A Record of Getting It On

After reading the end, I felt a little sad, and I checked it specifically, but I couldn't find the lower part that the author mentioned. According to my long-term experience of reading Danmei novels, the main subject may have traveled through time, because he knows more than he did before he lost his memory, and his personality is different. Of course, it may also be that he has changed because he forgot some things. But he turned out to be vigilant. At the beginning, he wanted to pinch the neck of Cannon Fodder "I just don't like him, so Cannon Fodder". Why not be more vigilant? He believed it just because of a trial, haha ​​→_→, and now the main subject is still losing his memory. I am a little curious about how the author reminded him of the truth. Why did the main subject appear in the opening scene, him and Cannon Fodder, and everything about him. What kind of clan he said was his, and why it was cursed. Preliminary judgment showed that it was attractive. The reason why it was cursed might be due to an irreconcilable conflict between its ancestors and someone, or the way of heaven. In addition, the introduction says that the main attacker lets the main attacker chase him. This is a deep sadistic love affair. The main attacker has ruined him, so he works hard to get revenge, or he doesn't believe it and thinks that the main attacker has some reason. This is also said in the last chapter. It is a curse, and it is the latter type that is somewhat unbelievable. I have a lot of imagination, but I can't think of anything. If there is a lower part, can you provide a link to the lower part? I like this novel very much. Come on, zero supports you.

First of all, I don't know when I can see the lower part. Secondly, don't be together with someone who has hurt you, because he can hurt you once for one reason, and he can hurt you a second or third time for the same reason... Finally, even if there is a lower part of this article, to me, he is a tragedy, and I am heartbroken~~~~(>_

Automatically bring in the look of a primary school math teacher

OH NO, when I saw this ending, I thought it was BE. Then I read what the author had to say and it turned out that there is still a part.

Come on, come on,!! /Update important

Hello, Dad. First of all, I want to talk to you about the type and style of the article. Da Da set the title of the article as "The Future Life of Non-Humans", but marked the type of article as alternate history. In this way, will it disappoint many readers who want to read fictional historical articles, and also lose many readers who want to read future articles? Here, it is recommended to significantly change the article type to fantasy future. Furthermore, DaDa sets the style of his work as a serious drama, but judging from the content of the copywriting and articles, DaDa's works include a lot of complaints and some Internet vocabulary. So, is it possible to change the label of the work style to Easy? Maybe the majority of readers will not take it seriously, but there are also many readers who choose articles to read based on style. If readers who want to watch a serious drama click on this article, they will abandon the article as soon as they see the copy and content; if readers who want to watch a light-hearted genre click on this article, then the label of a drama will make them give up. Second, I would like to talk to you about the amnesia aspect of the work. In fact, to be honest, many people are quite immune to the amnesia story, and some people even abandon the article as soon as they see amnesia. But if you look closely, the protagonist's position as amnesia still has special meaning. At least it gives the protagonist a male character. However, when the protagonist first lost his memory, his performance was not very empty. On the contrary, he quickly adapted to this "weird" world. He seems to be very smooth in fighting, dealing with interpersonal relationships, etc., And his knowledge of machinery is no less than those who have not lost their memory. This makes people very confused. Didn't you lose your memory, the protagonist? In fact, it is recommended that you set a limit on amnesia. For example, the protagonist just forgets which stage he went from to which stage, or he only forgets some special things but the general world view still exists, and so on. Otherwise, it really makes no sense for the protagonist to easily adapt to such a fast-paced and dangerous world. Third, let's talk about the character setting with Dada. In fact, there is no big problem with the character setting of this article. The characteristics of each character are relatively obvious, making it easy for readers to identify each character in the article. However, I still want to raise a question about the protagonist. At the beginning of the article, the protagonist appears to be very stubborn and independent in all aspects. But then in the seventh chapter, he wrote a sentence like "He decided to beg Du Wei to protect them and his friends even if he knelt on the ground and begged." Isn't this character's character contradictory? The protagonist is very stubborn and quite talented in thinking ability. Shouldn't the first thing he thinks of be to make himself stronger? Why did he think of relying on another person to survive in the first place? Moreover, Dada also mentioned in the previous chapters that the protagonist has lost his memory and is still very wary of this sudden appearance of a male protagonist. Therefore, it is recommended to delete this sentence significantly, or to rephrase it. Finally, let's talk about the great writing style. In fact, Da Da Da is quite skilled in description. At least he presents this strange world in front of readers, and the description of some fighting scenes is also understandable. However, I have a small suggestion. Da Da did not master the use of punctuation marks very well in the dialogue part, and the same person misused colons before finishing his words. The correct sentence pattern should be: "..." So-and-so said, "..." Because the colon should be an independent and complete sentence. In addition, Dada wrote the word "bitch" in Chapter 6. No matter what, it is impossible for a man to call another man a "bitch." Of course, this is just a personal understanding. If you cannot accept it, you can ignore it. I wish you a happy writing and may inspiration come to you. The above comes from Tian Tian, ​​a clerk at Sha Miao Long Review Shop. I look forward to having the opportunity to write a long review for you in the future.

Don't mind if I leave a comment for myself. I'm stuck. Take a day off and think about the direction...

Hahahahaha, come on, come on