
Fated Calamity: Mu Xuanying X Mo Yu
命劫 穆玄英×莫雨
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 66k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 11y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
8Chapters
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9.0Score
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49Comments
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In fact, although some details need to be discussed, I think there is no problem with the be setting. First of all, rebirth does not solve all problems. Not to mention that even if the body becomes smaller, Maomao's mind will still show how much martial arts he can exert when he is decades old. Even if the martial arts is there, the illness of the two people is still a big problem that cannot be solved. I don't think there's anything wrong with the idea of living in seclusion. If the young master goes crazy and kills the Mo family, he can go crazy and kill his neighbors. Moreover, Xiao Yu originally had a lonely plot during the Daoxiang Village period, so it makes sense to live in seclusion and not get along with her neighbors. It's also possible that the two children were found in seclusion. As long as you start in Daoxiang Village, you can't avoid the crime of having a jade. If you say you didn't dig it at all, I don't know who the bad guys will believe it. Then there is Maomao's choice. Going downstairs to Wanhua is actually no different from going to Haoqi League. Mo Yu's character cannot be left at all. According to the setting, as long as Mo Yu cannot cure his madness, he will be a time bomb. To get rid of the evil ones, Maomao would have to sacrifice himself. As long as he could bear it, it would be fine. The Valley of the Evils was a place with no rules and only fists. In fact, there would be no trouble in front of Mao Mao, because Mo Yu really knows how to take action. On the decent side, he is just BB and the other If Fang strikes first, he may punish the person who strikes first, and judge whether BB is right or not, but there are not so many messy villains, as long as the fight is won, it is the last word, so there will be no one who causes trouble, which is equivalent to asking Mo Yu to come and kill me, which is asking for death. But there will be a lot of gossip behind the scenes, it depends on whether Maomao can bear it. Maomao is definitely not willing to use force to establish authority. In this case, there is a certain chance of he, it depends on whether something will happen on the battlefield, but it is normal to set it to be. Mo Yu knows mentally that he will die at any time like this. This is the case in the Valley of the Evil. If you expect to live happily in the Valley of the Evil, it really depends on your luck. Finally, there is the if line of meeting and not knowing each other. Don't say this is the most reasonable. As long as Maomao can be invisible in Daoxiang Village. There are more than four of us in Daoxiang Village. Like Xiaohe, I guess everyone will not remember it. Then in Mo Yu's memory, Maomao will wait for an appointment. Yu Xiaohe died, and then Maomao faked his death and changed his identity to go to the Haoqi Alliance under his real name. However, he could not tell anyone the real situation, including Xiaoyue, otherwise it would be impossible to hide it from Mo Yu. Mo Yu was not a fool to create a Truman Show and still hid it. Maomao must not say that she is Mu Xuanying in Daoxiang Village, and then let Maomao die in Daoxiang Village. Everyone in Daoxiang Village will think so, and then wait for the time to go to Haoqi League as Mu Xuanying again and make up another wandering story. In this way, it is very reasonable to completely become someone Mo Yu doesn't know, and then die in Mo Yu's hands.
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In fact, compared to the dream extra at the end of "Ghost Network III: A Dream in Qin Ling", this one is more like a dream - I am definitely not saying this because of BE, but the plot is indeed unreasonable! In fact, most BE will not happen unless it is seriously OOC! The author is purely doing BE for the sake of BE! (In memory of those tissues I used to wipe my nose and tears) First of all, the first life is the origin of BE. Although many people say that Haoqi Alliance is a hypocrite, Xie Yuan's character is not a hypocrite! Deliberately taking advantage of his feelings, he designed Maomao to kill his beloved with his own hands. To be honest, Xiao Sha was not that cruel to Wang Yifeng (of course he couldn't do it)! Taking ten thousand steps back really happened. When the Hao Qi Alliance designed to kill Mo Yu, even if Maomao didn't follow and left, even if he wanted to repay his kindness, he would not stay in the Hao Qi Alliance. He would leave. If he took another ten thousand steps back, how could he survive so long on the basis that his Three Yang Jue Meridian had been hit again? If the Three Yang Absolute Meridians cannot be solved, then no matter how good Mu Xuanying is, he cannot become the heir (this is also the most likely to cause the BE ending). Of course, let's make some changes here. First, Mao Mao's Sanyang Absolute Meridian has been solved (that's why he