[The King's Avatar] When Summer Ends

It hurts to see it. I also read the long review and found that, just like the girl said, I feel the sense of cp is quite strong. The whole article seems very light, but every word is so heartfelt that even if you read a single sentence, you can remember it for a long time. I haven't finished watching Full Time, and I don't have enough time, but I still like Shaotian and Lao Yu. As Lao Yu said, Huang Shaotian should be remembered by others, not just for his trash talk. Together with Lao Yu, he created the glory of Blue Rain, and his life could easily be taken away, but I think the glory he left behind will never be forgotten by Lao Yu, even if he is not a fan. It feels like the author is taking the writing very seriously, and I like this tone very much. Come on.

I thought Lele's Si Ya was already at its limit… As a result, the author sent Lele Yiya as a gift again, phew! Feeling sorry for Leleˋˇˊ In Lele Don't Cry, you can summon the dragon when you have collected Qiya (no It's obviously (Yu Huang) But I only have Lele in my eyes… Well, it's true love However, I believe Lele is the world champion =ˇ=

He actually tortured Yu Huang! Full of tears

I promised you that Yu Huang wouldn't be abusive, but the last paragraph of QAQ always seemed a little bit jumpy. Yu Wangke [Shut up, you chowder? No... I want to think this way Shaotian is going to find Brother Umbrella and then complete Umbrella Yellow QAQ Forget it, I'd better stop talking nonsense. I like Shaotian the best in full-time, and I like Blue Rain best in full-time. Even if I quit full-time, I still like Shaotian the best. God just lacks a chatty sword master.

Sorry for the long wait. I thought for a long time about how to write this long review. Every time I pick up the pen, I read it again. In the end, I decided to write it in the reader's voice. [-01-] In fact, this article has a strong sense of CP. Even if you label it as non-CP, everyone can see that there is always ambiguity, so there is no need to worry. I feel like Asheng, you still lack confidence in your emotional drama. In fact, sometimes if you tell Bi Ming ambiguously, the feeling of CP will be even stronger. In fact, you have always done a great job in this regard! Whether it was black and blue before or full-time now, although your way of expressing feelings is restrained, it gives people a strong feeling. Occasionally, you have to give yourself some confidence and believe that readers will see what you want to express from your writing. [-02-] I actually haven't finished watching Full Time, I remember I mentioned it in the group. Of course, I didn't finish it because I didn't have time, not because the book was unattractive. The word "Glory" is not so much the name of the game as it is... One of their beliefs. These people have been working hard with "glory" as their goal. However, this group of people also gradually understood each other in the process of hard work. This article actually reflects this problem very well. There is no team, and you can't get first place if you lose anyone; however, there are always some people, and after losing someone, the whole world will become bleak. In your article, this is probably what Huang Shaotian means to Yu Wenzhou. When summer comes to an end, summer is actually not over. What is over is just one person's summer. If the above is spoken in human terms, the translation would be, would you like to change your habit of abusing your own life? [Hey] Although the living have more responsibilities than the dead, wouldn't you be sad if your life dies like this? [Cover your chest] [-03-] Well, in fact, this article, as a whole, is more like Yu Wenzhou's mental notes than a short story. The plot of the full text is slightly lacking, and people will forget a lot of things after reading it. However, if you pull out a single sentence, there is a lot that is memorable. Anyway, I remember that the charm of your writing probably comes from those sentences that can impress people. For short stories, most of the most impressive things are strong conflicts or obvious climaxes. Most of your writing is bland. Although there are some "conflicts" created, they are all buried under the blandness. As a result, the plot itself is not very sufficient, and there are even fewer plots that can be remembered. [But I think you just have to keep your style. There are always people who prefer this style, like me [Enough [-04-] Although the full text is not long, it well reflects the personality of the original characters. As far as the original work is concerned, Huang Shaotian's character is more vivid than Wenzhou, but because his representative actions are too obvious, sometimes it is easy to be written into a routine and become a paper man. I feel that the characters in your works, Asheng, respect the original work very much and are also very "live". You must have a lot of love to write them. Anyway, if I really want to say it, your writing has always been my favorite, but it makes it difficult for me to find any shortcomings. Although this kind of article may not become a big hit, but... People who like it will like it after all. The so-called plot, under the beautiful writing style, can be slightly covered up, and it is not a big shortcoming. Above! I wish your writing will get better and smoother~>///<

…Ah! Sheng! [What the hell] Don't be too full of skills that can kill your life or something? Be careful with the full buff! ... T_TOkay, I just want to say that I was tortured.

Xiao Sheng, you learned so badly that Danmei Xipi appeared...! ! ! ! ! ! PS: Sorry, I got out of my element in the end... "Become the pillar of Seigaku, Echizen" or something like that ORZ

Yu Huang's sense of CP is very strong, you have to have confidence! But why should Yu Huang abuse you if he can sweeten you! Can you please stop joking about the plane crash? Find a more reliable way to die! And I don't want Shaotian to die!

I don't know much about this, but I was really vomiting out my blood... The writing is very fresh but also filled with a touch of sadness. It hurts... When summer comes to an end, a team's summer may last forever, to the distance that cannot be seen, but our summer is over.