The writing style occasionally goes haywire. The early plot may be a little dark, and the logic may get a little convoluted. Warning.
Some characters may be OOC due to my personal interpretation. Warning.
Contains headcanons and various original characters. Warning. Some changes to the original setting. Warning.
This is the story of a girl belonging to Root and her growth _(:3"∠)_ That's pretty much it.
The heroine is a little lacking in social intelligence, and her intelligence often goes offline too. She has some personality flaws (probably).
_(:3"∠)_ This is an extremely slow-burn story... The focus is on her growth, actually _(:_"∠)_ Don't ask me who the male lead is (I think the protagonist's growth is more important, and the romance comes second, orz).
The early plot moves incredibly slowly and has foreshadowing, so feel free to guess (enough already).
One last warning: All the original characters portrayed here are based solely on the author's personal interpretation. If you don't like that, please click the X in the upper-right corner. Thanks.
The inspiration for starting this story came from a Nightwish song called "The Escapist" and a sudden burst of imagination _(:з"∠)_ The title translates to "someone who escapes reality" _(:з"∠)_ (though it may not necessarily be relevant).
_(:3"∠)_ I don't think my skills are very good... That's about it. I hope you'll offer plenty of guidance.
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Could it be that the heroine is his biological child? Shock
I think if you want to get rid of the status quo quickly, then pray that there will be casualties in Squad 17 as soon as the combat operation starts]←'Get rid of' the status quo
_(:3∠)_Actually, these chapters feel a bit confusing, but maybe it's my IQ problem... Right?
I spent a few days off and on and finally finished reading it. The writing style and subject matter are generally very good, and the content is very deep. It was so deep that I felt that my IQ was very tight [dead eyes]
How can I put it, the setting that the heroine was born at the root is very eye-catching. After all, there are very few heroines who are not of the same generation as Xiaoqiang, and even fewer are born in a dark place like the root. It is almost difficult to see a heroine who is not born well and does not have snake syndrome←_←
In terms of character, after reading the whole text, I feel that the heroine's character is very close to the root characteristics, she is very understanding, and she is very aware of current affairs. Therefore, in recent chapters, it has been suddenly written that the heroine has some problems with her emotional intelligence. It feels a bit abrupt, like a setting imposed for the plot... Maybe it is my illusion.
As for the writing style, the writing style is very good (at least better than mine), and the thinking is very comprehensive. I guess I wanted to use this article to describe a protagonist with a deep and complicated life experience, so some parts of the writing are a bit obscure, giving people an unclear feeling.
In my opinion, the real high level is to achieve a sense of urgency in the ordinary. Obviously the article seems very straightforward and straightforward, but when you think about it after reading it, you will feel like "Oh, I didn't even expect that." Therefore, you can try to write more straightforward and smooth in the future, just like telling a story face to face. Of course there should be suspense, but the corresponding foreshadowing should be more obvious. After all, most online articles are read quickly, and few people waste time thinking about it in their brains after reading novels.
Well, that's it anyway, just a little personal opinion, just take a look~
I originally wanted to write a long review, but my thoughts are still stuck at the moment, so I'll just leave it like this ╮(╯_╰)╭In fact, I've probably written everything I need to say in my previous comments, so please continue to work hard in the future, okay!
Speaking of the relationship with Danzo, am I the only one who thought that it might be something like Birdsong's parents and elders who had a good relationship with Danzo (it's not impossible that they had a life-saving grace) and then left him alone on his deathbed or something?
The boy who knocked on the window must be a dead man. He probably has some unclear relationship with the bird song, and he may have died because of the bird song. The formation of the bird song's current personality should be related to him←_← There has been such speculation since the boy appeared in the first chapter...
Now I get a headache when I see the word guess ==
It feels like Birdsong has suddenly become stupid, even though it looked very smart before←_←
Seeing this, I suddenly felt that Danzo had an undeniable relationship with his predecessor, Birdsong. [Hey
Che's missing sister must have something to do with Birdsong, but I don't want to guess what the relationship is [dead eyes]
[Dead eyes] I have completely given up thinking about the plot, my brain circuit has become a knot, and then I am in a bad mood because I realize that my IQ is not enough...
