Has Sayaka Had Bad Luck Today? [Crossover]

Ahhhhh why was the last chapter locked! ! ! ! ! Woohoo, who knows the content of the previous chapter?

When I saw this, I really had a strong opinion of the heroine. It can be said that the author failed to portray this character well at all. I don't know whether it was because of her ability or the plot. First of all, the protagonist acts like a spoiler in everything she does and cannot see her own position at all. If it is her idea to return to daily life, then she follows Munakata and takes precautions. It is understandable that she does not stand on Munakata's side no matter what happens, but does the protagonist live her daily life well? It can be said that everything she does in her daily life is fake. The author uses the male protagonist's words to say that the heroine's personality is very different, and I'm afraid it's not all fake. Even if you are pretending, you must have a reason. You deliberately disguise your character with a purpose. Don't tell me that it has been so long and you are now going to create a schizophrenic. Even if it is a real schizophrenia, it is written in a schizophrenic way. This kind of performance is more like an OOC character with insufficient writing skills. In fact, it is very common to make the character OOC Jinjiang in order to promote the plot, but this kind of OOC and the character and stance of the protagonist are completely different... You must know that fan fiction only has the protagonist as the main original character, and other characters are already in the anime. If you can't create a character like this, you really have to think carefully about whether to write a novel. Next is Chuuya, I don't want to talk to you about a thousand readers and a thousand Hamlets. Chuuya has appeared in many anime. His mode of dealing with the heroine is not only to get angry at her, but also to flirt with her. I saw it now in one breath. Do they have normal human communication between me and them? Although Chuuya is not so smart as to be a demon, he is not a fool, right? I even want to pull him up and wake him up. Is this the attitude of chasing girls? The same goes for Mori Ogai. In the anime, Mori Ogai doesn't have anything to say, I just don't tell you what I want you to do. I wait until you finish it and then say you made a mistake. I don't want this. What kind of leadership is this? Author, have you ever seen a leader? As a leader, he may have various personalities, but he has never made such mistakes in big things, okay? Looking at the plot again, I see that there is probably an outline of the plot here, but the things filled in here are really disgusting. It is nothing more than plot for the sake of plot. The role of the characters is almost zero. Everyone in it pretends to be inscrutable but often does nothing. You said you want to use the female protagonist to defeat the male protagonist, are you waiting for the female protagonist to take action? Are you waiting for the heroine to do whatever you want if you don't do it yourself? If there is no follow-up to the pretentious b, it will turn into a pretentious and embarrassing thing. And although the plot really promotes the development of the relationship between the male and female protagonists, the emotional drama is really written like child's play. Are there not enough excellent romances in Jinjiang? A great author can make the relationship between the male and female protagonists last forever within 5 chapters, but after writing for so long, the relationship between them is still a mess.

Ask for extras! Look at that disrespectfully!

I can't stand it any longer and leave it to future generations. The characters are OOC and none of them are likable. The heroine has awesome super powers but is useless and is just a frustrated "little pitiful". Zhongya's descriptions in the article filled my head with Kajiang's irritable Yanyi emoticons. Fans are fans, and those who come to read fanfics all have a love for the basics of the characters, right? However, this article successfully made me have a sudden drop in my opinion of the green group and the red group:) Even if the male protagonist is a hero, I can't hold it in. Maybe the mysterious power blinded my eyes, but I almost finished reading it haha... Don't ask about your thoughts, just ask and you will regret it. I regret it very much. I regret it so much that even Jiyou's red envelopes can't comfort me.

It looks good. Please drive next door and ask.

So sweet! SatisfiedLie down with peace of mind

Cover your face and scream! I hope it can be sweet until the end

It's okay, please take good care of yourself!

I feel like Dazai is a bit gay and gay.

The dark age is coming