
Transmigrate as a Male Supporting Character and Cultivate Immortality
穿成男配去修仙
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- Completed
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- 282k Words
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- Danmei (BL)
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- 11y ago
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- JJWXC
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I once heard someone say something like this: The male protagonist is the author's true love, and the male supporting actor is the reader's true love. Although the rationality of this sentence is still open to question, I have to say that I think it fully reflects the tragedy and importance of the male supporting role. The reason why I clicked on this article is because of the word male supporting role in the title of the article! It's enough to show my true love for the male partner! When I first read this article, the fusion of multiple elements such as "green-painted cucumber man", "white lotus", "cruel and cruel" and other elements in the copy deeply touched my cuteness. After reading the copy, I was particularly curious about how Ye Zhengliu turned into a black man. And I hate the Virgin, so when I saw the author's setting for Ye Zhengliu, I thought it would be really cool. The author's narrative ability is acceptable, and although his vocabulary mastery is still at a relatively basic level, there are so few bad sentences in the whole text that they are almost negligible. The description of all aspects of the article is also relatively moderate and natural, and the plot expression is clear and smooth. However, the text in the whole text is also very dead, and the pictures are pale and flat, making it a bit boring to read. From the very rare typos in the whole text, it can be seen that the author is a person who takes writing seriously. I applaud the author here. . The article begins with an introduction to the male protagonist's setting from the perspective of the male protagonist, and the background introduction to the plot design is also interspersed with it. But I have to say that the author's approach is really great. It allows people to understand the background of the story without getting bored with a long background introduction. I see that many authors use a lot of text to introduce the background. In such articles, you often don't want to read the second paragraph after reading the first paragraph. Here, I have to praise the author greatly. But, after reading the whole article, I think the author's article has a shortcoming, that is, the camera changes a little frequently, which makes the text look like a running account. Besides, I think there's something wrong with Ye Zhengliu's character. He seems to be funny and serious at the same time. Is it my misunderstanding? In fact, after reading this article, I can feel that the author takes this article seriously. I think the author must have thought more carefully about the setting of this article, but the whole setting of the article gave me the impression that it was rough and abrupt in the process of integrating it into the plot. Take Chapter 6 as an example, even though you know that the advancement is unstable, you still have to act separately. This kind of character is not at all like the character of a master who has cultivated to the divine level, but rather like a real young boy who is just starting out. You are the author of this article, so you naturally know what your article is mainly about, but everyone except you is a reader. Although there are many plots in the article that have slight hints from the above, their appearance is as if they are integrated into the setting, which is quite abrupt and unnatural. In addition, I just felt that the plot of the article was a bit streamlined and trivial. The overall plot of the article is a bit like the fast food era. I think some of the trivial plots in the article are entirely improvised. I added some things into it based on your influence before and after the coding. And some places are not only trivial, but even a little messy, so that the connection between some plots is completely inappropriate. Therefore, when reading, I always feel that the character's personality changes from time to time. After reading the article, I felt that the structure of this article should be quite large. I think the author still has a certain amount of patience when it comes to laying out clues, and he also does a good job in creating suspense about doubtful points in the text. This is also the motivation that attracted me to read it in one breath. Regarding this point, give the author thirty-two likes! The author's intention for the article should be relatively high. What he wants to write is not about superficial love, so it may not be as attractive as ordinary articles, but it is a beautiful dream that you want to outline and share with everyone. Writing an article is a lonely journey. You may have a hard time at the beginning, but as long as you persist, one day more and more people will accompany you on the journey.
Just treat it as a mutual attack, it's actually quite good.
Hahaha, just throw it away after using it, right?
Are you back to your hometown?
The Ling family's grudge will be recorded first.
Linghui is a good girl, and Bai Chen's eyes are so poisonous that he fell in love with her right away!
Qingfeng came and left...
How many people has Ye Qing saved?
How dare you be the main attacker like this? Judging from the number of times, he is basically the leader of counterattacks.
Suddenly there is a sense of past and present life (⊙_⊙)?