confessed to Mo Yu), and then Hao Qi Alliance just wanted to beat the mandarin ducks. Mo Yu's death was really an accident and not a deliberate design for Mao Mao to kill his loved one by mistake. Then came the Anshi Rebellion. After the war, the setting of Mao Mao rushing to the streets could be true - but the author's setting determined that it was definitely false! It must be a dream! Then came the second week. How could Maomao turn a blind eye when Mo Yu would have attacks from time to time? What's more, Mo Yu himself will not sit still and wait for death! So they should have gone directly to Wanhua to seek medical treatment (after all, the reborn Mu Xuanying was not as weak as Maomao and could save himself), but Wanhua couldn't do anything (this is the plot of the third episode). At this time, Maomao should look to the Valley of the Evil (the fourth episode)! After all, Mu Xuanying may not know the secrets of the martial arts between Mo Yu and Wang Yifeng, but he will not know that the one who poisoned Mo Yu was King Tie Xiao Yao'er! Therefore, the BE ending of Mo Yu dying in battle in the fourth episode of the plot is also possible (it is also another key BE possibility, that is, dying in the Anshi Rebellion), but it will definitely not be like the author's fourth episode where Mu Xuanying did not start a fight against the Langya Army! He will definitely go to the battlefield then! Therefore, the failure of the first rebirth and the failure of the second rebirth are all nonsense, and the details of the failure of the third rebirth are also wrong! This is all a nightmare and so illogical! Then there is the fifth week of the imprisoned PLAY, which is the fourth rebirth. Because Mo Yu died in the battle, Mu Xuanying would hate An Lushan and Shi Siming very much, and would be afraid that something would happen to Mo Yu - but at that time, Mo Yu was already a descendant of the Hongchen Sect! Looking at Wang Yifeng's description, you can tell that this is simply a mind-reading ability. How could Mo Yu not notice Mu Xuanying's obvious emotions? ! So this BE is also unreasonable! Mo Yu will be aware of Maomao's admiration, despair and panic, but how to point out the facts in advance is another matter... Only the false Mo Yu can be so stupid, so slow and ignorant, and end up cheating himself and Mao Mao! Then comes the sixth episode, which is the last rebirth. This is also the most terrifying version. Mo Yu, who doesn't know Maomao at all, what will be the ending between them? However, it is very difficult to hide one's true nature. For Mu Xuanying, who is still worried that people in the Haoqi Alliance will be hurt by their investment in her, it is actually difficult for people to completely believe that he is an indifferent person (Daoxiang Village was just a child before and did not pay attention to him deliberately, but the Haoqi Alliance pays special attention to him and will definitely find some clues). Well, this is the biggest bug exposed in a few words! In short, I firmly believe that the ending chapter that the author deleted was not that Mo Yu's brother had a soul to follow Mao Mao and hit the HE ending at the end, but that Mao Mao woke up from his dream with a startle, and then Mo Yu strangely touched Mao Mao who was covered in cold sweat and asked him what happened? Have a nightmare?
Mo Yu obviously bullied Mao Mao, so he wasn't so gentle!…
I'm really asking for him and extras (ฅ∀
Please write a side story about the return journey. I like the deep love in the book, but I don't like the ending. Mo Yu who forgot about Mao Mao is so pathetic. Angel Mao Mao is so pitiful. Please write a side story about the return journey.
I felt so sad when I read this book. I would rather they were separated in two places like in the game and stayed side by side during the Anshi Rebellion. Even if one person died in the battle and the other lived alone, the person who died would definitely be waiting for the other person on the Naihe Bridge. After crossing the Naihe Bridge, they would be in love for the whole world. They would finally be happy with each other. I have never let this life down. I like the deep love in this book, but I don't like the ending. I always feel that they shouldn't be like this, so I beg to change the ending a lot or continue it. I always feel that Mo Yu who forgets Mao Mao is very sad, and Xuan Ying who has to bear everything is very sad!
I felt so sad when I read this book. I would rather they were separated in two places like in the game and stayed side by side during the Anshi Rebellion. Even if one person died in the battle and the other lived alone, the person who died would definitely be waiting for the other person on the Naihe Bridge. They would walk across the Naihe Bridge and have a lifelong love. They would finally be happy with each other. , I have never let down this life. I like the deep love in this book, but I don't like the ending. I always feel that they shouldn't be like this, so I ask for a big change in the ending or a continuation. I always feel that Mo Yu who forgets Mao Mao is very sad, and Xuan Ying who carries everything on his back is very sad.
Author, please report to the district service ID sect and wait for me.