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Produced by Huzhu Pavilion Thanks for the invitation. I have been liking Feng Lian for four years since 2012. In the world of station CPs, there are always these situations: the first one, this pair of CPs hit my pain point, and looking at them apart, they both agree very well with each other; the second one, because they are both my destiny, so I am very happy to see my destiny together; the third one, one of them is my destiny Fate, I don't like the other one, but since it is an official match, I still have to support it; the fourth one, I like both of them very much, but the CP is particularly eye-catching; the fifth one, I don't like either of them, but this CP is really cute, and I slowly fell in love with the character because I like the CP. And my mentality towards Feng Lian happens to belong to the fifth type. Feng Lian's co-stars, to put it in a simple and crude two-dimensional way, are the flirtation between the naturally stupid lady and the arrogant and handsome boy. Spread across the entire series, it is easy to see that they dislike each other and are constantly fighting each other, but they are also the ones who understand each other best. If they are brought together, the key point is Note the events after the disappearance of Wei Zhuang in the fourth part. The strangulation, poisoning, princess hug, bandaging, and questioning are all textbook tsundere. Even though Chi Lian is still the same Chi Lian who always talks about "Master Wei Zhuang", the ambiguity factor between the two people has reached a level that cannot be ignored. These two people are so similar. They have both experienced the transformation of life and nirvana. They both have a love where the moon shines on the ditch. The fire is red and the water is blue, and the tip of the needle is facing the wheat awn. These two people are so different. Chi Lian is too paranoid and slow, while Bai Feng is too cold and arrogant. They seem to be close but are the most distant. This is exactly what "Jian Jia" describes as "the road is long and difficult". I think this is the first time I have ever seen this kind of carefree and carefree relationship, except for Mr. And Mrs. Smith, and I am so fascinated by it. In the end, because I fell in love with their way of getting along, I began to discover the shining points of each of Feng Lian, and gradually developed a resonance. Chi Lian is no longer just the big-breasted bad woman, and Bai Feng is no longer the pretentious bad man. Their images in my mind have become three-dimensional, lovable, and pitiable. After that, I became so hungry that I started looking for fan food. I have to say this point of view here: fan creation is OOC. For fanart without plot, as long as the painting style is good, it is easy to be accepted and liked. But fan fiction is different. Even if the interference of the writing style is put aside, the text can also reveal the author's three views and most of his views on CP. Reading fan fiction itself is to intersect with the author's thinking. When you think of one place, you naturally regard the article as a treasure; you have different opinions. No matter how excellent the text is, it will still make you heartbroken when you read it. After laying the groundwork for so long, you must be smart enough to understand that I cannot evaluate this article from a truly objective perspective - although we are on the same team, there are significant differences in our views on CP and understanding of the characters. Many details may look good to others, but to me they are extremely OOC. Chi Lian wielding pink fists, Chi Lian crying, Bai Feng keen on killing by touching his head, Bai Feng who would tell the fact that he was in a state of confusion, Bai Feng who said the affectionate sayings of the domineering president such as "Shut up, woman" and "No one can take you away from me"... Outside the screen, I looked at Feng Lian who got Qiong Yao's script, and I couldn't calm down for a long time. There is also Wei Zhuang, who raises his shark teeth and laughs like a middle school boy, Shao Yu, who has thick eyebrows and a voice like a rough man painted in Hong Zhong's style, Tian Ming, who talks about literary principles... If it were written by a primary school student, I would probably go to the Lei Wen Tucao Station to hang people. The reason why I kept reading was not only because I wanted to know the ending, but also because the writing was really beautiful. "Jianjia" is a rare fanfic that combines an aesthetic style, a compact rhythm, smooth martial arts, and a wonderful battle of wits. It grasps the essence of the exquisite atmosphere of the original work, and highlights its own elegant temperament on this basis. The added settings about Nanjiang and Hangu