Transmigrate to the Stars and Write

Damn, the novel is very good

I bought them all, the writing is really good, cheers up

Sprinkle flowers. Happy ending.

Throw flower balls, the name is so cute.

Good-looking? It's my type!

How to put it this way, I thought the first part of the article was good, but the more I read it, the more I felt that the protagonist was disrespectful and took many things for granted. In fact, when writing a novel about the world of orcs, magic is a good choice, but cultivating immortality is the best choice. . . . Have you considered cultural differences? Even the West on the same planet doesn't quite understand. How do you expect the orcs with straightforward IQs across the galaxy to understand?

It's so well written, it's really good, the overall feeling is good, the writing is good! ! !

Haha, the more I read, the more disappointed I become. The front is fine, but the back is almost as good as an ordinary time-traveling novice male protagonist. Also, how can any mother, even a boy, treat her as a pet after giving birth? You didn't consider Xiaokang's feelings at all, okay? And what did the male protagonist do during the entire relationship? Apart from giving the spiritual power cultivation method to Xiaokang, he didn't even get a gift. Moreover, the cultivation method has been made public to the whole world. Also, when confronting the leader of the giant wolf tribe, it was like Qiong Yao was possessed. Also, even if you are an archaeologist, how can you make the Epang Palace look the same as before without any data? I personally think that The Great Desolation is a myth that requires a lot of data to be verified. Please tell me how to write the main character in a different time and space. Also, as mentioned at the beginning of the article, when the male protagonist was picked up, he was a rare cub on the planet. After inspection, it was always known that the male protagonist was mature. How could he not find out until later? As mentioned before, Planet's style is barbaric, they don't value culture, and history is not taught in schools. How did the novel website come about? Don't schools also teach technology? There are always some high-level orcs who love technology like Xiao Wu, right? The control of technology by low-level orcs is ridiculous. Isn't it possible that the high-level orcs don't have violent and powerful technology? They even signed a treaty and let them develop it. To sum up. The high-level orcs are simply stupid and sweet, and the low-level orcs rebel without any description in the first half. In the end, the male protagonist raises his arms and all the people kneel down, and the world returns to peace.

Well! It's really over! It looks great and I love it, but I still feel like it's still unfinished!

Ah! Why is there no more? ! !