The Phoenix's Song in the Eastern Palace

The prince's heart is not very good and he has angina pectoris.

The prince was in so much pain, it hurt several times. . .

I'm glad I skipped ahead and watched the ending. When you treat the heroine like this, do you hate women? According to this cruel method, it is only fair that the male protagonist should lose a leg, or the people around him should die. In fact, I can comfort myself like this. The heroine has never liked the hero. She is just pretending to be virtuous and affectionate, because she has no strength to resist, and the diplomatic relations between the two countries do not allow her to be willful. I think judging from the behavior of the heroine, she successfully won favor from a fraternal hostage who was not loved by her husband, eliminated dissidents, and finally promoted her own son to the throne. She is very strong and intelligent! As for the male protagonist, he thinks that the female protagonist loves him, but in fact it is just an illusion given to him by the female protagonist, but she understands that the best disguise is to deceive herself. Thinking about it this way, all the suspected masochistic parts of the heroine are reasonable, which is good!

The copywriting is not very good. It's a bit like the old sadomasochistic love affair. Not very attractive.

Is this abuse? Let me go, does the female protagonist abuse her body and the male protagonist abuse her heart? Hehe. . .

I feel like this is Xiaoxiang's writing.

How brave you are to slap your husband!

I really like this story. The writing style is very literary. I hope there will be more extras to introduce the story of the Chu family's little girl and Yang Mo.

Hello, author, I am Baozi, a reviewer of Shamao Changping Shop. I am really sorry that it took me so long to comment (*^__^*). Also, if you don't like the review, please be kind to the author (*^__^*) So let's start now: 1-First of all, let's talk about the so-called "written". The cover is very beautiful, and the copywriting, the first sentence is "On the wedding night, she swept the longan and lotus seeds scattered all over the bed one by one, and the "tap-tat" sound when they fell to the ground was like a heavy rain hitting a tree trunk." I feel that the second half is not suitable for an introduction, but it is suitable to be written in the main text. The author's copywriting is quite literary, but sometimes being too literary can blur or dilute the original point of the article. If it can be revised to highlight the main purpose of the article, I believe it will be more attractive. Also, in Baozi's opinion, the author doesn't actually need to write two versions of the text. Wenwen that prefers a serious drama or a serious drama style is not suitable for a funny version. (Although the funny version is quite cute. O(∩_∩)o), it is also best to find a shop to beautify it, so that your "writing" can be more beautiful in the first place and catch the readers' attention. 2-1: Speaking of the main text, when I finished reading the first chapter, Baozi didn't have the urge to click on the next chapter, because when I read the first chapter, the author had to explain a lot of things in a vague way, which made the first chapter a bit "messy" and "inexplicable". Although the text was "filtered" at a glance, the text was smooth, but the key points were missing, making it confusing. (These should be intentional actions by the author in order to catch readers' attention. Baozi feels that sometimes, it is better to explain things clearly, especially the departure of the prince, which is already a climax at the beginning of the article. So it is necessary to briefly explain why the heroine got married, although I know it will be mentioned later, but In the first chapter, Baozi thinks it will be smoother and less complicated.) 2-2: By the third chapter, Baozi is a little bit giving up. In terms of naming, even if the Yang country where the married heroine was born is a small country, it is impossible to call his parents "father" and "aunt". This should be a small mistake on the part of the author. Especially in the first few chapters, has the author noticed that you often change your perspective suddenly, which makes the chapters suddenly "fragmented" and uncomfortable to read. 2-3: After reading the third chapter, I felt that the author's writing was more literary. Although the writing style was good, the content was relatively skinny and not very full. There was no obvious main line and attractive highlights, and the plot was draggy. . . . . . 2-4: It wasn't until Chapter 9 that Wenwen became attracted to Baozi, and some "clues" began to emerge. . . . . . In Chapter 9, it seems that it starts to slowly get to the main topic. With 3000+ words per chapter, it seems too late to start getting to the main topic in Chapter 9. It is too detailed to describe some details that have little to do with the main line. The author focuses on some details and blurs the "key point" of the text itself, making it feel "scattered". Such a plot arrangement will make many readers lose their patience. No matter how exciting the subsequent plot is, it will be in vain, because impatient readers have already abandoned the article. I hope the author can consider it in future writing. Unnecessary plots can be ignored or passed over in one stroke, and the main text can be quickly entered to catch the readers' attention in time. 2-5: The character setting, whether it is the female protagonist or the male protagonist, seems a bit weak. This is probably because there are too many characters appearing in the article, especially for a article with less than 200,000 text, too many, depriving the original description of the male and female protagonists. It does not highlight the distinctive personality of the main characters. Even in the middle of the text, Baozi is still quite vague about the personalities of the female protagonist and the male protagonist. The author can reduce the description of other characters and add more detailed descriptions of the male and female protagonists to highlight the fullness of the characters. 2-6: There is nothing wrong with the overall framework of Wenwen, and the writing style is also quite smooth. It would be better if some plots could be set up to be different from other similar Wenwen. The relationship between primary and secondary should be grasped, the characters should be properly grasped, and the plot should be as streamlined as possible. Finally, I wish the author success in writing and becoming a god as soon as possible. ---------The steamed stuffed buns from Sha Miao Chang Ping Pu

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