In an age when everyone worships martial strength, An Yu was born as the legitimate son of the An family. But to everyone's disappointment, he had almost no spiritual power, and even his spirit artifact was a useless musical instrument.
An Yu was abandoned. Watch how this young qin player turns things around and rises to the very top of the continent.
Here's the mini-play version:
One day, a qin player picked up a Gu Yan. Who's Gu Yan? He's a beast whose combat power will be off the charts someday, but right now he's a nobody.
An Yu crouched down. "Hello, Gu Yan."
Gu Yan: "..." (If you want to talk to me, play the qin.)
Eight years later
An Yu: "Gu Yan, let's fight together."
Gu Yan: "Mm." (I swear I'll be your shield. Even without a contract, that vow will never change.)
This is a story about a beast and a qin player growing up and falling in love together.
Rise up, qin player!
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Note:
1v1, happy ending, naive and sweet, a protagonist with an overpowered golden finger, Western fantasy elements.
Pairing: calm, gentle qin-playing uke x devoted, ruthless, domineering seme
PS1. This is a fictional setting, so please forgive any unrealistic details. The author's updates will follow the rankings. Unless something special comes up, there will be no updates on Wednesdays; otherwise, there will be a daily update.
PS2. Please help me catch typos. The author is severely nearsighted and tends to make mistakes when typing. And don't forget to add it to your favorites: that's Mooncake's lifeline.
PS3. About the setting and level system: The literary cultivation path starts at the Qi Refining level, its first stage, followed by low, mid, and high Magic Apprentice levels, then low, mid, and high Mage levels. After that come the Imperial, Saint, and Venerable levels, and finally godhood. The martial cultivation path consists of the Qi Refining stage, low, mid, and high Warrior levels, low, mid, and high Martial Master levels, then the Imperial, Saint, and Venerable levels, and finally godhood. Both literary and martial cultivation have ten levels. During Qi Refining, cultivators decide which path to follow and lay the foundation.
About spiritual energy: Both literary and martial cultivators rely on spiritual energy. After completing Qi Refining, they each develop a specialty: martial cultivators develop battle aura, while literary cultivators develop magical power. All abilities are supported by spiritual power and mental strength.
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I saw Mrs. Muka's recommendation and walked over here⊙▽⊙
I just read it after reading the copy. I feel like my wife is really a great person (??????)?? She always has a lot of wonderful ideas. But there are really a lot of typos_(:з∠)_There are also some weird word order, probably because of my fingers hhh
And it's really short (???ε???) Every time I thought it would last two or three chapters, but the battle ended in one chapter? ? →_→I still have more to say. Jpg
There was no car at the end (*/▽\*) It's such a pity (don't make trouble) I waited for the second appearance of the character Qin (can be called a tattoo?) On the back, but I didn't see it in the end →_→hhhh
After reading the entire article, I thought about it and decided to leave a review. I have also been a writer, and coding is not easy. Writing reviews makes progress together, and you should read and cherish it.
Let's talk about the conclusion first:
1. The setting and beginning are carefully considered and may be improved upon.
2. The pace of the article is a bit fast at the end, and the ending is hasty, which is a pity.
3. I like the characters. I hope they will be more fleshed out next time.
Complete review.
... Well that's impossible.
Let's talk about the structure first.
It can be seen that the initial setting of this article is a bit of a ** style, with family, revenge, youth, and immortality cultivation. The characteristics are also waste (hiding) materials (hiding) golden fingers. The environment and atmosphere have Chinese-style connotations. The indifferent personality and the image of the piano player also match well.
Of course we know that there will always be a then.
Then - it turned into a grand epic of the Four Kingdoms war combining China and the West...
In fact, a text that combines Chinese and Western elements with a common appreciation of both local and foreign cultures will be very impressive if the setting is reasonable. However, writing in a large framework inevitably involves the test of Chunqiu's writing skills. How to satisfy your own setting within a limited number of words without skipping scenes may be very difficult for most writers. , It can be seen that this article was somewhat unable to support the world view setting system. The Eastern Dragon and God should have been able to pave the way for at least three times more content based on the current number of words, but judging from the ending, it probably has no intention to complete it, which is a pity.
If I want to give you an opinion, if you care about literary skills and reasonable imagination, it may be more free to write from a small setting in a small world.
The second is the content. I have to be harsh here, so please forgive me, the author (a man?).
I know several wives in the writing circle, and there is no pressure to write about corporate conspiracies and XXOO. Every time there is an update, I and other squatters will sigh: [What a great imagination! It's a pity that we don't have such a writing style! ] The wife replied: [Fart! Of course you guys, those innocent girls who are still in school, can't even write these P's!
The words are rough and the theory is not rough, practice brings true knowledge.
Some of the content in the article is indeed as mentioned by the netizens who left the message. There are deficiencies in it, such as the Odin economy and mainland politics. I personally have reservations. Of course, writing an online article is not a paper for a scholastic school. I can only say that in future writing, I hope to be more reasonable as possible.
