The New Groom

The author has worked hard to update the article, so here's a refresher!

Oh my god, vague abuse, distressed

I like your writing style. Very nice. Like it very much! ! ! !

It's very interesting. It feels like it's very much in the "publishing style" or "physical style". It feels like reading a novel written by someone. It's just... So damn cruel... QAQ

This history is not dark at all^_^

Oh, the cake buyers, we are not together, I feel so sad

As a Hokkien person, I was really surprised when I saw the male protagonist's name/laughed and cried.

Why is it so cruel? ●^●

Article name: Congratulations to the bridegroom Author: Grilled Wings Store Manager Article address: http://www. Jjwxc. Net/onebook. Php? Novelid=2248858 Word count: Example 2w Article style: Example Original-Danmei-Modern and Modern-Love Designated store clerk: As long as you can accept danmei Remarks: Science students... Ahem, so my writing skills are limited. Please don't hit me if I don't write well! Also, the author, who is a sophomore in high school, may not be able to access the Internet in time, so he may not be able to pick up the order in time. Please try your best to get it! What~ First of all, I have to say that Shankoshi did not receive this article because he had to take an exam. It is definitely his loss, and it is a big loss! The article "Congratulations to the Bridegroom" is undoubtedly amazing! It's so amazing that I don't know where to start bragging, especially since I'm not good at complimenting others. Let's put it this way, this article is almost perfect, and even someone who is obsessed with details can't find anything to complain about. This is a short article with no cover and unclear copywriting, so it's understandable that it missed some readers. In fact, it is a good article. If it is well organized, it should be a good opening. When I first clicked on it, I felt that the author didn't really care about this article. As someone who is about to write a long review, I actually feel a little uncomfortable. You are not sad, but you still have to write the review with all your heart. But after reading the first chapter, I gave up this idea. In the past, when I wrote a review, I always gave a piece of candy first and then a slap in the face. However, this article can really be regarded as impeccable if you don't insist on nitpicking. "There is a faint layer of darkness in the sky, but it is not very obvious. It looks like someone has carefully wiped it with a brush dipped in water. The blue and white sky reflects the sun's rays - this is after dinner in summer. But it is difficult to read with this bit of light. Fortunately, the person sitting by the window has no interest in reading. He just sits quietly, maybe After not moving for a long time, from a distance, the outline of the whole body merges with the blue light and shines, as graceful as a plaster statue. "This is the beginning of the article. The description of details and the use of metaphors are not new, but they are just right. They do not describe scenes for the sake of describing scenes, and do not use metaphors for metaphors. Everything is natural. The beginning of the story is very interesting. The sister of Jiang Jibai, the second young master of the Jiang family, returned to her parents' home after being "domestically abused" by her husband Shen Qiuyuan. Because Shen Qiuyuan's mother was not the first wife, and the fourth Miss Jiang had some trendy ideas, she wanted a divorce. But this Shen Qiuyuan is Jiang Jibai's person, or from the perspective of attack and reception, it should be changed. Jiang Jibai is actually Shen Qiuyuan's person. Then it switches to recalling the scene when the two people first met, and the connection through dialogue is so natural and smooth. So the story is drawn back to the scene when they first met on a boat when they were twenty years old. I won't give any spoilers here. Although this story is not considered novel, it does not have any impact on the excitement of this article due to the depth of the author's description. In the last chapter, Shen Qiuyuan is about to get married. He asks Jiang Jibai if she loves him? This echoes the first chapter. Jiang Jibai, who had not given an answer in the first chapter, finally broke out emotionally. At the end of the article, there was finally a fierce emotional collision. It's really like fireworks, which after being brilliant, return to a slightly regretful nothingness. The ending in the postscript is not unexpected, but I want to say that this arrangement is also excellent. In a short article like this, there is no need to create such a vigorous farewell of life and death. The more peaceful the rescue, the more distant it seems, and because of its remoteness, it becomes intriguing. In order to avoid spoilers and ensure the elegance of the original text, I only want to say this. If there is a recommendation option, I am absolutely willing to spare no effort to recommend it. It would be a pity to miss such a beautiful article. It seems that you no longer need to be hospitalized to become a great god. In some aspects, you are already one. If I have any hope, I hope that I can be as good at writing long stories. Jingchu The one who made the comment