A Shy, Delicate Maiden

On the recommendation of a friend, I read this article at home over the weekend and felt very warm. Especially on a weekend when there is a cold wave and a lot of light rain, I suddenly feel like I am being healed. Suddenly I thought that the person who could write such an article must be the kind of person who is a little funny, a little guilty, optimistic, cheerful, and very warm at heart! Then, I came here to visit. Seeing a lot of critical comments below, I suddenly felt very sorry for the author. Then my first comment + complaint was born. As an old book friend who has read almost all kinds of miscellaneous books, it is true that this book has many "faults", such as the random name, loose logic, numerous characters, confusing plot lines, and the plot of a different world in the future. But I have to say that this book also has many advantages. Everyone in it has a vivid personality, whether it is the female protagonist who is timid and cowardly but full of motherly care and love for her family, or the disabled male protagonist who loves his wife and family, or the eldest daughter of the Queen who is assertive and domineering, the younger daughter who is always cute and frail but optimistic and strong, the aunt who is cold in appearance and warm in the heart, as well as the fat Dangdang who shows off her presence from time to time in the book, protects the left and right, and has unique taste Lu Buzhi and others, etc., Are all impressive. Their stories are warm and full of shining points: they have been hurt, but they are still surrounded by love, and they also surround others with love. The left and right guardians were orphans who were taken in by the ruthless male protagonist's base. From then on, they had brothers, friends, and family, although they expressed themselves in a very strange way, fighting, laughing, and complaining. The twins were abandoned, but met the grandfather who raised them and Weiweier's family, and they had a new family. The heroine is autistic, but her family has never given up on her. Her mother and sister have always cared for her and encouraged her to help her. Although her sister looks cold and strong, she has repeatedly indulged her requests... And so on, it feels like narrating it is like a spoiler. After complaining about the advantages, I also want to talk about the shortcomings of this book (PS: This is just my personal opinion, the author can listen to whatever he wants). I feel that this article is not like a novel, but more like an outline. Many of the characters and stories in it can write a book on their own: for example, the story of the queen's eldest daughter and her admonisher Situ Guhan (whose name is Li Fengxu in this life); the delicate little daughter and the warrior from another world; Fat Dangdang and Li Fengxu; Zuo Hufa and Leng Nu; the younger son enters the entertainment industry and gets along with the CEO (I won't say that, I am looking forward to reading more stories). Writing too many characters weakens the story of the male and female protagonists, so it makes people feel confused. It would be better if the primary and secondary roles in this book were more clearly defined, and it would be better to write more about the interaction between the male protagonist and the female protagonist or the process of the female protagonist adapting from ancient times to modern times. Okay, after talking about the characters and plot, let's talk about the issue of names that some people complain about. I have read many ancient sayings, some with elegant names, and some with vulgar names. But many times, when I put down the book, I almost only remember the plot of the story, and I can't remember the whole story or the gender. The name of the Lord (maybe due to my lack of IQ, please don't comment if you disagree.), So I personally think that the name is just a code name. If it is chosen well, it is the icing on the cake. If it is not chosen well, the name can be ignored if the plot is good. Although the name is strange, it is still much better than the name of the planet called 2B. Although I think the author was lazy and chose random names, maybe this is another kind of humor from the author? Only the author knows this question. Finally, let's talk about the issue of time, space and time. There are still teenagers getting married in rural areas and small towns, but they don't get a certificate. The author probably just wanted to express the age difference, it's just a personal guess. But I suggest that if it is set in modern times, the author can set the age of the heroine to be around 20, but her age in ancient times is set to 14 or 15 years old. In this way, the heroine is a cute ancient girl who looks 20 years old but is precocious at 14 or 15 years old on the inside. It is in line with the present and will not affect the development of the plot. Another issue is the time and space issue. Although I think the author's imagination is very powerful, it still feels weird. However, I still like the pairing of the young daughter and the warrior. I don't know if the author wanted to write about a pair of cute uncles raising lolita. I think this pair can be set in modern times. I think it is cruel for the author to separate their family. Finally, I want to say something to the author. What I clicked in is that the author has not updated the article for a long time. I don't know if it was hurt by the comments or for some other reason. I like the character settings in every article written by the author. They are cute and warm, and feel more relaxing than many articles. I don't like to read abuse articles. I always feel that reality is very cruel. The spiritual world should be relaxed and happy. Even if these people are living in our fantasies, they warm us invisibly and give us a world where we can escape from reality, breathe and dream. Thank you, the author, for creating this dream. It has many shortcomings, but it is still beautiful. I don't know why the author started writing. Maybe it was out of dreams or money. If the answer is based on dreams, I hope the author can continue to write well. Dreams are precious. Although the criticisms are unpleasant, they are steps for your progress. Don't be depressed, come on! If it is for money, I hope the author can continue to update. Although it is utilitarian, I still thank the author for providing such a world where you can dream... The above is purely my personal opinion, please don't mind the author if it's wrong.

It ended so suddenly. . . Mua

I'll remember it for you. I owe you a lot.

It's really good to be more slow and won't bite you! ! 1 Still love you, hum!

Here! ! Please update! ! ! !

Please update quickly.

I thought I had given up, but I still couldn't help but watch it every day. Alas, my hair has turned white.

Is this more serious or not?

Damn it, can we update it every day?

Poor Xin Nuan, even the body is gone...