[Katekyo Hitman Reborn!] Echeveria Blooms: Eternity

Hello Mary Sue, no matter how mean Mary Sue is

Author, do you know that Bell was only sixteen years old during the War of the Ring, and Bell should not show such an appearance. He should be more mature. If written like this, the girl will become a Mary Sue in the end o(￣ヘ￣o)

←_←Shouldn't Bell have killed Gil long ago? Given his age, shouldn't he be in Varian?

Sand, sofa. . This is indeed a brother and sister story. . The first kiss was kidnapped like this←_←

I just wanted to say it when I saw the title... I bet fifty cents that the author has seen Stealing Stars

Come on~~~~~~~O(∩_∩)O~~

There is a time-traveling girl, please be careful! Where did it come from?! Could it be a Mary Sue?! Let's send her to Santuchuan in the next chapter! Dark face

Allie?! ~Why is there a time-traveling girl? ~Did the time travel lady use soy sauce? Let her disappear in the next chapter~ [Dark Face

Great writing >_<, please keep up the good work. Also, don't cheat.