
Grave No. 1
坟墓1号
Synopsis
24Chapters
38Favorites
6.0Score
2Nutrient gifts
277Clicks per chapter
36Comments
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It's a pity to give up. I really like this article, I like the girl Qinyin, and I wonder what kind of future this unique girl will have. I admire her persistence.
The author writes so cutely, I really want to hook up with her!!! I really like this kind of pocket novel that clearly writes about everyone's changes. The delicate portrayal of the relationship between the difficult elf and the trainer is simply my favorite. Compared with Gray, the protagonist has become more charming, as if he has changed from a blurry old photo to a 780p color photo. When I was reading the article, I kept thinking, I really hope such a great pocket article can be on the home page so that more people can see it... To be honest, the large articles that shined on the homepage before were really just tolerable levels. Why do they appear on the homepage? It's simply unbearable! However, the author's descriptions of characters other than the protagonist... Don't they seem very cute? The strong enemy is more charming than the protagonist Xipi - Hibiki and Xipi's suspected Akira, especially the part where he is bullied by the protagonist, which is the focus of charm; Dr. Kongmu, who should be like a passer-by, is more like a deputy protagonist than Hibiki-kun; the presence and charm of the Taoist temple master and the elf, who should be fleeting, are about the same. I personally think this kind of role positioning should be the biggest failure of this article, right? (No slaps in the face allowed) The author's diligent updates are also one of the highlights of this article. Even if the author is in serious danger of taking exams, I really hope that the author can update the article quickly and in large quantities... However, out of conscience, I still reluctantly hope that the author will put his studies first. The final expression, please hook up and ask for FC!
Wait for you. Which is more important between the first year of high school and the second year of high school? . The foundation is very important.
Slap in the face! Q!! (Although I know it is not easy for the author to write articles, but as a primary school student, I can only read the articles written by others and have fun, let alone the lazy HGSS fan fiction. The starting point of the article is also novel and rare, and the author's writing style is also very good... How can I be fooled? So sad)
. . . . . . . . . . . . . . I want to sing "My heart is so cold" n times. . . . . Wait for you
I came from Ash... I really like this kind of article^_^Pocket is my true love! I don't understand why it's so popular ˊ_>ˋ
I came here to read your article.
Comment on "Pokemon HGSS] Rinku Thank you, Sky. Motivation comes from dreams, and pursuit comes from the sky. If the dream and the sky no longer exist, then there will be no story and no people in the story. There is no more sound. In my mind, Qinyin should be... Well... How to put it well, probably a bit short-tempered, occasionally coquettish, a bit stubborn to the point of being unreasonable, kind-hearted, passionate and impulsive... And persistent, tenacious and hard-working, honest and simple, positive and optimistic, and then a little crybaby and fragile, but very arrogant and confident deep down... It is such a feeling, it can be considered. I didn't introduce anything about Qin Yin during his lifetime, and I don't plan to introduce it either… As for the reason, I haven't thought about it yet…=v=…. The main purpose of my article is to write about this kind of Qinyin, the Qinyin that is not favored and paid attention to, because of dreams and persistence until the end, it can barely be regarded as a coming-of-age article... It is my first time to write this type of article, so if the writing is not very good, a little OOC or the writing style is stiff and unnatural, I still hope you can bear with me. As for why I want to write such an article... This is because... I am far different from the protagonist in the article. He is a guy with neither perseverance nor resilience, so maybe I also want to write such an article to encourage myself and people like me... Just like the main line of a typical hot-blooded shounen manga, but elf literature is elf literature after all, and its own gentleness and plain style cannot be retreated, so I chose to use a [easy] article type, which will probably make it easier to write. I like people like Kotone very much, so I want to use her passion and resilience as my motivation and goal to move forward. I hope that I can make the character of Kotone complete and full of flesh and blood through my best writing... Although this may be a little difficult for me now... A high school student, but with the company of all of you, I think it is not impossible... Because I still have a lot of words to write, and in these words I can complete everything about the character Kotone and the world in which Kotone lives. Pokemon is probably a rather unpopular fan series on Jinjiang, not to mention that the fanfics are also quite unpopular... When it comes to being unpopular, please allow me to say a few words. I was originally planning to start a Touhou fanfic, but I found that the Touhou fanfics on Jinjiang don't have the majesty and success of the Touhou fanfic series as the first miracle of fandom... So The loser who is not strong enough and fragile in his heart gave up because he was afraid that his collection would always be a happy big zero and even the points would be miserable... If you want to beat me or scold me, I don't blame you =w= If you have something that you think is not popular but you want to see, you can tell the loser and maybe the loser may have the same idea as you~~~. As for why I started writing about elves because I love elves too much... Almost everyone who knows me should know this. It's not right, it's too far off topic. I started this article during the summer vacation this year, and I still tried very hard to keep updating it daily or even three times a day... But the appalling collections, clicks, and points almost made me go against my original intention... Before this summer vacation, I had decided to write for my own happiness regardless of grades, points, and message collections. Now it seems that I can't do it... It's a bit of a headache, I hope you can understand. Therefore, I hope to follow Qinyin's example. No matter what kind of setbacks and indifference I encounter, I must move forward with passion and determination and never give up! You can never just have enthusiasm when rushing forward, so I also reflected a little on my situation. The first one I think may be the time when I delayed updating the novel "Grey" for half a year. This mistake came from academic pressure, and also from the fact that I made a promise casually because I didn't know the current situation. If possible, I will notify you in advance this year... [To put it bluntly, it is still very dangerous if you don't finish it after school starts. Have you seriously reflected on it? Hundan?! The second one is that I wonder if the elves are a bit cold this year... Let's put this aside... What I want to say is that if I think the daily update in August can be completed before August, I may open a new pit in August, which means that this article should not be serialized for a long time... So please read it and cherish it, and remember to leave a message! [This probably has nothing to do with your reflection, right? The third question is one that I cannot see. This is a relatively detailed question that I, the author, alone cannot see. I need you, the readers, to help me and find out what needs to be improved in my article. For example, the characters are not fleshed out, the plot is too nonsense, the style is too bland, and the writing is too tacky. The structure is too unreasonable and the outline is too confusing. It is similar to this. I am very grateful to the readers who gave me their opinions. Although I may not necessarily adopt them, it should bring me gains and more reflections. I will definitely read every article carefully and I will never be angry...? [Hurry up and cross out the question mark, Hundan Well... I originally wanted to write a very serious long review but found that I am not very good at writing... So I wrote something similar to an announcement. After all, it couldn't fit in the copy and it was not suitable to be posted in a copywriting place. The loser who suffers from obsessive-compulsive disorder didn't want to post it as the main text because of his obsessive-compulsive disorder, so he posted it as a long review... To be honest, in fact, I made this long comment out of my own selfishness. I said a lot of nonsense and rambling thoughts in the hope of increasing the exposure of the article... Points are a secondary thing. I hope you can understand that after all, my click rate is really... Even if I am shameless, please calm down. I'm sorry, everyone~~~ [Aren't you very happy? Motivation comes from dreams, and pursuit comes from the sky. I hope that this article of mine will make greater progress than the previous one. If I didn't have the idea to write this novel well, there would be no novel like this, and there wouldn't be a loser like me [Bonus points for echoing the beginning and the end! Having said so much, thousands of words are condensed into one sentence: Rolling, asking for exposure, asking for clicks, collecting, and leaving comments…. Please don't be disgusted with me like this, everyone~