[One Piece] Fondant Cake

I think Caramel's character design is quite good. After all, not everyone can still stand firmly on the side of their family when they meet their lover. Some people may think he is strange, but to be honest, Caramel is a time traveler, and he may not really understand the true cruelty of the pirate world. Some people may say that it is strange for them to fall in love, because even if they are separated, their memories do not have to be truly erased, but he was born in the pirate group of one of the four emperors. There are his dear family members in this pirate group, such as his older sister, older brother, younger sister, and younger brother. To us, they may be unforgivable villains, but for Caramel, they are his closest lovers, even the Four Emperors. She is Caramel's mother, and she is also a very important existence to Caramel.

After reading it, I still can't accept that CP is Luffy. Isn't it great without cp? Luffy is seriously OOC and the author's emotional scenes are too boring, but I really like the atmosphere of the big mom family that is described. This is what supported me to finish reading. I would ruthlessly skip the emotional scenes every time (hehe). However, if it is a v-story, I will also choose to finish it because of the family love part.

In fact, it would be better if there is no love line. At first, I came here for the love line, but later I felt that (to outsiders) the cold-blooded and ruthless Caramel really fell in love~ (In reality, my three views are textbook orthodox) I feel that the love with Luffy really came out of nowhere... The characters are also quite broken,,, I feel that it is getting more and more confusing in the end (?), And the ending and other things are a bit hasty! All in all, cheers to the author! Finish spreading flowers See you again by fate (By the way, there are also things about love and family affection... In fact, if it were me, I would probably choose family affection. This became clear to me when I was very young. Although both emotions are equally beautiful and very important, even if there are things at home that I hate... So it is better not to have love in the first place.)

Or don't let Caramel and Luffy fall in love... Caramel is like a scumbag... One moment he wants to fall in love, the next moment he decides not to be together, he has to take any stance. How can there be such a life-and-death stance? Do we want to be like Romeo and Juliet, where family is a stumbling block, and hatred and hostility should continue for thousands of years? I don't like this kind of protagonist, and I don't like Dapuben at all. The ending is simply full of darkness, neither positive nor optimistic, and very passive. I feel so weak inside that I feel like I can't breathe every minute away from my family. Why mock love? Love and family are not originally opposites. Someone has to put them on opposite sides. Does the protagonist have to be happy like Romeo and Juliet? Use the family's position and hatred to bind the family, no matter what his sincerity, no matter his mother's freedom, I just want to stay at home, I have to stick to my parents for the rest of my life, right? Is it okay for people to have no pursuits of their own in this life? Is love ridiculous? Which one is more important than your family?? If there is someone who is really good to my sister, will I not allow her to be with others because of my own reasons? No matter how much I like my sister, we will always be separated. She will find her own dreams and happiness, and I will also find my own dreams and happiness. I respect her. This is the right and freedom we all have. Is this called a hobby? We are so far apart, do I not love her anymore? She is happy just because she is tied to me? It doesn't have to be about love or who you want to be with. Lack of freedom is the most unhappy thing. Did grandpa stop Luffy and his brother from becoming pirates? Did he prevent his son from going to revolution? At this point, I just see the navy and the world government squeezing the older generation like grandpa and I will be very angry. What kind of impersonal government would let its subordinates kill his grandson??? Now that such an impersonal setting has happened to the protagonist again, I'm drunk. Luffy is a very humane person in One Piece. Anyone he acknowledges as a comrade will also trust him deeply. Whether it's Vivi or Robin. Why do you have to take such a stand when it comes to the protagonist? After all, isn't there someone who just wants to make things difficult for him? I don't think Luffy would do this. He always has a way to help his friends solve their problems. What's wrong with that? Isn't it just the protagonist himself and his family members who create problems for themselves? It can be seen that his family does not like and love him very much, and they are willing to embarrass him. Although Luffy looks like a child, he is actually a responsible and independent adult. Is that the protagonist? I have read so many chapters. What he does is not passive or pushed by others. Has he ever thought about fighting for it on his own??? This level of charisma can make Luffy fall in love with him. If it weren't for the powerful plot, I don't believe there is anything to like about the protagonist. If it was because of food, Sanji would have been with Luffy long ago. Which friend on the ship is not more cute, sunny and positive than the protagonist? Any comparison can defeat the protagonist... I really can't help my mouth, forget it.

I personally like this kind of writing, but the emotional line is weird, but everything else is okay. I'm looking forward to your other books.

This ending... There is no one left

I never expected that this was actually a b-text, it was quite sudden.

Damn it... Fortunately, I realized something was wrong and went straight to the ending. This is a trap!!!

Ah, is this a bad ending or an open ending? I just read it without reading the article.

The article is really well written, and it's amazing that I persisted in finishing it. Speaking of which, this is the first completed Pirates fanfic I've seen... The only thing I want to complain about... Not in a bad way, it doesn't have any impact, but I've always cared about it. Why are there so many exclamation points in this article? Hhh Really, I read the entire text and couldn't find a few periods. Ah, but it's not derogatory, I just really want to say it.