The Reborn Pavilion Master Is Ill

After reading it~ I realized that I had written a long review of this book 9 years ago. I hesitated whether to write it or not. I'd better follow my heart~ After all, I just wrote it casually no matter how I read it. In fact, I am a little happy to re-read this article. If the time is extended to now, I can actually clearly see the growth of the author, and it is really very convincing. Oh, the plot, logically, the hand cancer is still there, it seems that the author is quite contrasting, hahaha. Thank you for your hard work, Shi Da! Let's talk about the good points first. The emotions are really delicate, and the author's emotional lines are really well written throughout, which is worthy of praise. Moreover, villains are not simply evil, they will also have difficulties, and there will also be people who will follow them to death, but the choices are different and the degree of cruelty is different. The two groups, Pavilion Master Xixi and Ran Mu, were considered the control group, but various reasons led to different outcomes. This is actually intentional, and the villain is not brainless, and the protagonist is not always winning without brains, and the various layouts and clues are also very subtle. These details really show the author's brilliance, and he has actually praised it a lot before! Let's focus on the shortcomings. First of all, let me state that as an article written 9 years ago, this article is really good, and the author is really making progress. It will always seem a bit picky to criticize previous articles from today's perspective, and in fact, even now, this article is still worth reading, but it may not be as good as the author's other articles. The first one is Ran and Mu. Although the author really wants to write that the villains are flesh and blood and compare them with the protagonists. But it really wasn't handled well. Ran's liking for Xixi was a bit unexpected, and he didn't like it in his previous life either? Maybe it's because the best thing is not to get it? Maybe it's because there is reality in the dream but not, so I have obsession. But at the same time, I feel regretful about Mu Jin who turned into a ghost, and at the same time, I pursue and cherish Mu Jin. It does feel very disconnected. The second point is that Gu Liuxi is very powerful in martial arts, has learned peerless martial arts, and has been reborn, but she is still not as good as the Pavilion Master. I feel that the Pavilion Master is given too much glory, which makes Xixi have a relatively low sense of existence. In fact, the author has a good grasp of this later in the story. The third point is a personal opinion, because the author actually wrote it very well. I feel that although the various plans of the Pavilion Master are very good, there is a saying that goes well, take one step, watch three steps, and plan ten steps. The author gave me the feeling that maybe the pavilion master had seen through the opponent's plan and had taken precautions and countermeasures, but once the opponent acted, it would still cause losses. Although the goal was achieved, there were heavy casualties, and it felt like a passive defense. The master of the pavilion is very smart and wise, but his sense is a bit lacking. Of course, it's also possible that they don't want to design a wise man who doesn't miss anything. After all, wise men don't have emotions. For example, in the final battle, it's actually equivalent to the pavilion master challenging the other two sides. From a God's perspective, the enemy jumped out and exposed it without suffering any losses. Although they knew that Bai Zhi had a grudge against Xiao and his son, they did not recruit her as a foreign aid. The rescuers had partially replaced the fake ones (possibly), but in fact they did not play any role. The combat power was seriously underestimated. Xiao didn't come at the beginning, and Bai Zhi also accidentally joined. If Xixi hadn't been reborn, he might have been directly controlled by Heart Eater until death. I was thinking that if I find another reason for Mingjian Villa to hold a martial arts conference, and then go out to detoxify and expose the Nether Sect, and the people from other sects who have been exchanged take the opportunity to whitewash Xinxi Pavilion, Mingjian Villa must practice the masters of the pavilion to deal with the Nether Sect together to protect their status in the martial arts forest, and then pretend to be defeated in the middle and leave the fake jade for one party to get. In this way, the enemy will bite the dog, and the Nether Sect may tear off the disguise of Mingjian Villa, or attack Xiao and his son later. Of course, this is a random layout made by me nine years later. Please forgive me if I am wrong. And it feels like it affects the protagonist's emotional line very much, hahaha. The author has his own layout, and it's great! All in all, I really love the author's writing. I can't say enough to praise it. I hope you will do the same in the future~

It took a lot of effort to get two chapters, but all of them are gone. It's too abominable.

The poison hasn't been solved yet... It's over... In his previous life, Gu Liuxi was loyal to Ran Qingying, just like Su Wang was to the pavilion master. The evidence is that Mu Jin has no sense of existence in the memories. If you like him, you will pay more attention to this "love rival" character (just like Mu Jin cares about Xiao Gu very much). Little Gu is a really loyal dog and a really crybaby. In this life, she was mostly protected by the pavilion master, who couldn't bear to send her out on missions. However, in the last life, she worked hard for the misidentified "Xiao Zhan". Her efforts in misplaced time and space are also a point of abuse for me.

It's beautiful, but the main character is the most miserable heroine I've ever seen. At the end, her body is still weak, but it's so heartbreaking.

Why is one of them locked?

Big, I can't find the locked chapter on Weibo. There are still 135 chapters. What should I do?

Watched it several times It has always been in my heart

After reading the whole article, I think the author's outlook on life is really upright, and the characters are not stereotyped, but there are too many flaws in the name. The three words feel a bit like,,, Mary Sue? I still can't tell who is Mo Ying and Mo Yuan Shadow.

I wanted to watch the radio drama, so I checked the author's Weibo... The whole article has been updated, which makes me feel that the author is as diligent as an old scalper (??_?`)

The two little dumplings are so cute [cat head][cat head][cat head]