The road is long and long, so I will search high and low. It is not easy to be an author. Writing online articles is a small business with small profits but quick turnover. After browsing around in the comment area, I can't help but sigh. Although the revolution of seeking truth from facts still needs to make progress, I still leave a comment in the spirit of encouragement. I also hope that the author will not be discouraged by the comment area, persevere, and overcome the bad news.
The piano player will always become a saint, and the writer will always be mature and encouraged.
Give the author a thumbs up!
Then let me talk about my own opinions. The author writes well, but there are still some shortcomings, such as the grasp of rhythm and the creation of characters. The description is not very graphic. In fact, many places can be more detailed, and the characters' personalities are not clear. These aspects can be improved. But the plot is exciting and the plot arrangement is very reasonable, which is also a big reason why it attracted me.
Maybe it's because I'm picky, but I think this article is above average. I hope the author will continue to improve!
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I saw Mrs. Muka's recommendation and walked over here⊙▽⊙ I just read it after reading the copy. I feel like my wife is really a great person (??????)?? She always has a lot of wonderful ideas. But there are really a lot of typos_(:з∠)_There are also some weird word order, probably because of my fingers hhh And it's really short (???ε???) Every time I thought it would last two or three chapters, but the battle ended in one chapter? ? →_→I still have more to say. Jpg There was no car at the end (*/▽\*) It's such a pity (don't make trouble) I waited for the second appearance of the character Qin (can be called a tattoo?) On the back, but I didn't see it in the end →_→hhhh
After reading the entire article, I thought about it and decided to leave a review. I have also been a writer, and coding is not easy. Writing reviews makes progress together, and you should read and cherish it. Let's talk about the conclusion first: 1. The setting and beginning are carefully considered and may be improved upon. 2. The pace of the article is a bit fast at the end, and the ending is hasty, which is a pity. 3. I like the characters. I hope they will be more fleshed out next time. Complete review. ... Well that's impossible. Let's talk about the structure first. It can be seen that the initial setting of this article is a bit of a ** style, with family, revenge, youth, and immortality cultivation. The characteristics are also waste (hiding) materials (hiding) golden fingers. The environment and atmosphere have Chinese-style connotations. The indifferent personality and the image of the piano player also match well. Of course we know that there will always be a then. Then - it turned into a grand epic of the Four Kingdoms war combining China and the West... In fact, a text that combines Chinese and Western elements with a common appreciation of both local and foreign cultures will be very impressive if the setting is reasonable. However, writing in a large framework inevitably involves the test of Chunqiu's writing skills. How to satisfy your own setting within a limited number of words without skipping scenes may be very difficult for most writers. , It can be seen that this article was somewhat unable to support the world view setting system. The Eastern Dragon and God should have been able to pave the way for at least three times more content based on the current number of words, but judging from the ending, it probably has no intention to complete it, which is a pity. If I want to give you an opinion, if you care about literary skills and reasonable imagination, it may be more free to write from a small setting in a small world. The second is the content. I have to be harsh here, so please forgive me, the author (a man?). I know several wives in the writing circle, and there is no pressure to write about corporate conspiracies and XXOO. Every time there is an update, I and other squatters will sigh: [What a great imagination! It's a pity that we don't have such a writing style! ] The wife replied: [Fart! Of course you guys, those innocent girls who are still in school, can't even write these P's! The words are rough and the theory is not rough, practice brings true knowledge. Some of the content in the article is indeed as mentioned by the netizens who left the message. There are deficiencies in it, such as the Odin economy and mainland politics. I personally have reservations. Of course, writing an online article is not a paper for a scholastic school. I can only say that in future writing, I hope to be more reasonable as possible. The road is long and long, so I will search high and low. It is not easy to be an author. Writing online articles is a small business with small profits but quick turnover. After browsing around in the comment area, I can't help but sigh. Although the revolution of seeking truth from facts still needs to make progress, I still leave a comment in the spirit of encouragement. I also hope that the author will not be discouraged by the comment area, persevere, and overcome the bad news. The piano player will always become a saint, and the writer will always be mature and encouraged.
Give the author a thumbs up! Then let me talk about my own opinions. The author writes well, but there are still some shortcomings, such as the grasp of rhythm and the creation of characters. The description is not very graphic. In fact, many places can be more detailed, and the characters' personalities are not clear. These aspects can be improved. But the plot is exciting and the plot arrangement is very reasonable, which is also a big reason why it attracted me. Maybe it's because I'm picky, but I think this article is above average. I hope the author will continue to improve!
Congratulations on the completion (?????), Catching insects is about collecting, not mobile phones_(:_‖∠)_
Come on (?>ω<*?)
Come on↖(^ω^)↗
It's actually Yaizhen, ah, they are all sons of dragons anyway
Come on (?>ω<*?)
What is it_(:_∠)_
Go home(?????)