Dreams of Ten Days and Nine Nights

Suddenly he noticed the meaning of Fu Min'en's name. In the end, he let go of his obsession with his love for the heroine. I feel so sorry for him. In fact, I think among the three male protagonists, he has the most roles. If some scenes of the female protagonist getting along with him can be added in the article, his psychological changes at that time would make him qualified to be the male protagonist. For the other two, Changsheng has always been living in his memory. Tiange is unable to compete with the heroine at all and has been exploited... In the midst of resentment and thoughts...???

Yandere pervert my love!

Hey, Tiange wouldn't call Lu'an "Sister"...

This is a long-term review ORZ that has been in debt for a long time. Strictly speaking, this is not a long review in the true sense, just some personal remarks. It can be regarded as a summary of some of my feelings after getting to know Big Fish this year and reading the article on Big Fish, without making any technical reference. Well, before getting into the whole thing, I still have to say something: Da Yu is really a very, very good author. Remember to bookmark and leave a message~ To be able to read Da Yu's articles, I can only sigh at my fate. At that time, I had just moved to Jinjiang, and it happened to be a holiday, so I was bored. Collect your favorite genres on the homepage. Big Fish's article is in an author recommendation area, "Code of Mermaid Sales". It happened that I was particularly interested in mermaids at that time, so I clicked on it, and from then on I got a cute, funny, and suspenseful character called Fanyu. I originally thought "Code of Mermaid Trafficking" was a warm and lovely article, but after I finished reading it, I realized that I was really too young =. = Mermaid has only a few chapters, but the plot has ups and downs. I almost held my breath throughout the whole story. Although sometimes I can guess the next plot, but if the plot is as I guessed, then Big Fish is not Big Fish, and I will not read the comments seriously, nor will I continue to follow in Big Fish's footsteps. The wonderful thing about Big Fish is: God will always unfold o(*￣▽￣*)oThe plot does unfold as you imagined, but the details are more attractive, more original, and the logic is strict. Sometimes you wonder if you have guessed wrong, and you can't help but want to continue reading. [Congratulations to Dayu for getting a candy for his first post~(′▽`)] Then came "Qingyuan" and "The Powerful One". After "The Powerful One" was finished, Dayu told us that she wanted to try a full-length novel, so "Mendang" was born. In "Men Dang", the shortcomings and shortcomings of Big Fish are so obviously exposed that the advantages of Big Fish are covered up. In fact, I know that Da Yu was very hard to write, but because of our expectations and encouragement, she persevered all the way with the courage of "a newborn calf is not afraid of tigers". After each chapter, we actively leave comments and point out shortcomings and advantages until the end. Looking back now, I feel like we were supporting each other. After "Men Dang" was completed, "Recover" followed one after another. According to the copywriter of "Recover", the inspiration came from "Hunter". When I first learned this text, I was particularly impressed by it for some reasons, so I imagined the story and "almost" wrote it. So when I first learned that Da Yu had written this article, my heart was boiling and I jumped up and down. "Redeem" is still Da Yu's consistent style, and will not simply follow the popular script. The emotional lines of the three characters are complicated. Pan Wangan is closer to the truth every time he is reborn, and his feelings for Lu Zhaoyuan are deepened little by little. Just when we thought they had given up on living a happy life, Pan Wangan died and was reborn. This time the perspective was changed to that of the emperor, the man who was hiding behind the scenes to stir up trouble, and finally said everything with a victor's tone. Although I was screaming "fuck, fuck, f*ck" at the time, but after I calmed down, I couldn't help but marvel, it was really wonderful! [What I imagined in my own mind before is simply trivial.] After "Redeem" ended, Da Yu became more interested in writing a full-length novel, and he secretly planned "Dark", a post-apocalyptic story. Different from what others have written, Big Fish's post-apocalyptic article has its own unique style, although it scared me for a while. [Yes, it's the Mid-Autumn Festival!! Before watching the apocalypse of Big Fish, the apocalypse I was exposed to was either one in which the children of high-ranking officials knew in advance that their superpowers, physical strength and character were perfect, or they were reborn and came back with golden