Sometimes Xu Junli felt he was no different from the glazed tiles on the palace walls.
Bathed in sunlight and cloaked in starlight, he listened to the dragon's roar in the long wind. He watched the changes of the world with cool indifference. At most, the shimmering light refracted by the sun would dazzle those around him.
It was only after meeting those two royal brothers that he remembered glazed tiles were mostly used in palaces.
He was only human. He could not help being swept into a power struggle whose story had long since been written. He might as well have been one of those glazed tiles, passing a hundred generations in unhurried silence.
Power plays and romance, devotion and malice. New emperors bring new ministers; noble houses scheme against one another, and the human heart is impossible to fathom...
What is love? What is loyalty? Or rather, who deserves to be treated with love and loyalty?
They are long gone.
[Pairing] A miserable bottom is forced to shuttle between two scheming tops / There is one or two supporting couples who help move the plot along.
[Note] This is a serious drama (I really can't be cute, so I'll just keep a straight face). I'll try to avoid making it too slow to get going. The bottom will remain in a one-on-one relationship throughout.
I'm a student, so updates can be unpredictable. For now, I'll try to update frequently. I'll say more in the story once school starts.
As always, rolling around and begging for some warmth =w=
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The modifiers in the first two chapters were too complicated, but this chapter is much better. San'er passed away suddenly, sad...
Finally, two words, should be three words... There are too many adjectives in this chapter.
Here are the fireworks at Jingchu Changping Shop, hello Greedchunke~
After reading the whole story, Hua Hua really feels that the plot and writing of Chun Ke are very good~
The story of Chun Ke is an imaginary ancient time, with a huge background. Although all the patterns have not been described yet, it is indeed written very delicately, and the scene descriptions often appropriately exaggerate the atmosphere. It is very visual, and I feel that I enjoy watching the fireworks.
Next, there are some minor problems for Chunke.
First, there's the copywriting.
The copywriting is very literary. To be honest, it is not to the taste of all readers, because not all readers will be willing to take a closer look at this kind of, well, seemingly bloody copywriting, even if the content is not very bloody. Moreover, Chunke's copywriting is not very able to let readers understand what the article is about, and the amount of information is insufficient. Especially when Yanhua reads the first chapter, he is completely unable to combine the content with the copywriting. Of course, when he reads the following content, he understands it a little bit.
I suggest that Chunke make a slight modification. Well, just make the copy more straightforward.
Then, there is the specific content of the article.
Chunke's article is indeed drama-oriented as the copywriter said, following the plot flow and emotions interspersed in it, but it does not dominate.
However, there is also a shortcoming that must be mentioned, that is, Chunke's writing style is really good!
This is definitely not a joke, but Chun Ke is really written in a very antique style, and the words and actions of the characters are also very restored. And it can be seen from Yanhua that Chunke is very careful in shaping this very large and complicated story, and the relationships between the characters are also intricate. But it is precisely because of this that for people who are not good at Chinese language, such as me, a scumbag like Yanhua, or people who read texts quickly and often not carefully, some of the content is not easy to understand or they don't have the patience to read in detail.
I hope that Chunke can write the content of the article more understandably. Of course, this does not mean writing in vernacular. Chunke can just pay a little attention to it. Of course, he can also give reminders when the author has something to say, or create a small theater or something.
Well, another small problem is that the overall look is a bit fragmented.
Especially generally speaking, in a chapter of Chun Ke, there are often more than one scene changes, but when Chun Ke switches, most of them are without any hints at all, which is a bit abrupt and unnatural, especially the switch between Zhou Zisong and Zhou Zijin. The names of these two brothers are quite similar, and at first the fireworks were a little confused and couldn't tell who was who. I remember there was a point where the two suddenly switched, and then the fireworks were a bit confusing. Later, I looked back carefully and finally understood.
It is recommended that spring guests pay a little attention, otherwise it will give people a messy feeling.
Also, there are more non-protagonist scenes.