are very interesting and imaginative. What is even more valuable is that although the article is intended to be romantic, it does not fall into the circle of small love and small love. The views on politics are accurate and unique. I especially like these two sentences: "People's minds are determined that no one wants to suffer another war. A gentleman's revenge is already too late in ten years, let alone twelve years." The writing is full of desolation and transparency. It is true that times create heroes, and Yu Xi can do nothing. The postscript says that you want to write a story about a princess who is trapped in darkness and unable to control the situation. Actually you did, and did a great job. Describing the entire background of the era of collapse, fission, and conflict of interests in a large space can further highlight the meager strength of the characters. Then this painful and contradictory princess came to life. Finally, let me talk a few more purely technical things. The biggest flaw of "Jianjia" is its lack of narrative ability. First of all, in the same chapter, the transition between different scenes and different time points was not paid attention to, and the connection was very random and substandard. Second, it cannot control multi-line narratives. This is also a problem with the switching of plot branches, with poor connectivity between them; sometimes even the development of one line seems fragmented and incoherent. Thirdly, it's good to add magical settings, but if you can't explain it clearly, it's better not to draw enough. Regarding the original setting of the "Butterfly" series, it is novel and gorgeous enough, but the description is very abstract, making people confused, and it has no significance for the advancement of the plot. Fourth, I don't know whether it's due to rushing work or some other reason, but this article is suspected of being unfinished. In the penultimate chapter, Chi Lian was still obsessed with finding Wei Zhuang. At the finale, he suddenly wrote a letter to express his feelings. A lot of plots were skipped in the middle, as if he was forcing candy on Feng Lian's party. I personally think that the details need to be edited out before I can live up to this feast. Produced by Huzhu Pavilion
After Qin, Confucianism indeed became orthodox
The small theater received good reviews, but it's a pity that Fengfeng didn't fall in love with Sister Lian
No, Fengfeng's feet were crippled!!!
It's very beautiful, why would someone give 0 points_(:3∠ )_
Chi Lian is planning to have two boys?
Who is this Shu'er? The setting of Butterfly is also very confusing. Is it similar to reincarnation?
"He looked at her as if he were looking at his dream last night." After reading this sentence, my heart trembled. If you really ask for it but can't get it, the road will be long and difficult.
It's really the most authentic Qin Shi fan I've ever seen! After reading it, I am still daydreaming about the years after Chi Lian Bai Feng Wei Zhuang Zhang Liang. Author, you are so awesome!
Postscript I have seen a lot of love, and I have also liked all kinds of expressions of love, from fairy tales, to Xi Murong style, to the ordinary, to the depressed... But there is one kind of love setting that I can't let go of, and it is deeply rooted in people's hearts, and that is... The love of a princess. How should a princess love? She is noble, she is delicate, she is close to the center of power, and she gives me unlimited space for fantasy. No, not Sleeping Beauty, nor Snow White, that kind of love is too superficial and childish. I once read Tan Tianyin's book, The Love of Princess Guangming, which is luxurious, gorgeous and powerful. Behind her stands the entire family and the entire country. She cannot get involved because the alliance of interests is temporary. But she still fell in love without any hesitation. All kinds of love protected her as airtight as light. I really envy her. But there is another kind of princess, who is burdened with a fallen home and country. Her love was handed over to the dark abyss, but she couldn't control the overall situation. Is she worth it? Yes, it's worth it. For the sake of country and love, she has done many incredible things without hesitation. She has overcome the pretentious weakness of many women. She is loyal to love and deserves to be cherished. Here, I write about three of her romances. She and Zhang Liang's childhood sweetheart may have been in love at that time, so she was not tempted. My unreserved memory and attachment to Wei Zhuang is unforgettable. For Bai Feng, it was the unconscious kindness, pretense and concern that aroused a young boy's desire to protect, and she grew up with him. The love I imagine is a bright love with hope. So without Wei Zhuang or Zhang Liang, Bai Fenghuang