fingers to save their families and find partners, which was beautiful and bright. It's annoying to see the same thing. What is different is that the heroine of "Dark", Fangyuan, is an ordinary college student. She is slightly fat, has an unharmonious relationship with her family and roommates, and is a little dark inside. However, she is a good kid and leads a cookie-cutter study life. The day when the apocalypse broke out was no different from yesterday. The game of life and death began without any preparation, and then began the journey of returning home to find family, and then everything revolved around this main line. Da Yu's writing is very detailed and true. The first part is completely the reaction of an ordinary person when encountering the apocalypse. He has no knowledge of the world in advance and does not have sufficient and worry-free supplies. He lives in fear every day and faces every day with wisdom and courage. This is the life of a passerby that I have never seen in the apocalyptic literature before. Maybe there is a sentence or two in some works to describe it. Looking at his unkempt face and sallow complexion, he has gone through so much suffering! Yes, the beginning of "Dark" is the life of a passerby, as simple and real as you and me. Of course, as for the heroine, there must be someone with a golden finger. After meeting Kelly and the others, Fangyuan began to grow up little by little and was able to take on her own role. The narrative of "Dark" is interspersed back and forth, bringing out the previous events bit by bit. The advantage of this is that it creates suspense and can develop the plot well. However, if the connection is not good, it will easily become disconnected. This is the problem faced by Big Fish. Everything that happens has little to do with what happened before. After a long time, it is easy for people to forget what happened before. I once saw a reader comment saying that everything in Big Fish is too independent, like several articles joined together. The beginning was good, but as the story unfolded, it became more difficult to connect the big fish. So in the later period, she has been actively thinking of ways to modify the roundness to make it reasonable, and she often asks everyone for their opinions. During that time, we often discussed it late into the night and talked a lot. Now that I think about it, I still miss it. After half of "Dark", I became increasingly busy with my studies, and Dayu was preparing to graduate. We communicated less. At the same time, the friends who had been following me since the first article also dived. There was less bubbling, and the joy of building the building at the beginning was gone. There were also fewer discussions with everyone. Fortunately, many new and loving little angels of readers came, and they commented as enthusiastically and passionately as we did before. I'm not going to tell you that I'm jealous╭(╯^╰)╮ After "Dark" ended, we came to "Ten Days and Nine Nights Dream", [This is the article I feel most sorry for, because in this article, I not only did not leave a message for Dayu Sahua, but I also said many times that only a few people left comments, and the long comments are still left to this day. Personally, I think this is the best novel that Da Yu has written so far. It has almost all the advantages of Da Yu's writing, including suspense and slight horror. Moreover, each commission is a short story, which allows Da Yu to fully utilize his advantages in writing short stories and at the same time accumulate experience in writing long novels. Experience, the writing is really great, some of the shortcomings in the first few articles have been greatly improved here, but it is a little weird at the end [Actually, I wanted to tell Dayu several times, but it happened that I was very, very busy during this period, and my phone happened to be broken and I couldn't type, so this is also me One of the reasons why there are so few messages] The beginning of "Portable Boyfriend" is very attractive. Although Liu'an does not appear in this story, the vague description makes it more attractive. At the same time, it also makes everyone understand that this is almost a story that revolves around Lu'an receiving a commission, but the disappearance of Iris It was not handled well, there was no warning, and there was not much description afterward. He just disappeared, and Luan did not show any signs of nervous search. The subsequent chapters revolved around the appearance of the male protagonist and his interaction with Luan, so that Luan's excitement when he saw Iris later seemed abrupt and inexplicable. The character creation of Tian Ge is very good, but Lu An is a bit unpredictable. Maybe it is the Lu An that Da Yu wants to show. At first, he was cold and aloof. After getting to know Tian