not is none of his business. Sure enough, you will never learn to respect others when you are powerful. Besides, is the point wrong? Jin Yiwei is good at Dongchang. Regardless of whether they are good ministers, the reason why they are notorious is because of themselves. They also love and protect the country. As far as the Jinyiwei is concerned, after all, the Jinyiwei are also people who have received higher education in ancient times. The reason why they are notorious is that those in power can be completely innocent. The emperor thought The courtiers only went back to work after they knew everything about the family affairs of the courtiers. The emperor was incompetent and could not control it, and various institutions would be in chaos. To put it bluntly, many people would suffer for the mistakes of the ancient emperors. A word of flattery confuses the emperor, a word of dog official takes over, and how many people in power hide behind them.

In the early stage, I liked the heart-wrenching feeling, and I really liked the pitiful spirit of the little emperor. But later on, I lost that feeling after watching it in one sitting. The emotional conflict in the later period didn't feel so big, and the plot was more focused on career. Although I'm a little sad, I still enjoyed watching it. Big confession (?>?<)☆

Woo hoo hoo, I still haven't let go of General Yan.

I don't really care about chastity. In this society where you don't necessarily have to be a boyfriend or girlfriend to have sex with someone, being chaste seems even more false and childish. This novel is very good, and the writing style is mature and not childish.

After reading it all in one go, I ended up staying up until past three in the morning. I watched too many house fights and palace fights, and I was a little tired of those plots. As for Li Zhuo, to be honest, I don't really like this kind of character because I've seen too many characters of a domineering president. Of course, this doesn't mean that the author wrote a real "overbearing president", but that as a person with a somewhat strong personality, I really can't love force. Li Zhuo is from the Song Dynasty, but when they met, the heroine had already boarded the Daliang ship because of the little emperor (based on the little emperor's early ability to deceive his teammates, it was a pirate ship), and then the two of them went all the way to "rob and plunder". If Li Zhuo was from Daliang, or the heroine hadn't met the little emperor first, maybe everything would have been different. For Yan Rusong, apart from perfection, I really can't think of any other adjective. Maybe it's this kind of perfection that makes me always feel that such a man is meant to be worshiped as a male god, not to be married. Of course, this is my personal opinion, not the heroine's, nor the author's. When I saw the news of General Yan's death, I really wanted to kill the male protagonist. It was not enough to trick Grandpa Sun to death, but also to trick the male god Yan to death - the country was hopeless. I really want to write a subtitle for the heroine: "Sister, I won't play with you anymore, why don't you love me (乂`д?)". In the end, the male god gets married, and the female protagonist decides to accept the male protagonist. They are destined to be together after all. I remember the author said that the male protagonist is actually the one who can "accommodate" the female protagonist the most. Think about it, it is true, especially when it is finally revealed that the female protagonist is not a virgin. If the female protagonist marries the male god Yan, I really have no confidence that there will be no gap between them. Regarding Yang Yi, this male protagonist is so irritating. He drags his teammates down and cheats on his teammates. But he is also very nice to the female protagonist. Call him cruel. He talks about killing people every day and the nine tribes never actually take action. They say he believed the slanderous talk about marriage. He is close to being an adulterer, but he mysteriously trusts Mr. Sun and lets his love rival live and lead the troops. He indirectly cheats the old man to death, almost cheats Yan Nanshen to death, and refuses to listen and almost cheats both himself and the heroine. It was so difficult for the heroine. I cried bitter tears for her (╥╯╰╥)?, And I told the heroine countless times in my heart that you should get rid of him and become the queen yourself. That kid is so in need of a beating. However, the heroine didn't. Thinking of her promise and her relationship with the little emperor, she straightened out such a crooked seedling. This male protagonist is so good at reincarnation that he successfully became the emperor without competition. The whole army was wiped out on the battlefield and the female protagonist came from the sky. There were so many capable ministers and none of them wanted to rebel. On the contrary, there were the male gods Sun Laowu and Yan. Although the ministers behind him had their own shortcomings, they all insisted on supporting the emperor's policy unswervingly. Leng allowed him to grow up and turn the tables. To be honest, the male protagonist is probably the author's own son. ?(?╯?╰??) I typed a lot of words inadvertently, I hope JJ can give me some face and don't get too sloppy to say anything.