
The Innocent Wasteland
无罪的荒原
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The shadow is big and I'm here again~ Reliving it again, Narcissa is still so beautiful hhh I think Riddle is pitiful. He turned from Voldemort back to Riddle and lost the dreams and energy he once had. Although the dreams he once had were just illusions and the energy was based on nothingness, he really atoned for his sins and grew old with this decadent world, so it's good that Narcissa is back and doesn't make him so tragic. And I want to criticize Riddle in the extra episode. His love for Ivy has become nihilistic, and he actually has the nerve to rebuke her wasteland evil. After all, when he was young, he himself... Hahaha. Alas, Riddle eventually became an old man, denying everything extreme and making excuses for everything. But the reason why I am against Riddle is because I am a Muggle~ If I were a wizard, I would not be able to support Averyve radically. Thank you Shadow for bringing us such a good story. I hope to complete the new work as soon as possible, okay~ The way you write shadows is so beautiful, and I especially love the silhouettes you drew. For example, Voldemort caught a glimpse of Narcissa walking in wearing breeches and holding a halo, Harry Potter watched Narcissa look back, and Ivy watched the shadow of another soul. NO, I firmly oppose any sense of affinity between the Riddle family and the Potter family. Harry can't do it, and neither can his son hahh
The last two paragraphs are awesome. But how could the wasteland that gave birth to the poisonous fruit be innocent? Or rather, it just considered itself innocent because it was not the direct perpetrator of the crime, but only gave birth to evil.
The big shadow here is to express that Voldemort also saw a little bit of Narcissa in the girl Prince, and then liked her a little, but this liking disappeared as the Prince matured, and is his liking actually a curse and bringing misfortune? This is the third or fourth time I have read it, and I like it very much. It is also one of the best HP fanfics and the best bg fanfic of Voldemort. But the last few times I read this article, I didn't have the idea I had in the previous paragraph. At that time, I didn't think Voldemort had any feelings for Prince. But today I saw the big text, which juxtaposes her with Narcissa and Ivy, and combined with Voldemort's pity to accept her as an assistant, I feel that as far as the work is concerned, Voldemort once had some emotions and moments of heartbeat. Perhaps he remembered a similar wantonness in another work. The youth in the human body stares at this new beauty and her beauty with sadness (also because of the poor defense against the dark arts, I have to pay more attention to her occasionally. Of course, it is still within the teacher's attitude towards students and will not cross the line or go too far), with a kind of sadness of nostalgia. Finally, I would like to praise Dada's writing style. This article is really inspiring, the language style is very comfortable (readers can tell that the author feels comfortable writing), and it has a natural demeanor. Although the internal logic of the narrative in some places comes from the author's inspiration and intuition, and I can only receive 60 or 80% of it, overall it is a work of genius. But maybe the author broke away from a natural attitude at the beginning of each chapter and carefully designed it. No matter how you say it, the flaws are not concealed.
Hahahaha, I think Riddle is very cute in this chapter. He is a point-giving maniac and almost never gives points below E.
Riddle still loves Ivy. As a comparison, Riddle "killed" his beloved Narcissa, but he was still alive because he had to bear the responsibility of raising his daughter; Riddle found out that it was his daughter who died, and he was still alive because Narcissa came back. Ivy lost his beloved Spring and chose to die to atone for his sins after protecting his mother and helping his father. Woo hoo hoo, Ivy probably feels unconcerned because he feels that his mother doesn't love him and his father doesn't forgive him for his past evil deeds.
Forgive Riddle. He at least redeemed himself by giving up becoming the Dark Lord, and Narcissa saved and changed him.
Riddle is such a pervert! After reading the first half of this extra chapter, I thought it was really well written. After reading the second half, I still felt that it was really well written, but I was very angry with Riddle. He first treated Narcissa "coldly" when she was still in the manor. Fortunately, there was a spark between the two of them, and Narcissa lived a relatively peaceful life during that period, but she had doubts about life and a deep uneasiness about the Dark Lord's cause, otherwise I would be the first to disagree. But I think Narcissa is really a good child, very smart and tolerant. Woohoo, my lovely Avilife, because of your unreliable father, you were full of doubts about life, and in the end you lost your life because of it. Little Ivy's love for her mother is so touching, and because of her choices, I think she also loves her father.
The writing style is really good. After reading this book, I fell in love with Fu Qian, a pair of unpopular CPs. After reading this book, I felt exhausted.
Second brush, I like the story very much
So did Narcissa drink the love potion? In fact, the product of the love potion does not understand love. It is a fan fiction. I don't know what the setting of this article is.