This World Is Not at Peace [Crossover]

This book is quite old, feel free to write a review. Anyway, the author forgot his password (?) You can tell that you are very diligent. You don't need to read other books. You can see it just by reading this one. However, just being diligent in writing a book cannot make it a good book. I haven't read the whole book (it's so long that I don't believe anyone has actually read it all!) Because it's too long. Just reading the table of contents makes people lose their worldly desires. It would be better if the storyline is reduced appropriately. The novel is like an anime, with branches interspersed around the main plot to occasionally relax in daily life. If there are too many branches, it will be difficult to fill in the pit later. I feel that you really haven't finished telling a lot. Although the open ending that allows readers to let go of their imagination is good, your ending did not make me feel that it was an open ending. It felt like it was unfinished. Writing is the key... Another issue is perspective. The transition from third person to first person is awkward, and it reads like a student reading, or like the prompter in the narrator's hand. I tried my best to be emotionally involved, but I still felt as helpless as a narrator in a stage play. Isn't there a female protagonist's perspective? Why is the heroine's appearance rate so low? The heroine may not appear in every chapter but Conan will. It makes people think that the hero of this book is Conan and the heroine Xiaolan is. Another one is the use of punctuation marks. When I read the novel, I really just guessed whether it was a verbal description or a psychological description. If I didn't pay attention, I wouldn't know what it was saying. Again, it sounds like a narration, but there really is no dialogue, okay? Also, you really don't have to use a period in every sentence. There is also sorting. Sentences can be classified. Some completely unrelated sentences will look difficult to understand and confusing when put together. This arrangement is a rectangle on one side, which makes your eyes hurt when you look at it. There must be a transition between chapters, just like when you are dating a partner, you cannot get married and have children after the first meeting, right? When cases change, you can't just start the next one. Continuity is quite important. Less important: Another thing is that having a good introduction is a good way to increase readers. Most people (such as me) decide whether to read a novel based on reading the introduction. What you wrote feels weird, but I don't know where it is. In general, what is said above does not matter. After all, what kind of bicycle is needed to generate electricity for love? This article is recommended for Conan and people who are really short of reading. The female protagonist's appearance rate is so hard to describe that you can basically think of Conan as the protagonist. What you wrote is really okay. I can't speak clearly, so I don't know if there is any malice in what I said, but you may not be able to see my long review. I quite like the company, and some of the pre-collection ideas are quite interesting. By the way, do you still remember the password?

On a whim, I looked through my previous comments and found that in 2017, this article still had more than 700 chapters, but now it has more than 1,000 chapters, and it is completed.

It's so scary. I even doubt whether I'm worthy of reading it. Thank you so much for writing so much.

I didn't let it go, I thought the author would write a different ending, but this ending is probably the best. The black organization really can't let it go. I really finished reading it! This is the longest article I have read in a while. In fact, I still want to read a lot of extras, but I feel like I haven't finished talking about them, such as who is the other Kudo, what should Conan do, how the "love triangle" between them will develop, and whether their son from the parallel world has returned, and who is the person in the last chapter and the person in the other world. Also, Kaito and Sakutsu's daily life after being together, etc. There are so many, I feel like most of them are unfinished and left with suspense. Let the reader imagine. Finally, if you like Conan, you can give it a try, even though the protagonists are Kaito and Sakuzuki. But if you read it completely, you will find that Conan should be the protagonist. After all, the protagonist may not be present in every chapter, but Conan is really present in almost every chapter. And I think the author is writing it in the form of an anime. There may be a case in several chapters, and after the case is over, it will go directly to the next one. There is not much transition, which may seem a bit uncomfortable, but okay, just get used to it. Oh, of course, it may be that I didn't see the transition myself, haha. Ah, I accidentally wrote a long review. From a personal perspective, this article is okay. You can take a look. But the most important thing is to look at personal taste, don't force yourself to not like the article~ Okay, okay, it's really over. Then watch Spreading Flowers.

It's the first time I've seen an article of this size, and I'm a little scared.

Dad, you are not generating electricity for love, you are generating the sun. Dad is here to be worshiped by his daughter! I will definitely read it all! ! ! !

To be honest, the writing in capital letters is okay. Most of the books written in the column have more than 100 chapters or more, and they are all about generating electricity for love. This one has more than 1,000 chapters. Although there are some problems with the writing, it doesn't cost money and you don't need to care so much.

On a whim, I looked through my previous comments and found that in 2017, this article still had more than 700 chapters, but now it has more than 1,000 chapters, and it is completed.

Good guy! ! ! What a big treasureＯ(≧▽≦)Ｏ

I went straight to the last chapter. To be honest, I admire the author very much. The fan wrote so many words. But, do you know why it doesn't become popular? That's because I made a fatal flaw, writing style, writing style is the key...