(Western Fantasy) Get Down on Your Knees and Talk

It feels like the characters of the two brothers only exist in the author's words. From before the disappearance of the heroine, it can only be seen that Bai Mao likes the heroine very much, but does not seem to value honor and pride. The conflict with his brother is more like a tsundere. If Baimao valued honor, he would not have brought an illegitimate daughter from a small family to the Lily Festival. At that time, it seemed that the heroine's super talent and identity as a magic pattern master were not widely known. In short, the author spent too much time on Baimao, making him too lovable. It was very strange to impose a change on Bai Mao in the later stage to prefer an elegant heroine. The powerful and domineering heroine has not changed much.

The mix of Chinese and English is quite strange. . .

I think the mixed English is really weird

I love so much. It's good to listen to readers' opinions, but it can also easily interrupt the author's overall train of thought. Generally, I regard the author as the creator of a story, and I follow the author's true intentions, whether good or bad. Thanks for letting me encounter this story, and I hope to have the opportunity to see excellent Western fantasy works again in the future. I love you with all my heart.

Of the two brothers, the one who loves them more will stay with her. It's normal.

It doesn't feel good, it doesn't look good

Throughout the article, I feel that the author's Lao Bai is a tsundere boy with a rich image. It can be seen from the article that from the beginning of Lao Bai's love for the heroine, to the day when the heroine's accident happened, he knelt down and begged his father for help but could not get help. Later, when Lao Hei became the national master and Lao Bai inherited the status of the head of the family, until the heroine returned, the ups and downs must be said. In fact, Lao Bai was very hard. The text said that he became more and more helpless and more stable, etc. It was also said that Lao Bai's dressing style and taste were the same as before. It can be seen from this that he is actually the same as before. Time changes everything. It is undeniable that Lao Bai is a little helpless. His former lover now gives up for the family and for his brother. However, this sacrifice is actually not necessary for the arrogant young Lao Bai who has been in love since childhood. It is just a yearning for ten years, or an irreplaceable memory of his youthful years. Lao Bai actually wasn't that sad to let go. It's important to state that what the heroine really likes is Lao Bai. But at the same time, the heroine is a realistic person and lacks love. It can be seen that the heroine will be sad when Lao Bai lets go, but she is cruel enough to let herself go. It has to be said that the heroine is actually cruel and weak. Later, Lao Hei pursued the heroine. In fact, the heroine did not explicitly ask Lao Hei to give up. Instead, she waited and watched. From time to time, Lao Hei's love deepened, and she slowly began to like Lao Hei. Quite right, I can no longer let my heart be handed over at will (please see the heroine's overt and covert hints that Lao Bai and herself will re-engage after her return). Female protagonist defense

The ending is full of flowers, but unfortunately I feel that many stories ended before they started.

The structure and plot are good, but I feel that the emotional and psychological details of the characters are missing a bit, and the characters are not very vivid. Come on~

The ending was very rushed... It felt like the author didn't develop the plot enough. As for the male protagonist, I think the main reason is that he appeared too late in the early stage, and the emotional foreshadowing in the later period is still a bit unnatural, especially the female protagonist's relationship. I feel that it is not very good. Personally, I think it may be a problem of length. The author can write a longer one.