[Asian War] The Death of Adalric

I'm a newcomer who has only just finished reading the first installment of the original series. Maybe what I've written feels like an original story wearing fanfic's clothes...? Ah, forget it. It's my first piece since the holidays, and I've gotten so rusty. I'm exhausted (smoke).

I also haven't checked for typos or gone back to cut and revise it, which is practically essential for a short story. Part of the reason is that I don't have time, and the other part is that I'm lazy (shut up).

Trying out a fortune-teller style?

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