[Harry Potter] A Snake Named Lion

Very pretty. The characters are very mature. This is the first time I have read a story about time-traveling Voldemort. Before, I had only seen people dressing up as people around Voldemort to influence him. Suddenly I discovered that you can directly dress up as him, haha. There is also a person who can directly dress up as Harry. Everything is possible. After reading one article, the plot is quite reasonable. When Draco, the male bishop, performed Occlumency, he put part of his memory in the pensieve for the very small and almost impossible possibility of being seen. It was unreasonable. It's not that it's unnecessary, I just think it's not handled very reasonably. I think another plot can be added to allow Draco to get this memory in a more reasonable way. First of all, this hypothesis is unlikely. The male protagonist taught Draco Occlumency, so he would use Legilimency on Draco. Even if he overreacted, it would not be possible for this spell to allow Draco to see the male protagonist's memories. Therefore, I think there is no need to teach this Occlumency to take out his own memories before teaching him. Secondly, even if the male protagonist considers the one in a million possibility and wants to put the memories in the Pensieve, there is no need to keep them there, right? Can't you put it away more securely and store it safer? Since you don't want to be seen from the beginning, why put the loudspeaker there to make it easier to see! ? According to my understanding, this plot is related to some subsequent plots, but the author can change a more reasonable plot to let Draco know this memory. These are all my speculations, maybe I am wrong. For example, the main consideration is that the male protagonist wants to be seen by Draco? Or am I misunderstanding the function of the pensieve? Ah, that's it, I'm not a big fan, anyway, this book is worth reading.

What can love mean? Even if I love you, I would hurt your love for other things for the family son. I don't think it's appropriate for Leo. This cp has not been supported from the beginning. But I can't help it if you want to write it. But loving you and stabbing you while regretting it at the same time, is this really love? This is just self-satisfaction! Lucius may like Leo, but it doesn't count as love, it's just to make excuses for himself. Use me to love you with such entanglement and pain to escape punishment. The sadomasochism you wrote makes me think that Lucius is a big scheming bitch. He was able to succeed only because he was very similar to Scopirio's empath.

What my wife wrote is so to my liking! Lao Wen checks in!

Why do I, as a die-hard platinum fan, not like the two fathers and sons here at all? Moreover, the cleansing is a bit stiff and the relationship is a bit abrupt.

I just hope that the sugar can be released soon. I understand everything you said, so as long as the cp is not changed, it will be easy to talk about. Then, there is a little more inner analysis today!

Harry's analytical skills are really good, but he doesn't trust Xiao Long, which is why he has the current result. Harry and Draco are right not to be together in this movie. The crisis of trust is really serious.

It is the scene where the male protagonist, the Dark Lord, travels to the original work and meets Harry Potter Dumbledore or Voldemort Lucius in the original work (or suddenly appears after everything in the original work ends to scare them) @Author Da Da

Is it okay to write a side story where the male protagonist wears the same clothes as the original? I want to see it.

Are you interested in writing a spin-off where the male protagonist is in the original novel? I'm excited just thinking about it.

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