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It made me so panicked, why am I not with Xiaoyu? I still like Xiaoyu...
I thought the ending was that Qiu said in her heart: I really love you, but he is my responsibility. . .
Rate Rate It's been a long time since I've seen such an incisive article.
Modern, realistic style. It's impossible to define the type of attack and reception, or even to introduce the story. The ending is very good, in a very cliché way, but the author was able to write it appropriately and the writing method was quite unexpected. Compared with many bloody Danmei novels, the plot of this story is considered light. In other words, it is the author's writing style that made us read this story with a light and sad mood. In fact, the protagonist's experience is quite ups and downs, and the author did not deliberately downplay the conflicts and bloodshed, but the author just has this ability, which made me feel that it is a lighthearted story that is deeply rooted in people's hearts after reading it. I cried countless times while watching it. The plot is not very outstanding. It is the language and characters that make this article full of flesh and blood and touching people's hearts. There is not much description of the protagonist's psychology, but between the lines of describing actions and words, we can fully feel the heaviness. There is not much direct description of the protagonist and other characters, but just between the lines of the story, everyone's image is extremely full and three-dimensional, and the protagonist goes without saying. All the supporting characters are outstanding. Although they don't have much writing, their personalities are very distinct, which can give readers the feeling of "each has its own life, but they just happen to appear in the protagonist's life in this article." What's even more valuable is that because the article is entirely from the perspective of gong, the image of shou, which has little interaction with gong, is very vivid and vivid. Admire the author's writing style.
Almost cried. . It's not in vain that I stayed up late to read this article. . . Since the homework comes first, I won't say much more. I look forward to more excellent articles from the author.
I didn't leave a message until I finished reading it. I read "Wandering in the Wilderness" first and then read this article. I thought it was the same style, but I didn't expect the difference to be so big. One takes the lighthearted route and the other takes the dramatic route... First of all, the characters have very distinct personalities - well, the most distinctive ones are of course the calm, strong and responsible Qiu Tian who once didn't know what fear was, and He Xi who made Qiu Tian know what fear is and gave the strong Qiu Tian a shoulder to lean on, and He Xi who can't be forgotten after going through hard times together and going through vicissitudes of life. Wang Ying, this tough woman, is so cute. What I love most is that she clearly knows what she wants and never sloppily follows her steps. The ones that are worrying are Fan Yu and Cheng Yaojin. Is Cheng Yaojin capable of supporting Fan Yu's life? How can Fan Yu leave his father? Well, even though Qiu Tian's parents don't care about him, they still protect him at the critical moment. They are so cute~ Secondly, the plot development makes sense. It's like those are living characters, and the author just took a pen to record their lives, rather than deliberately arranging everyone's decision-making words and actions. It makes people feel, ah, this is this kind of Hexi, this kind of Qiu Tian, what should be said and what should be done, even if we are not He Xi or Qiu Tian, we can have the same experience. In addition, the narrative structure is complete, the regulations are clear, there are foreshadowings in the past and echoes in the aftermath. From beginning to end, it is written in one go, as if the author had thought about this story for a long time and wrote it down in one go. The previous narration is very well written, with the constant alternation of reality and memories, completely showing the growth of the two teenagers in their youthful and ignorant years. Starting from never rejecting this fragile and sensitive young man, Qiu Tian gradually learned to care for and care about him; gradually he became intimate and ignorant of feelings, and the rumors, accusations, and insults, and the firm hand held by the young man who was always fearless also put another fragile young man under too much pressure. (Are there really such unbelievably cruel parents in the world?) Four years later, the two met again at a noisy class reunion. In the cryptic words and implicitly sharp conversations, they were calm and composed, but when their backs were turned, they were licking the wounds of loneliness alone, which spanned the heart and could not be healed. Finally, I would like to thank the author for his hard work, which gave me a rare and enjoyable reading experience.
The real version of fairy tale is like a dream. So well written. A rare piece of writing that makes people deeply moved. In fact, most people still live a peaceful life with their "Xiaoyu" in the end; while "Hexi" has mostly become a thing of the past, remaining in a faint mourning for yesterday. No matter which choice you make, luckily there is love as a gift from life.
Today is complete! HOHO
Why is it, why is it that Jinzi and Xiaoyu are together, even if they are friends, it is not good, why is it?
I like articles written by adults, but I don't know why I can't download this article.