A story about a general and a dancer.
Can the space she carries with her help her escape her fate as a pawn and find freedom?
Will she still accept the general's love, even after facing the most wicked of the powerful, or will she leave again?
Everyone faces many choices in life, and every gain comes with a loss.
Yue Zhen has made her choice. She only hopes she won't regret it, never, ever!
Theme:
"Vietnam Girl Song"
Song Selection: Ink Painting Phoenix City
Word: clear knowledge
Sing: Qian Juedai
Yue Qin: awe-inspiring
Lou Yin: Night Owl Lao Niu
Read
Lou Yin: Who is your father? Why was he imprisoned?
Yue Qin: My father was originally the governor of Fufeng in Jinling. Later, he was imprisoned and beheaded by the late emperor for corruption. The slave girl was young at that time, so she was sold into slavery by the officials. After several twists and turns, she was finally sold into Prince Xu's Mansion and became a dancer.
Sing
There is a beautiful woman in the Southern Han Dynasty, dancing with a light green waist.
As graceful as a startling dragon, graceful as a floating dragon.
When Er falls, he sheds tears and walks slowly and lowly.
The breeze blew through my sleeves, and the faint sound of the piano ceased.
The fragrance of vanilla and beauties fills the palace, and lovesickness always brings sadness to each other.
The general gallops with his sword, and the Yue girl looks back after dancing.
Who understands looking at each other as mutual disapproval? Who says beauty is as cold as ever?
The feelings are full and long-lasting, and the lingering thoughts of the world turn white.
A piece of brocade music, a glance at the beauty.
A dance makes my heart fall in love, a sword smile warms my heart.
Once stained by the world of mortals, stained by dew the next night.
Only when we are separated can we know the depth of each other.
Read
Lou Yin: Ah Qin, tell me what you are thinking, I will think about what you think, think about what you want, like what you like, hate what you dislike, and I will become your strongest support in this life.
Yueqin: Why?
Lou Yin: No reason. When I realized it, you were already on the top of my heart. I couldn't put it down or throw it away. I thought about you all the time.
Lou Yin: Ah Qin, do you like me?
Sing
Acquaintance, longing for each other, joyful companionship, keeping words to each other
Slow flowing water, three thousand views, full of enjoyment, sharing the beauty of the beauty.
Read
Lou Yin (playback): Ah Qin, do you like me?
Yue Qin: (Inwardly) So what if you like it, what if you don't like it?
Note: Qin, a polyphonic character, qin zhen
I don't like the heroine's pretentious personality! Pretending to be cool makes me want to vomit!
I have never had time to read Qingshi's articles before. When I read them today, in comparison, there is still a gap between mine. Yue Nu is the same as my heroine, aloof and cold, with a rough life experience. The writing style is also pure and ancient. I like it very much and support it.
After reading "The Legend of Yue Nu" by Qing Shi, my first feeling was that I still had more to say.
The story of the general and the dancing girl, when I read the text, I felt that it was full of romance. The beautiful dancing girl and the resolute man loved each other and admired each other. It immediately reminded me of Farewell My Concubine.
The heroine Yue Qin is a woman with a cold and indifferent personality. When I first watched the movie, I thought she was just a bit arrogant. However, as the plot progressed, I found out that she was a spy sent by the emperor to King Xu, in order to seize Prince Xu's handle and then take the blame.
It can be seen from this that the emperor is very suspicious and does not trust anyone. The heroine works under such people and is just trying to steal the skin of a tiger. Not to mention that the heroine is a pawn of the emperor. Because her father committed a crime (was wrongfully accused of corruption), the emperor also put her brother Yue Huai under house arrest, so she had no choice but to be used by him. Fortunately, the heroine has space, books and raw materials for refining elixirs, etc., So that she can gain the initiative for herself and finally kill King Xu.
I won't say much about King Xu. He is very ambitious and a womanizer. He makes people hate him at first glance.
The whole storyline is very coherent and the writing is very good. A lot of effort has been put into the description. There is an antique charm between the lines. If you read it sentence by sentence in the dead of night, you will feel very comfortable.
Okay, now I have to say but! (Get rough...
Let's talk about the copywriting first. I think it's a bit too concise, and in Jinjiang, unless a master can control this kind of drama style, it's really not the best choice for Little Vacuum, and it's easy to throw away.
As for the text, if you are a reader who likes ancient rhymes, you will like this simple taste. But most people nowadays like to read relaxed and interesting texts. They will run away unconsciously when they see a slightly sadistic text like Qingshi. Moreover, I think the nearly a thousand words in the first part are unnecessary. Today's readers like to go straight to the topic.
Since the element of space has been added to the Qingshi writing, it should be highlighted, rather than mentioned occasionally and left behind so long that no attention is paid to it...
