Escape from the Hospital Ward

So cute~

At first glance, he looks like the dean...

Please don't care about the ratings. Many of them are forgotten and I didn't see them.

It feels great

Review of "Escape from the Sick Building" Hello, dear author, I am Jie Zhi from Pu Miao Grocery Store. I am very happy to take your order. First of all, I must say, author, I am sorry for you! Because of some messy things, and JJ somehow took away the author's order... Mr. Jie suddenly forgot about it until he just checked the order... Ahem, I beg you to forgive me QAQ Entering the topic, this review is only the opinion of one person. If there is any inconvenience, please forgive me. Let's talk about the copywriting first. From the copywriting, we can tell that this should be a dark Danmei article. The CPs are a perverted doctor and a yandere shota, which are just cute, so Mr. Jie began to secretly click on the text. One thing that must be mentioned is that first of all, we must be clear that this is a short story, and the focus of the short story is the plot. The background of this article is arranged in the morgue at the beginning, and it goes directly to the beginning of the story. This is done well, but the background introduction of the protagonist later is a bit long-winded, accounting for almost half of the word count of that chapter. The author can completely simplify it and directly say that the protagonist loves money, is lonely, crazy, has ulterior secrets, etc. Then, whether it was the degree of decay of the corpse at the beginning or the actions of young shota, the doctor seemed to feel like vomiting. However, in the author's setting, doctors actually often deal with corpses, and there are many things like dissection. Generally speaking, he should be immune to these things. In order to confirm this, Jiechaojun specifically asked several gay friends who are doctors. Whether they are women or men, they all told that these things are completely indifferent to them. Then, Xiao Zhengtai was taken home by the doctor. Seeing this, Mr. Jiechao was actually a little strange. The doctor just took him home like this? A four or five-year-old child suddenly appeared in the morgue and behaved strangely. He didn't cry or fuss in front of the corpse, but the doctor didn't feel suspicious? Immediately afterwards, Xiao Zhengtai came back from the dead. The strange thing is that the doctor seemed a bit "timid" in the morgue before, but when faced with this incident, he was unusually calm. Wasn't it a bit inappropriate? For the following story, Mr. Jie Zhao couldn't help but give the author a thumbs up. Through the eyes of others, he told a twisted story bit by bit. The doctor's perversion and the weirdness of the young shot were all handled very well. At the end of the story, it seemed that both of them committed suicide, but in fact, because of their death, they entered a new beginning - the end of the world. After reading the whole story, the whole story is exciting, attractive and novel. However, the pace in the first part is a bit slow and the pace in the second half speeds up. I hope the author will pay attention next time. Another point that must be pointed out is that, like the previous article, there are slightly more typos... Summary: At the beginning of the story, some plots were not handled well enough, the pace was slow, and the doctor's character was a little unstable. The plot in the later parts was relatively accelerated, and at the same time, it was more exciting and unexpected. In short, it is a good short story, the story is very interesting, and it is very popular with Jie Zhao. Thank you to the author for writing a good article for everyone. I hope you will continue to work hard! =V= [Produced by Pumiao Grocery Store·Jiezhaojun]

I have never read this kind of article about the beginning of the end. I couldn't praise it more!

When will it be updated? ? ? ? ? ? ?

... Let me ask again... Are you willing to split the attack? ? Who is the main attacker?

Author I will cook her and feed her to you!

There is a lot of red on the second floor...