Charming

Why are the two most cherished people, sons? Poor Sikong!

The early writing is great, but the following chapters feel so perfunctory... The expressions of the characters and the description of the environment are gone... Still hard work...

Ming Yuan died so easily. . . I still want to see him and Lansong

Yumukawa's ending is very good, at least he can still realize his dream. I want to watch Duoduo's extras

The ending was too hasty, and the description of the battle was too shallow. It felt like the last few chapters were a running account of major events in the timeline, and there was a lot of emotion missing from the text. I wonder if it was because Yingying had been writing for too long and her mood had changed. I think it would be better to explain every detail of the story in a slow and unhurried manner. The characters' personalities will be more distinct, and when you read it, you won't feel like you are watching the story through a screen.

Ling'an Jun is really surprised, we have all thought too much about brotherhood [face covering] Looking forward to the new article (^3^)

After watching the final BOSS battle, I felt it was a bit sloppy, and the BOSS exploded out of nowhere. At least I have some tricks... By the way, I think the positioning of the family of three is so cute. Danhua is in close combat, Amei is in charge of long-range magic attacks, and Duoduo is in charge of the long-range nanny. They look like a pure yang man, a poisonous sister, and a Qixiu lolita!

I almost thought that Ling'an's past was going to be revealed, and I hesitated to remind Dandakai to add a Ling'an side story, but the ending actually filled up the hole... I didn't expect it to be such a story of deep brotherhood, but the relationship between the two is really too gay...

I feel like this chapter is progressing too fast, and the baby has already come out before I can see the feeling of pregnancy, and the disaster is over. . .

Ah ah ah finally got some air, let's see where the mirage escapes now