[One Piece] Dangerous Character

This was written seven years ago, and Luffy has just started fighting Kaido now.

Seriously, it would be great if he really didn't die. I really hope this chapter comes true one day in the future.

Hey, isn't it just navel orange?

Luffy is so cute

I have read the whole article, thank you for your hospitality. Although Lucy is the protagonist, her presence is too low, or her character is not perfect. The value of force is unknown, and the past and future are unknown. Only feelings are perfect.

In fact, I can't blame Sabo. When the war was on the top of the painting, Sabo was probably not even set up. This is not the first time that Oda suddenly thought of adding a character who had no foreshadowing before.

Sabo was still suffering from amnesia when Ace died. He only remembered it after seeing the newspaper.

It's not Sabo's fault that he lost his memory!

Luffy has a rubber constitution, so he doesn't have to worry about tearing it, right?

A little unhappy The early stage was pretty good, and I was very excited to watch it. But in the middle and late stages, I felt tired. Even after reading it in one go, I felt it was a bit unfinished. Readers who have been following it all the way should be more or less disappointed. It started to collapse from the moment Ace died. After reading the comments, readers did have mixed reviews. If I give it a 10-point rating, I would give it 6 points for guarantee and 2 points for creativity. I would add 1 point for Luffy's selfishness, which I like. I would subtract 1.5 Points for the slightly unfinished ending and the rush in the later stages. It would probably be a mid-to-upper level of 7.5 Points. If it can be developed in the later stages of revision, it will definitely be more than this level. To be honest, the relationship between Luffy and Luci is a bit confusing to me, so I like it inexplicably. I feel that it would be much better if there is no CP, the ambiguity is great, and in the end Luci did not realize his dream of burning down the navy headquarters and killing all the Celestial Dragons. This is what disappointed me the most. I feel that my wife's writing style should be more than this. I don't mean to comment from above, I just want to express my personal opinion. I believe that my wife can be even better. Come on, my wife. Thanks for the hospitality