After reading the article "Qing Shi", two points caught my attention, one is space and the other is chess pieces. This shows that the fate of the heroine is relatively tragic, but in the end she will be able to turn into a serf and sing with her golden fingers. However, the writing style is relatively depressing and not cool enough...
The only point of a golden finger article is to be happy, and do it however you want, so that more people will read it.
In Jinjiang, instead of writing heart-wrenching ancient style novels, it is better to write funny and silly stories. This is a limitation of the subject matter. It cannot be said that Qingshi's writing is not good, it can only be said that this style of writing is not suitable for Jinjiang (except for the great master).
Finally, I would like to make some small suggestions (if you don't like it, just ignore it...
If Qingshi prefers this style of writing and feels that true love must be written, then I think more people might read it if it were changed like this.
The writing technique of flashback is used, and the words that King Xu said in prison after his fall are directly used as the beginning, highlighting the heroine's resourcefulness and coldness, and incidentally explaining the wonderful use of space.
As for how the heroine went to King Xu and how she got into trouble with the general, it can be summarized in one sentence. The heroine wanted to save her younger brother, but was hindered by the emperor. The focus below is how the heroine used space to rescue her younger brother and then slap the emperor in the face (I have to say, this emperor deserves to be slapped in the face, and it must be a good slap)
Okay, so this article becomes a strong female sex article. Did I make any mistake?
It's a pity that Qingshi's story has been finished, otherwise I would still want to continue reading it. The text states that it is a story about a general and a dancing girl, but I don't see anything special about the only general who appears in the article. Is he really the male protagonist?
At the end, I can only lament that it is not easy to be an author. It is too lonely and lonely to have no readers to support me. I hope Qingshi can persevere and write better articles.
Why didn't he and his brother take the invisibility medicine and space? After eating it, you can escape without knowing it. Why is the heroine so hesitant? If she really just wants to run away with her brother, there is no need to go to such trouble~ The article says that she is afraid that others will say she is a monster and that others will not be able to find her. Even if they say she is a monster, it does not matter.
Oh wow, it was so sweet at first, but then I got a little worried. The heroine's sister was held in the emperor's hand. What should she really do to save her brother and be with the hero at the same time...
When someone wanted to take Yue Qin away from him, Lou Yin really discovered that he liked Yue Qin.
Yue Qin is too calm and indifferent. I wonder if such an extremely calm person will like Lou Yin.
Oh, I also want to see the magical invisibility medicine, hurry up
Play space for a long time? I want to see the play space?
Lou Yin is such a good man, he never forces her. If it were me, I would definitely slap the table: "What! You don't want to be my concubine? Can you let me do it?!!!"
Don't ask why. Powerful and willful. Mmm
"Vietnam Girl Song" Song Selection: Ink Painting Phoenix City Word: clear knowledge Sing: Qian Juedai Yue Qin: awe-inspiring Lou Yin: Night Owl Lao Niu Read Lou Yin: Who is your father? Why was he imprisoned? Yue Qin: My father was originally the governor of Fufeng in Jinling. Later, he was imprisoned and beheaded by the late emperor for corruption. The slave girl was young at that time, so she was sold into slavery by the officials. After several twists and turns, she was finally sold into Prince Xu's Mansion and became a dancer. Sing There is a beautiful woman in the Southern Han Dynasty, dancing with a light green waist. As graceful as a startling dragon, graceful as a floating dragon. When Er falls, he sheds tears and walks slowly and lowly. The breeze blew through my sleeves, and the faint sound of the piano ceased. The fragrance of vanilla and beauties fills the palace, and lovesickness always brings sadness to each other. The general gallops with his sword, and the Yue girl looks back after dancing. Who understands looking at each other as mutual disapproval? Who says beauty is as cold as ever? The feelings are full and long-lasting, and the lingering thoughts of the world turn white. A piece of brocade music, a glance at the beauty. A dance makes my heart fall in love, a sword smile warms my heart. Once stained by the world of mortals, stained by dew the next night. Only when we are separated can we know the depth of each other. Read Lou Yin: Ah Qin, tell me what you are thinking, I will think about what you think, think about what you want, like what you like, hate what you dislike, and I will become your strongest support in this life. Yueqin: Why? Lou Yin: No reason. When I realized it, you were already on the top of my heart. I couldn't put it down or throw it away. I thought about you all the time. Lou Yin: Ah Qin, do you like me? Sing Acquaintance, longing for each other, joyful companionship, keeping words to each other Slow flowing water, three thousand views, full of enjoyment, sharing the beauty of the beauty. Read Lou Yin (playback): Ah Qin, do you like me? Yue Qin: (Inwardly) So what if you like it, what if you don't like it? Note: Qin, a polyphonic character, qin zhen
I don't like the heroine's pretentious personality! Pretending to be cool makes me want to vomit!
