Chicken Feathers on the Ground

I really like Dada's early articles~ I hope Dada can keep writing articles, come on!

I heard this book on Himalaya and couldn't help but read it in one sitting. Let's finish the chapter and write down some thoughts. After reading the novel for so many years, this is the first time I have read the plot of the protagonist being trapped, and it feels very fresh. In fact, if I think about the plot now, there are still some bugs. The most important one is the reason why the male protagonist enters the palace. I feel that the meaning of the article is that the prince tried his best to protect the Xia family, and in exchange, the Xia family brought their only legitimate son into the palace. Fake eunuchs are not the prince's original intention in theory. This is actually very strange, because since the prince abandoned his concubine, the heroine is actually dead as well. Castrating the Xia family's son and putting him in the same circle will not have the effect of restraint, but will only attract hatred. Even if we assume that the prince and Xia Daddy agree that the male protagonist will be a fake eunuch, they are still beyond their reach to restrain the heroine. If it is to protect the female protagonist, it is actually more reasonable to train an ordinary child with superior force. The only far-fetched explanation is that the Xia family has both civil and military skills and attributes of loyalty and bravery. In addition, the slightly strange thing that cannot be said to be a bug is that the prince should have designed the plot of being deposed and disappearing and then making a comeback. However, the first strength and then weakness of the barbarians is an unpredictable situation. In other words, the original situation is likely to be that the barbarians occupy the country, and then they can survive until death without waiting for the country to be in chaos. In short, in comparison, it is more reliable to simply kill the king and usurp the throne while he is the prince, and then wipe his butt clean. So my overall feeling is that the author is probably not very good at writing about tactics. Another manifestation of this is the weakness of the heroine's plot in the second half after leaving Meidu. Next, brag. Personally, I think the author is much better at writing about emotions. In fact, this kind of feeling of "living for you, dying for you, banging against the wall for you" is really difficult to grasp. If the transition is not enough, it will make people feel inexplicable, and if it is too much, it will become a dangerous lover. The author writes very well about the isolation and helplessness of the male and female protagonists in captivity at the beginning, and they are surrounded by enemies on all sides. That is to say, this kind of mixed feelings of love, family, friendship, and strong exclusivity seem reasonable. However, one problem with writing this kind of marginal emotion is that it tends to lack stamina. This article also has some of this problem. The male protagonist has been spoiled to the point of pampering and loved to the point of being in love, so in theory at the end, all the foreshadowings are wrapped up and the plot reaches its climax, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists cannot go any further. One solution is of course to dilute the emotional line with plots of intrigue and various struggles, but this is not realistic for the reasons mentioned above. But who wouldn't love an extremely outstanding, handsome male protagonist who always only has you in his heart? It can be considered that the flaws do not hide the advantages. In fact, apart from the most miserable part about the male and female protagonists in the early stage, my favorite part of the whole novel is the part about the heroine and the third princess reuniting to resolve their grudges. In my mind, that is the best embodiment of growth and helplessness after being polished by reality. (So I really feel that I am currently suitable for writing sadistic stories with a depressive tone, but I am not good at writing cool stories.) I have said a lot of things in a long way, but the summary is, keep up the good work and look forward to more good articles!

I read it in one sitting! The author's characters are so interesting

Finished reading! ! ! Super pretty! ! ! A very different novel! ! ! Fried chicken is creative! ! ! The author should be liked by more people! ! !

I actually didn't quite understand what Concubine Xie meant = =

The description of coming out of the darkness is like abducting a good girl.

I've finished watching it, it's very interesting, the male and female protagonists are very loving! He also grasped the pace of the heroine's gradual rise very well! It just felt a bit rushed at the end~

I accidentally read a pirated copy a long time ago. I really liked it and decided to buy it again. I like big books and I must keep writing. I will chase every book to the end and spread my love.

So sweet~~~I can't get enough of the extras~

I really like the crybaby male protagonist! Will you write a story about a crazy, crybaby male protagonist and a domineering female protagonist? !