What I Miss

It's not worth it. This is the first feeling. I don't understand it is the second. In the end, I really think it's rubbish. If you pass by, don't read it. You'll be pissed off.

I feel that there is something wrong with the heroine's outlook on life. Yun Ting did too much to Xu Changfeng. The heroine asked Xu Changfeng to leave the country. Xu Changfeng acted on his own because he was anxious and did not think of a solution. He also had no ability and died in a car accident. Yun Ting gave him money and was too kind and righteous. And it seems that Xiao Wu was also because of the heroine. The heroine also thought that Yun Ting was cold and cold. How did she think about this? . . . That Ling Xiaoxiao appeared out of nowhere, and two big bosses were being toyed with by a small employee!!!!

What's so good about Xu Changfeng, but some of his deaths are sudden and inexplicable. Xiao Wu is a scene-stealer from beginning to end, and is a mysterious and useless character line. Yun Ting was a domineering president when he first appeared, but the more he wrote, the more useless he became, and he almost became a passerby.

I really like this simple cover

Secrets leaked, is Secretary Liu Song's spy?

Yun Xiaoduo took the blame for others, right? Ling Xiaoxiao was the mastermind, right?

With these words of the male protagonist, my good impression was completely gone. I was surprised that he sounded like a playboy when he first appeared.

[In response to your request, this long review will be posted below~~] Hello Gao Zhan! I am the shop assistant [Yunluo], and I am very happy to comment on your article. This sentence is not a polite word, because your writing is very smooth and I like your narrative method very much! The choice of words and sentences made me feel comfortable while reading! But when I searched for your article, I discovered a problem. There are too many people named after "What I Miss". Among them, the great god-level one is the big bad wolf with wings, by the still water. It is difficult for readers to find you by just searching. I suggest you search it first when choosing a name next time. The name isn't recognizable enough. There is also the issue of harmonious words. It is recommended to preview the copy first to see if any words have been harmonized~ There is no problem with updating. The author is very diligent and updates 3,000 times a day. After talking about these superficial things, let's talk about the article. The article is generally good in description, but it is of a relatively slow type. The so-called slow-burning means that there is no contradiction at the beginning to attract readers to read on. The author may think - I already have a contradiction. The male protagonist and the female protagonist both appear and meet and bicker with each other. Isn't this a good contradiction? Answer: The contradictions are too old-fashioned, not focused enough, and not sharp enough. It is said that these days, only the fight is eye-catching (ah!). If this story starts with a blind date, then the fight between the male and female protagonists will be more intense! If you want to highlight the heroine's calmness, let the situation become less controllable! For example! The opening scene shows the female supporting character calling for emergency help, and then the heroine rushes over in an orderly manner! With this hot start as a foreshadowing, will everything be worry-free? The answer is of course no! Next, we have to throw away a series of baggage. For example, the quarrel between the male and female protagonists makes the conflict even more intense! These details all depend on the author's personal attention. My suggestion is to tell it in chunks, a quarrel, a marriage, something like that. Second, there is the issue of character and plot settings. The urban romance aspect, such as the blind date plot, and the setting that the male protagonist is noble and the female protagonist is calm, is a bit like an old plot. What's even more terrible is that the setting of "calmness" is very transparent. The heroine can be paranoid or shady, but if she just says she is calm and doesn't pay attention, she will become transparent. What about the male protagonist? Noble, sinister, and interested in the heroine from the beginning, it sounds good, but once everyone writes about it, it becomes too superficial. To sum up, the main problem of the article is not the writing style nor the copywriting, but that it is too facial-like and needs to be made unique and more recognizable. Finally, I want to say that there are still a lot of readers who like to read this type of article. As long as the author makes slight changes to make the article more unique, more and more people will read it. Remember to update 3,000 times a day and apply for the list on time! (PS: Urban romance has a lot to offer. The author should practice his writing skills, calm down, think about the plot carefully, and don't pay too much attention to the data. If he writes a few more books, he might be able to publish them one day!) Finally, I wish the author a happy and comfortable stay in Jinjiang! Long review from [This is a Studio] reviewer [Yun Luo]

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