The Devoted Hound Has Been in Disguise for Centuries

Shenma is so angry! ! ! You've already wasted so much time hurting each other, so don't waste any more time arguing! ! ! ! ! Ahhhh. . . . In the end it was just superfluous???

Why guess? If you say too much, it's just a routine???

I especially like your writing style and narrative method. The only flaw is that the heroine is a bit thin. In the process of Simu guiding the heroine to discover him step by step, it felt like she was simply being guided and told in a more passive state. She tried her best to find the truth and interacted with the hero. There were very few sparks. The male protagonist's emotions are very strong and the characters are full, but the female protagonist's image seems to be still at an ordinary level. On the whole, the rhythm from the beginning to the present is almost the same, and there is no climax that can particularly arouse people's emotional resonance. I think that perhaps a layered description, appropriate detail, and focused characterization would make this work richer and more exciting. Of course, it's all for the sake of better works, and it's a healthy discussion. After all, it's rare to meet an author who you like. After all, I believe you will become better.

Author, your Weibo name is not available on Weibo?

I always forget to comment after reading the article, but this time I finally remembered to comment.

Congratulations on the completion~! Looking forward to the extra episodes! !

Expect! ! For the sake of the extravagance, I will forgive you for being so short! (*/∇\*)

Let's meet up soon~ Then we can have fun hehehe

Ah, ah, ah, two years have passed so quickly~ Let them reunite soon!

Write, write, write! ! ! ! Hands and feet support! ! ! Why ask such an obvious question? ! (*/∇\*)