So, I'll wait for Da Da to reveal the secret himself_(:3∠)_
In my mind, the heroine should have dark hair and dark eyes?
She must be very petite, and her appearance is sweet, but because she has too many things on her mind, she always has a small face. If she really smiles, she will be like a spring flower← ←
As for growing up, I think she will be like Hinata girl, but her evil spirit will be very strong, and a glare can make a child cry...?
Could it be that the heroine is his biological child? Shock
I think if you want to get rid of the status quo quickly, then pray that there will be casualties in Squad 17 as soon as the combat operation starts]←'Get rid of' the status quo _(:3∠)_Actually, these chapters feel a bit confusing, but maybe it's my IQ problem... Right?
I spent a few days off and on and finally finished reading it. The writing style and subject matter are generally very good, and the content is very deep. It was so deep that I felt that my IQ was very tight [dead eyes] How can I put it, the setting that the heroine was born at the root is very eye-catching. After all, there are very few heroines who are not of the same generation as Xiaoqiang, and even fewer are born in a dark place like the root. It is almost difficult to see a heroine who is not born well and does not have snake syndrome←_← In terms of character, after reading the whole text, I feel that the heroine's character is very close to the root characteristics, she is very understanding, and she is very aware of current affairs. Therefore, in recent chapters, it has been suddenly written that the heroine has some problems with her emotional intelligence. It feels a bit abrupt, like a setting imposed for the plot... Maybe it is my illusion. As for the writing style, the writing style is very good (at least better than mine), and the thinking is very comprehensive. I guess I wanted to use this article to describe a protagonist with a deep and complicated life experience, so some parts of the writing are a bit obscure, giving people an unclear feeling. In my opinion, the real high level is to achieve a sense of urgency in the ordinary. Obviously the article seems very straightforward and straightforward, but when you think about it after reading it, you will feel like "Oh, I didn't even expect that." Therefore, you can try to write more straightforward and smooth in the future, just like telling a story face to face. Of course there should be suspense, but the corresponding foreshadowing should be more obvious. After all, most online articles are read quickly, and few people waste time thinking about it in their brains after reading novels. Well, that's it anyway, just a little personal opinion, just take a look~ I originally wanted to write a long review, but my thoughts are still stuck at the moment, so I'll just leave it like this ╮(╯_╰)╭In fact, I've probably written everything I need to say in my previous comments, so please continue to work hard in the future, okay!
Speaking of the relationship with Danzo, am I the only one who thought that it might be something like Birdsong's parents and elders who had a good relationship with Danzo (it's not impossible that they had a life-saving grace) and then left him alone on his deathbed or something?
The boy who knocked on the window must be a dead man. He probably has some unclear relationship with the bird song, and he may have died because of the bird song. The formation of the bird song's current personality should be related to him←_← There has been such speculation since the boy appeared in the first chapter...
Now I get a headache when I see the word guess ==
It feels like Birdsong has suddenly become stupid, even though it looked very smart before←_←
Seeing this, I suddenly felt that Danzo had an undeniable relationship with his predecessor, Birdsong. [Hey Che's missing sister must have something to do with Birdsong, but I don't want to guess what the relationship is [dead eyes]
[Dead eyes] I have completely given up thinking about the plot, my brain circuit has become a knot, and then I am in a bad mood because I realize that my IQ is not enough... So, I'll wait for Da Da to reveal the secret himself_(:3∠)_
In my mind, the heroine should have dark hair and dark eyes? She must be very petite, and her appearance is sweet, but because she has too many things on her mind, she always has a small face. If she really smiles, she will be like a spring flower← ← As for growing up, I think she will be like Hinata girl, but her evil spirit will be very strong, and a glare can make a child cry...?