Captain Skeleton

Twinkle, can you see me? Alas. I think short stories are more difficult to write well than novels. The important thing is to control the plot tension, render the atmosphere, and establish the emotional tone. This is what I think. The atmosphere is rendered very well. The narrative is very similar to the legendary stories in medieval European folk songs. Let me explain in detail, it means that you imagine the key words, dusk, forest, elf, woodcutter, and things have changed after a hundred years of dream. . . . . . . Does it have an internal smell? Just like that, the day after I finished reading the novel, my dreams were all about a wet deck, the sound of waves coming and going, a lone pirate ship, and a vast black sea of ​​stars. After waking up, I feel a sense of loss, which is related to the emotional tone of the article. Ahem, I personally have some unique insights into Xue's emotional analysis, please listen to me. The story originated from a dream of Twinkle. Dreams, I wonder what the subconscious mind of dreams wants to express. As soon as I had an idea, I thought that Snow was Twinkle's main consciousness and the narrator of the unfolding story; the monster was Twinkle's subconscious, and it unfolded in parallel with Snow's plot in the story. One of their similarities is that they both have red eyes. Snow's eyes are red, which is okay, but not necessary. I originally read that after Xue chose to become stronger, her appearance changed to silver hair and red eyes. I thought, handsome, but why is he so sexy? You know, after reading the whole story, you will understand that red has a special meaning in the story. Ruby, red eyes, red heart, these are all the configuration of dreams. You can carefully study the connection between them. Similarity point 2: Snow and Monster are doing one thing throughout the story, looking for Xiu Sen, finding Xiu Sen, and the story ends after finding Xiu Sen. Some people wonder if Xue has been waiting and cannot wait to look for it. If she finds it, is there still a temptation? This is about the parallelism of the main consciousness and subconscious mind in the story. In fact, while the human Snow was waiting for Xiu Sen, the monster Snow had been chasing after Xiu; the human Snow was testing Xiu's heart because she was pursuing the love of her teenage years. During this period, the monster Snow still wanted Xiu and couldn't get it. This vaguely reveals the stubborn heart of the human Snow. Then the problem comes, the snow needs to be repaired to live, and the monster needs to be repaired to death. This point alone can deny the possibility that snow and monsters are isomorphic and mutually exclusive. Is this really the case? Let's talk about Xue's feelings for Xiusen. It is the passionate and sincere admiration of young people, the confusion of love that cannot be responded to, and the resentment of not getting what you want. If the monster is the subconscious, then in the love between Xue and Xiu, the test started when they were childhood sweethearts. As a child, Snow was full of expectations for love, and there were no monsters at that time. The girl's pursuit of love hid a trace of confusion and fear, and the monster came out of the legend and became an uncertain factor in the distance, starting to become dangerous. After Xiu left, Snow fell into a long and hopeless wait. At this time, the monster became the main conflict point of the story, completely entering the reader's sight, and its existence was creepy. So can we make a bold guess and finally come to a terrible truth—— What killed Xiu was actually Snow. Kill Xiu, kill his love. There is evidence: at the beginning, the monster Jiexue killed the love that did not belong to him (those unrelated pirates) in order to wait for true love (luring Xiu Sen out to sea), and finally died together with the lover he recognized (killing Xiu). At the last moment of the article, Snow, the monster and Xiu appeared in the same scene for the first time. It was really a fateful scene. Snow is in the dream, and the main consciousness falls into a coma; the monster appears, and the subconscious comes to light. Moreover, Xiu turned his back on Snow, faced the monster, and finally became honest with his love. I think "dying together" with your lover is another kind of romance of love. What a wonderful destination, ahem. Finally, let's talk about Sauson. One of the most attractive parts of the book for me is Shining's interpretation of heroic love. Heroic love is often unspoken, I thought of Odin. What Frigga wanted to hear most, Odin would never say. After Thousand Sail, no one knows what Odin's blessing is, except Frigga and Twinkle. Alas, they want to know but don't want to know. Hewson is also a hero. But Xue Sen's love is different from the love of the God King and God Queen. But I believe that the woman who killed love was finally redeemed. Self-redemption. Finally, I confess my love to you, I am really happy to meet you in the same world. The second day of the sixth lunar month in the Gengzi year

I feel so complicated. I really like my wife's style of writing Western fantasy. The writing style is very deep and completely different from Jinjiang's traditional sweet pet writing.

Wow, I can publish a book with 20,000 words, I'm so envious

I wet several pieces of toilet paper. If I indulge a little more, I can use a box. I hope they can have a good ending one day.

I want to take Pirates of the Caribbean into the whole process. Harmful

My mom... It's so well written! What a poetic dream!

2026.2.26Leave a comment. I was attracted to read it by the introduction, and after reading it in one sitting, I found that it was completely my cup of tea. I really liked both the writing style and the story setting. Heroic love with a hint of tragedy will always be my cup of tea! 😭

It started as a legend and ended as a dream.

Shining's western fantasy is really amazing, I wish Shining will write more western fantasy! There are really too few Western fantasy articles, I'm out of food, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh xing xing xing for the chance to read this post again, ps. When can Shen fix aristocrats and black high heels? The ball is gone, woo woo woo, my Xihuan is in a trap ah ah ah ah ah, my white moonlight woo woo woo, now I can't see it, is it possible? Is it possible? Is it possible? Woo woo woo (┯_┯)

What a graphic story