
The Moon Was There Then: Chu Liuxiang and Hu Tiehua
当时明月在(楚留香胡铁花)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 70k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
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22Chapters
319Favorites
9.1Score
4.8kClicks per chapter
196Comments
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I recently rewatched Chu Liuxiang, and I still think this guy is really a bastard. But the Chu Xiangshuai described by the author makes people couldn't help but smile and praise him as a good attacker (hey, the point seems to be wrong). It's a pity that my talent and knowledge are limited and I can't write a better review. Looking forward to more Chu and Hu texts from the author
The so-called random play means divergent thinking at the surface, and the following is unclear. Brief comments on one or two and write them down. Cun Cun's fanfic is one of the highest quality I've ever read in Chu Hu Wen. I read it relatively early, and it seemed that it wasn't finished yet. At the end, I climbed the wall and came back and found that it had been finished a long time ago. My habit is that fans who have touched my feelings must write reviews, not to mention that it is a relatively rare CP among Gu Long novels and fanfics, so I decided to make up for the reviews all at once. It is well known that Chu Liuxiang is a character, but among all the protagonists in Gu Long's novels, my impression of him can only be considered average. Occasionally, I want to beat him up. At this time, his status is lower than average. For example, if I look at it from a pure perspective, sometimes I will think that this guy is simply a sentimental and natural scumbag. My preference for characters in novels depends entirely on the storyline. I never think that those who have a "gloomy past" are forgivable and worthy of liking when they commit crimes. Therefore, no matter how suave and talented that person is, or what others say is outrageous, I still don't like those characters with a story trend like "I have a dark past that oppresses me - I grew crooked in a rage - I will never admit my mistakes, there is nothing wrong at all, and any mistakes are all your fault." Sympathy at best. Some people say that when reading novels, "I would rather love a true villain than a hypocrite." But in addition to hypocrites, there are many characters with temperaments, and they may not necessarily be entangled in the two strange and narrow circles of true villains and hypocrites. For example, Hu Tiehua. He is a sexual person. Laugh when you are happy, cry when you are moved, and curse when you are angry. Love, hate, and hatred are so clear. He will help without hesitation when needed, he will jump in when he is left out, and he will jump into the crowd when he is lonely. Simple and clear. I remember when I was reading, the two things that impressed me most about the relationship between Hu Tiehua and Chu Liuxiang were: Hu Tiehua laughed again and said: "Good brother, you don't have to beg for help for me. As long as you let me drink this pot of wine, I will definitely not die." He suddenly pulled out a dagger from his boot and said with a smile: "Look, this is my way to detoxify. Isn't this method the best?" Chu Liuxiang lost her voice and said, "Do you want to..." Hu Tiehua laughed and said: "As the saying goes: a viper bites a hand, a strong man breaks his wrist. This is nothing special, so why should you make a fuss?" Chu Liuxiang was sweating profusely as she looked at the sharp dagger in his hand, but Hu Tiehua herself didn't even change her expression. She suddenly stopped talking because she suddenly realized that although Chu Liuxiang was sitting there upright, her whole body was trembling and her face was like gold paper. Hu Tiehua was simply stunned and said in a trembling voice: "You... You..." Li Yuhan and Liu Wumei both rushed to help him. When they touched his body, they felt that although there was still a layer of clothes between them, his body was already hotter than a soldering iron. Hu Tiehua finally rushed over and hissed: "Are you also poisoned?" When Hu Tiehua was about to cut off his arm, he was still talking and laughing, but now he was so anxious that he was sweating profusely and said in a low voice: "A person who never gets sick will become seriously ill when he does. Brother Li, you..." Chu Liuxiang said: "Yes, this disease is not... It doesn't matter. You two... It's better to find... Find an antidote for him first." Hu Tiehua said: "My poison won't matter. You'd better treat his illness first." Chu Liuxiang frowned and said, "Nonsense." Hu Tiehua said loudly: "If you don't want them to treat you first, even if they bring you the antidote, I won't take it." Of course, Chu Liuxiang's illness was fake. He is such a person who will not let readers see through him, let alone his friends. Such a character, although he knows that he is good to others, or knows that he likes him, but it always makes people feel uncomfortable and uncomfortable, as if he can take everything back at any time and pretend that nothing has happened. In reading Cun Cun's article, what impressed me the most was a small incident. In order to make Chu Liuxiang angry, Hu Tiehua stuffed the snowball into his clothes. In the end, she was frightened by Chu Liuxiang's unpredictable expression and language. So although this article is not abusive and flows smoothly, I still read it with some trepidation, lest Chu Liuxiang's ambiguous attitude of not being near or far would change into something else, or be used to trigger other plots. Until the part where Chu Liuxiang gave the jade appeared, I was worried that he would suddenly change his mind and give the jade to the girl who took the opportunity to ask for it. Fortunately, nothing like this happened. I feel lucky and laugh at myself for thinking too much, but I can't help but feel that Chu Liuxiang in Cun Cun's text makes me feel like I'm watching the character in the original work. The character in the text has captured the essence without being ruined. I like this article very much. Well, just a few personal thoughts by the way. The plot of this story seems a bit confusing and not very clear, making it seem a bit boring. It seems that there is still something missing when developing the plot, and it cannot grasp the main line. It feels very stilted when solving puzzles. And the ending makes people feel like the book ended before it was finished. The above is just my personal opinion. In fact, after reading it, I have been looking forward to seeing Chu Hu written by Cun Cun again or other fan fiction about the characters in Gu Long's novels, but unfortunately I have never seen it again...
Wow, what an open ending.
Finally finished reading it~~~It's so beautiful! ! It's really Chu Liuxiang's suspense style and it's so well written! Chu Hu is also so cute that it makes people roll over!
What a rip-off, why don't you show off your flesh and blood? You can write a sequel that will make you laugh! These two are top-notch~ The writing is very good and gives people a warm feeling
I feel like I'm depressed. It's rare that I want to reply to a long comment, but I end up writing it in paragraphs. ——The Internet speed is too fast, so shaking hands is also a problem~~~~~`
In fact - haha, it's the moon again. When I think about the moon, I feel very warm in my heart. What kind of two teenagers are they? You see, there is always another seemingly coincidental beginning, but the interweaving of life is as gorgeous as fireworks. However, if it is not at night, it will be meaningless. Just like one person to another person, if it weren't for him... Even if he is a drunkard, even if he is a fox who loves to laugh, even if he has a love affair that cannot be stopped, even if, maybe they do not appear in any part of each other's life... But these are not important now, are they? We can meet each other to enjoy life under the moonlight, drink and talk happily, and it goes on like this until... Ah! It turns out that we are already together... Buddha said: Everything is hidden in words, isn't it so shallow?
The hot JQ we are looking forward to... Tears
I love this pair! But it must be Hu Tiehua who takes the responsibility. . . I see that adults keep writing fanfics, can you write about Slam Dunk and Sakuragi Hanamichi? I am a fan of ikebana soushou. I think your writing style is very good. I hope you can write about ikebana soushou.
Ah! ? ~ That's it! ? ~ It's so satisfying! ! !