The Heavenly Weaver's Brocade

National conflicts are nothing. After reading this beautiful article, I became a nation. Your national hero has been transformed into a male-to-female mass murderer, and the TV series cannot be aired anyway.

It feels like the entire article is only about half way through. The conflicts in the plot disappear as soon as they are drawn up. It feels like there is too much development but not enough writing power to bring it back later... If you want to write about home and country, you have to lay the groundwork and write well.

It's a good story, but the ending is a bit lacking. It would have been better if it was more fleshed out. Darshan handled it very well and was unconventional. He tried hard, but his personal power was still unable to change the ethnic conflicts, and in the end he resorted to the old path of burning, killing and looting. Feeling sorry for Doudou

What kind of ending is this?

Wang Yu was a general in the two dynasties. Could it be that later the emperor died and the master of Dashan changed?

Dashan is really not worthy of Yang Shuo. He is too greedy and plays tricks on others. I hope he will regret it for the rest of his life. The emperor is not worthy of his elder brother. It would be good if his elder brother is alone and beautiful and leaves him. It was originally written with Gu Xuezhou as the main character, but the second half of the article was too focused on court wars. I didn't like it very much and felt it was unnecessary.

Darshan made me see his shamelessness again. Doudou was almost coaxed by him to get on the ship. Even though he had coaxed Doudou for so many years with half-hearted falsehood, he always only thought about himself. He wanted to be the saint hero of the tribe, but he had to take advantage of the sincerity and innocence of others. It was disgusting. He was not worthy of Doudou. It was a pity not to give him a bad ending.

Darshan is not worthy of an afterlife! ! ! !

I'm torn apart. The next paragraph shouldn't be like this. What the hell? It would be great if it could be overhauled. I only like the main cp. The subsequent battle is really inexplicable. It has a beginning and no end. It's so annoying.

The plot later took a turn too sharply. . . It would be better for the two emperors to agree and have a fairy tale ending with three couples. I was stunned for a while. . . . Why the hell does he have to kill a bunch of people?