However, as of now, Chun Ke still focuses more on the plot rather than the emotional drama, so this is not a very serious problem.
Again, it's the characters of the protagonists.
Yanhua personally likes Xu Junli's character, he is happy-go-lucky and a very cool and calm person. Even if I lose my memory, I still have the ability to do something for myself. I don't just rely on others. I am very independent.
As for the two attackers, one is an emperor and the other is a prince who once rebelled. What they did is very consistent with their identity and status, and is reasonable. Although these two attacks are not very consistent with the popular setting of the dark-bellied attack that is indifferent to outsiders and only gentle to the recipients, they unexpectedly feel very good.
The most important thing is that not only these two people, but all the primary and secondary characters Chun Ke are well grasped and do not deviate from their settings.
Well, so in terms of character and so on, I personally feel that Chun Ke's writing is impeccable.
Finally, there is the emotional issue of the protagonists.
At present, the CP is not very obvious, and Yanhua can't tell who Xu Junli ended up with. He just hopes that Xu Junli can finally be with his beloved~ But Yanhua believes that Chunke will definitely be HE, right~
But now it's over 50,000 words, so Chunke's pace should be accelerated as much as possible~
In short, Yanhua feels that Chunke's writing is very, very good. As long as you persist, it will definitely get better and better.
Finally, I wish Greed Chung Ke better and better as he writes, his collection gets higher and higher, and his popularity gets better and better~
Jingchu Changpingpu
[Fireworks] Comment
Haha, I didn't understand it half-heartedly, so I didn't find it cruel, but I finally saw the protagonist come out to show off;)
There are 3 disadvantages
Too many scene changes
There are too many characters
The contradiction in Chapter 1 is not obvious enough
Good writing style
I... Started to understand again, what is the purpose of mixing poison? ... Are you a Chinese major? Science students feel that they have little talent and little knowledge...
I give a thumbs up to the author's writing style and characterization. I can't give you all the reasons, but I just think it's to my liking. Let me mention that the writing style may be more condensed and have some character. This is my personal preference and is for your reference only... In addition, as I mentioned before, the narrative can be more concise and the words should be used on the edge. So far, it seems that the writing is neither urgent nor slow, and there seems to be a lot of foreshadowing, but it feels a little flat. Of course, my faults do not hide my faults. I really want to get to know you, and I would also like to ask you to give me some pointers for my humble article. Well, you can ignore this last sentence...
Not bad, I understand now. Even though I'm a bitch, I'm cute. .
It's a bit literary and artistic, but I don't quite understand it. . It feels pretty good. .
If you write randomly, I will read randomly😁
The modifiers in the first two chapters were too complicated, but this chapter is much better. San'er passed away suddenly, sad...
Finally, two words, should be three words... There are too many adjectives in this chapter.