I have never had time to read Qingshi's articles before. When I read them today, in comparison, there is still a gap between mine. Yue Nu is the same as my heroine, aloof and cold, with a rough life experience. The writing style is also pure and ancient. I like it very much and support it.
After reading "The Legend of Yue Nu" by Qing Shi, my first feeling was that I still had more to say. The story of the general and the dancing girl, when I read the text, I felt that it was full of romance. The beautiful dancing girl and the resolute man loved each other and admired each other. It immediately reminded me of Farewell My Concubine. The heroine Yue Qin is a woman with a cold and indifferent personality. When I first watched the movie, I thought she was just a bit arrogant. However, as the plot progressed, I found out that she was a spy sent by the emperor to King Xu, in order to seize Prince Xu's handle and then take the blame. It can be seen from this that the emperor is very suspicious and does not trust anyone. The heroine works under such people and is just trying to steal the skin of a tiger. Not to mention that the heroine is a pawn of the emperor. Because her father committed a crime (was wrongfully accused of corruption), the emperor also put her brother Yue Huai under house arrest, so she had no choice but to be used by him. Fortunately, the heroine has space, books and raw materials for refining elixirs, etc., So that she can gain the initiative for herself and finally kill King Xu. I won't say much about King Xu. He is very ambitious and a womanizer. He makes people hate him at first glance. The whole storyline is very coherent and the writing is very good. A lot of effort has been put into the description. There is an antique charm between the lines. If you read it sentence by sentence in the dead of night, you will feel very comfortable. Okay, now I have to say but! (Get rough... Let's talk about the copywriting first. I think it's a bit too concise, and in Jinjiang, unless a master can control this kind of drama style, it's really not the best choice for Little Vacuum, and it's easy to throw away. As for the text, if you are a reader who likes ancient rhymes, you will like this simple taste. But most people nowadays like to read relaxed and interesting texts. They will run away unconsciously when they see a slightly sadistic text like Qingshi. Moreover, I think the nearly a thousand words in the first part are unnecessary. Today's readers like to go straight to the topic. Since the element of space has been added to the Qingshi writing, it should be highlighted, rather than mentioned occasionally and left behind so long that no attention is paid to it... After reading the article "Qing Shi", two points caught my attention, one is space and the other is chess pieces. This shows that the fate of the heroine is relatively tragic, but in the end she will be able to turn into a serf and sing with her golden fingers. However, the writing style is relatively depressing and not cool enough... The only point of a golden finger article is to be happy, and do it however you want, so that more people will read it. In Jinjiang, instead of writing heart-wrenching ancient style novels, it is better to write funny and silly stories. This is a limitation of the subject matter. It cannot be said that Qingshi's writing is not good, it can only be said that this style of writing is not suitable for Jinjiang (except for the great master). Finally, I would like to make some small suggestions (if you don't like it, just ignore it... If Qingshi prefers this style of writing and feels that true love must be written, then I think more people might read it if it were changed like this. The writing technique of flashback is used, and the words that King Xu said in prison after his fall are directly used as the beginning, highlighting the heroine's resourcefulness and coldness, and incidentally explaining the wonderful use of space. As for how the heroine went to King Xu and how she got into trouble with the general, it can be summarized in one sentence. The heroine wanted to save her younger brother, but was hindered by the emperor. The focus below is how the heroine used space to rescue her younger brother and then slap the emperor in the face (I have to say, this emperor deserves to be slapped in the face, and it must be a good slap) Okay, so this article becomes a strong female sex article. Did I make any mistake? It's a pity that Qingshi's story has been finished, otherwise I would still want to continue reading it. The text states that it is a story about a general and a dancing girl, but I don't see anything special about the only general who appears in the article. Is he really the male protagonist? At the end, I can only lament that it is not easy to be an author. It is too lonely and lonely to have no readers to support me. I hope Qingshi can persevere and write better articles.
Why didn't he and his brother take the invisibility medicine and space? After eating it, you can escape without knowing it. Why is the heroine so hesitant? If she really just wants to run away with her brother, there is no need to go to such trouble~ The article says that she is afraid that others will say she is a monster and that others will not be able to find her. Even if they say she is a monster, it does not matter.
Oh wow, it was so sweet at first, but then I got a little worried. The heroine's sister was held in the emperor's hand. What should she really do to save her brother and be with the hero at the same time...
When someone wanted to take Yue Qin away from him, Lou Yin really discovered that he liked Yue Qin. Yue Qin is too calm and indifferent. I wonder if such an extremely calm person will like Lou Yin.
Oh, I also want to see the magical invisibility medicine, hurry up
Play space for a long time? I want to see the play space?
Lou Yin is such a good man, he never forces her. If it were me, I would definitely slap the table: "What! You don't want to be my concubine? Can you let me do it?!!!" Don't ask why. Powerful and willful. Mmm