The Matchmaker Says

The long comment below is so long, it must be true love!

I quite like this style of short story. Miao Jun's large writing style gives people a relaxed feeling. Although it is a short article, the emotions are well brewed. What a lovely short article. And what did you say before, please give me some opinions... I don't have any particular opinions on what to do... I just feel that the male protagonist's speech was a bit too fast, but overall it is more appropriate to put it in the article. After all, it is a short article and the story is very smooth. I like the heroine's character very much. DaDa seems to like to use Zhenzhen XX. Personally, I think this usage looks very cute (but it is said that my cuteness and other aspects are quite strange). Before reading the article, I just wanted to find an article to relieve my bad mood, but DaDa's article really brought me a feeling of happiness. I quite like the male and female protagonists in this film. The setting of the female protagonist being Yue Lao is a bit cute~. When I first saw the male protagonist descending to earth, I instantly understood the identity of the male and female protagonists. At that time, I was still thinking about what to do if someone else's name was written on the wedding certificate. Then slowly reading down, I saw the male protagonist's decisive action of changing his name in the end, and suddenly I felt that he should actually do this. . . The language may be so confusing that you can't understand it, so please ignore it. The female protagonist sometimes feels a bit naughty and casual (if there is a problem that does not match the adult character, it must be my problem...) And the male protagonist's gentleness with a hint of strength feels particularly overpowering the female protagonist. This male protagonist is also my favorite character! Then I use the author's words of bad temper, but there is also a hint of bad temper (maybe it is only for the heroine?). Remember her name, her identity, and the way she wraps the red thread. What should I do if it feels cute? This pair feels all kinds of wonderful. The female protagonist's feelings for the male protagonist are also like this: She used to watch other people's love and love, and then she was directly tied up by the male protagonist's strength and then slowly captured by the male protagonist's gentleness. Finally, she struggled for a long time and almost gave up, but was forced to confess her love by the male protagonist. To be honest, I prefer male protagonists who are emotionally strong. The short article is really well written and heart-warming in every way. Moreover, although Yue Lao went to set up a line and got someone else's line into his own hands, although I had seen it before, it was not handled well. This article feels that although the relationship between the male and female protagonists seems to be only a few thousand words and not very long, it still feels very natural when I read it. I like the big short articles, please keep reading firmly, and I will continue reading if I have time! The author's writing is very fluent. It is a short article that uses no more or less space to narrate the story of two people. There is nothing earth-shattering, nor is there anything particularly heartbreaking or sadistic. This kind of article is more attractive. And another good thing about the author is that when reading the article, you can find that the author divided the article into many parts, but when publishing the article, there are only three chapters, unlike some authors who divide a paragraph into N paragraphs for various reasons such as editing chapters. This, I personally think, is particularly worthy of commendation. Well done! The large writing style is quite suitable for writing this type of article. I wonder if Da Da deliberately used this style of writing to write this type of article? Or do you prefer writing in this style? And the emotional aspect is handled well. In ordinary short stories, the emotions are always not written smoothly enough. However, this article does not give people the feeling of instant feelings or feelings that come out of nowhere, as if they seep into the bone marrow little by little, and are unforgettable in the end. Thumbs up for this. I hope you will work hard! After writing this type of article, you can also change your writing style. I look forward to great follow-up works.

Tsundere is so cool and so cute! Dear author, please update quickly! I really want to read Chapter 3! From then on, I devoted my whole heart to the goddess