is her only one. This is - Jian Jia. When reading "The Book of Songs", every time I see a section of "Jian Jia", my heart will be agitated and I will sigh. The jianjia is collected, and the white dew is still there. Close your eyes and think in reverie. All kinds of images are superimposed, and the picture is really poignant and beautiful. Writing this article, which is not too short, can be regarded as an expression of my yearning for the poem "Jian Jia" when I was young. The theme of the article is actually very simple, it is Bai Feng's sentence: I don't need to be strong, I just need to have enough stable strength, all of it, to protect one person. The article begins with the Fairy Mountain Debate. Bai Feng tries to convince Chi Lian that the world is now peaceful and she should cherish it; but Chi Lian resists. Then Wei Zhuang encouraged her to overcome her fear and grow up on her own, and laughed at Zhang Liang's unnecessary worries. Then to the battle between Chi Lian and Bai Feng, and the crisis when she fell into the bottom of Songhai Lake, it all showed that her growth... Was too slow, and she could never escape the shadow of death. Bai Fenghuang lost the power to protect a person and left her decisively, even making a bet between life and power. Wei Zhuang's protection was very simple. He couldn't let go of the world and the concept of the strong, so he designed a game to kill Sheng Qi to express his care for her for the last time. Zhang Liang's love gradually evolved into complete respect and non-interference. But even Chi Lian didn't understand that she refused Bai Feng's protection and refused the comfortable life under Fu Su's wings. In the third volume, Chi Lian's determination was shattered and broken down bit by bit, and then the roots were removed from the bottom of the cauldron. Her attitude towards Bai Feng took the biggest turn for the better. Maybe everyone has princess disease. No one knows their desire for safe love until they actually lose it, and no one realizes that the love they have given for so long will fade away. This is the norm, but often, even I don't want to admit it. This despicability is greatly highlighted in Bai Feng's complex and tangled psychology. Her worries were unnecessary, his love was never far away. "The road is blocked to the right, and the road blocked is long." He really didn't want her to know that he was a person who didn't even have the power to fly. But he understood her pride and pleading. The last moment he fell from the tree, what he thought about was... Dying in her arms. Until Hangu's encounter, Bai Feng went to Huadie Valley and found the person who could tell him the beginning and end of the incident. The result was so disappointing. He left the Han Palace, the past, and all the people and things that hindered him, just to control his own life; he ignored his own abilities and the corresponding mission. He would naturally do what he wanted to do, but anyone who dared to place too much hope in him would be asking for death! He may not be a hero, but he is blameless. This is just the bottom line wish of an ordinary person, and it is not worthy of ridicule by heroes. Because Tao is different from Tao. So when Chi Lian stabbed himself, he said, I will send you back. When he got here, he realized his limitations, but insisted, I will come back and take you away. This is a "Jian Jia" dream. When the white phoenix was flying among the reed flowers, he realized that a "beautiful person" was haunting him in his dream. So I decided to get along with her. The price of that impulse was tragic, but the experience was wonderful. The second time, he deliberately let Chi Lian see the person in his heart. He couldn't see clearly, and she couldn't see clearly either. The third time, he saw clearly the self-mutilation and coercion under the sunset, and he was not in her eyes. The fourth time, at Fusu Mansion, he saw her wavering, so he took her away without any confidence. The fifth time, at the inn under Han Valley, he dreamed of the red shadow again, so he did not hesitate to be together even if self-protection was a problem. In the sixth chapter, in Guigu, he thought she had gotten rid of the troubles of the past, but painfully discovered that they were stuck at the beginning. In the seventh episode, the people outside Han Valley screamed. He was determined to take her away. He didn't want her to say she was tired or give up, because it was unfair to him and she didn't even try... After the earth shook, he came out. On the one hand, she fell into hopeless waiting, and on the other hand, she forgot all love. Until the end, she was in the middle of the water, but he was beside her. "You can see him as soon as you open your eyes." She had chosen him a long time ago because he loved so devotedly!