Ge, he gradually became more alive and full of flesh and blood. It's just that Big Fish didn't control it well, and combined with Lu'an's previous performance, the two formed a strong contrast, which made it difficult for people to adapt for a while. As the plot slowly unfolded, I felt that the part about going to Iris to find Lu'an was the best written, [and also the scariest. It scared me so hard that I couldn't sleep well for several weeks. Now I feel like humming╭(╯^╰)╮Big Fish is responsible! The second volume is good overall, but the story of "Sharp Love" is inserted too suddenly and has almost no connection with the main plot. After that, it is the story of Fu Min'en, Lu'an, and Tian Ge, which reveals the origin of Lu'an Changsheng and her abilities little by little. Among these people, Fu Min's favorite is Well, [even if he is a pervert] because his character traits are very obvious. It was not until the end that I finally understood what was the biggest problem with these stories of Big Fish. "Mermaid" and "Redeem" are the best short stories. "The One in Power" was not familiar with its setting, so the writing was a bit stiff. The details of "Mendang" are unattractive and the plot is scattered. "Dark" is a good improvement over "Mendang", but it still feels that the problem has not been solved. The root cause is that the character creation is not good enough. An article is unfolded by the story of the protagonist. She knows and comes into contact with vivid people with different personalities, and enriches and expresses them through their experiences, which also makes things develop reasonably. The reason why we are deeply impressed by Fu Min'en is not that he is a pervert [although he is indeed that] but that the character he presents is too vivid. Fu Min'en is undoubtedly a pitiful person, he is too persistent in love, has the madness that he would rather be broken than destroyed, and his love that is too sharp hurts others and hurts himself at the same time. His biggest fault is that he loves Lu'an too much. Regarding Changsheng, he can be regarded as one of the more successful characters. In fact, he is a kind of existence, but we have a deep impression of him. It is not that he has a high appearance rate. He almost always appears in other people's narrations or memories, and his real appearance is only a few scenes in the last chapter. The reason why the memory is so profound is that he held the delusion that after rebirth he could be with Lu'an forever without any worries. He started everything, but unfortunately, it all ended in the end of his soul. But if he is really reborn and is with Lu'an, the moral bottom line in Lu'an's heart will not make them much happier. It is better to forget each other in the world. I'm happy that in Dayu's new novel, this point has been greatly improved. Ji Bo'er and Tang Jieqing have distinct and vivid characters. Bo'er is a lively and hilarious character, while Jie Qing is a cold-hearted and dark-faced paralysis. The development revolves around the male protagonist suddenly turning into a woman when he wakes up, which is really exciting. Moreover, this kind of incredibly imaginative article will definitely attract more little angels to fall into the trap. Judging from the first few chapters, the tone of the whole story is relatively relaxed and pleasant. After the male protagonist turns into a woman, Big Fish here does not handle it well and does not portray the psychology of the male protagonist well. He inexplicably changes gender and becomes a woman who does not even recognize his mother. The mood is definitely like a zoo. The male protagonist's performance was too calm, with a feeling of "I had expected it", and he also comforted the female protagonist. Even if he has facial paralysis, he can't explain this calmness. I hope Da Yu can deal with the psychological changes of the male and female protagonists more naturally and delicately in the next few chapters. Well, I've been rambling for so long, and I've almost finished talking about it. Thank you everyone for wasting your time to read my rants. The above only represents my personal opinions and feelings. My words may be a bit arrogant, wrong, or disagree with me. You are welcome to find fault~ Feel free to point it out, I won't change it [Anyway, I am Da Yu's favorite woman and I'm not afraid╭(╯^╰)╮] Finally, I wish Da Yu writes better and better, gets more inspiration, makes everyone happier and supports Da Yu more.

I can say that after reading them all, I feel that Luan is selfish←←

Although she is perverted, she still loves her

It's finally sweet. It's not easy. Like, praise, praise!!

This, this, this. . . Tiange lost his temper

Hey, I actually quite like Fu. Tiange didn't actually pay anything for Lu'an... Sigh...

I like him. Because I am also such a person