Here are the fireworks at Jingchu Changping Shop, hello Greedchunke~ After reading the whole story, Hua Hua really feels that the plot and writing of Chun Ke are very good~ The story of Chun Ke is an imaginary ancient time, with a huge background. Although all the patterns have not been described yet, it is indeed written very delicately, and the scene descriptions often appropriately exaggerate the atmosphere. It is very visual, and I feel that I enjoy watching the fireworks. Next, there are some minor problems for Chunke. First, there's the copywriting. The copywriting is very literary. To be honest, it is not to the taste of all readers, because not all readers will be willing to take a closer look at this kind of, well, seemingly bloody copywriting, even if the content is not very bloody. Moreover, Chunke's copywriting is not very able to let readers understand what the article is about, and the amount of information is insufficient. Especially when Yanhua reads the first chapter, he is completely unable to combine the content with the copywriting. Of course, when he reads the following content, he understands it a little bit. I suggest that Chunke make a slight modification. Well, just make the copy more straightforward. Then, there is the specific content of the article. Chunke's article is indeed drama-oriented as the copywriter said, following the plot flow and emotions interspersed in it, but it does not dominate. However, there is also a shortcoming that must be mentioned, that is, Chunke's writing style is really good! This is definitely not a joke, but Chun Ke is really written in a very antique style, and the words and actions of the characters are also very restored. And it can be seen from Yanhua that Chunke is very careful in shaping this very large and complicated story, and the relationships between the characters are also intricate. But it is precisely because of this that for people who are not good at Chinese language, such as me, a scumbag like Yanhua, or people who read texts quickly and often not carefully, some of the content is not easy to understand or they don't have the patience to read in detail. I hope that Chunke can write the content of the article more understandably. Of course, this does not mean writing in vernacular. Chunke can just pay a little attention to it. Of course, he can also give reminders when the author has something to say, or create a small theater or something. Well, another small problem is that the overall look is a bit fragmented. Especially generally speaking, in a chapter of Chun Ke, there are often more than one scene changes, but when Chun Ke switches, most of them are without any hints at all, which is a bit abrupt and unnatural, especially the switch between Zhou Zisong and Zhou Zijin. The names of these two brothers are quite similar, and at first the fireworks were a little confused and couldn't tell who was who. I remember there was a point where the two suddenly switched, and then the fireworks were a bit confusing. Later, I looked back carefully and finally understood. It is recommended that spring guests pay a little attention, otherwise it will give people a messy feeling. Also, there are more non-protagonist scenes. However, as of now, Chun Ke still focuses more on the plot rather than the emotional drama, so this is not a very serious problem. Again, it's the characters of the protagonists. Yanhua personally likes Xu Junli's character, he is happy-go-lucky and a very cool and calm person. Even if I lose my memory, I still have the ability to do something for myself. I don't just rely on others. I am very independent. As for the two attackers, one is an emperor and the other is a prince who once rebelled. What they did is very consistent with their identity and status, and is reasonable. Although these two attacks are not very consistent with the popular setting of the dark-bellied attack that is indifferent to outsiders and only gentle to the recipients, they unexpectedly feel very good. The most important thing is that not only these two people, but all the primary and secondary characters Chun Ke are well grasped and do not deviate from their settings. Well, so in terms of character and so on, I personally feel that Chun Ke's writing is impeccable. Finally, there is the emotional issue of the protagonists. At present, the CP is not very obvious, and Yanhua can't tell who Xu Junli ended up with. He just hopes that Xu Junli can finally be with his beloved~ But Yanhua believes that Chunke will definitely be HE, right~ But now it's over 50,000 words, so Chunke's pace should be accelerated as much as possible~ In short, Yanhua feels that Chunke's writing is very, very good. As long as you persist, it will definitely get better and better. Finally, I wish Greed Chung Ke better and better as he writes, his collection gets higher and higher, and his popularity gets better and better~ Jingchu Changpingpu [Fireworks] Comment
Haha, I didn't understand it half-heartedly, so I didn't find it cruel, but I finally saw the protagonist come out to show off;)
There are 3 disadvantages Too many scene changes There are too many characters The contradiction in Chapter 1 is not obvious enough Good writing style
I... Started to understand again, what is the purpose of mixing poison? ... Are you a Chinese major? Science students feel that they have little talent and little knowledge...
I give a thumbs up to the author's writing style and characterization. I can't give you all the reasons, but I just think it's to my liking. Let me mention that the writing style may be more condensed and have some character. This is my personal preference and is for your reference only... In addition, as I mentioned before, the narrative can be more concise and the words should be used on the edge. So far, it seems that the writing is neither urgent nor slow, and there seems to be a lot of foreshadowing, but it feels a little flat. Of course, my faults do not hide my faults. I really want to get to know you, and I would also like to ask you to give me some pointers for my humble article. Well, you can ignore this last sentence...
Not bad, I understand now. Even though I'm a bitch, I'm cute. .
It's a bit literary and artistic, but I don't quite understand it. . It feels pretty good. .