"The flowers are blooming beautifully, but next season... I wonder whether I'll still be keeping the candles burning late into the night, afraid the flowers might fall asleep."
"I took Qiu De Kao's money to come see you."
The winds rise and fall across the desert, while songs and dances in the imperial city remain as they always were.
Was this life of wandering and hardship all for someone else's foolish greed, or was it simply to leave an indelible mark on a life?
Deep within the palace, the ailing emperor struggles to draw breath, never seeing the fate toward which those who served him were driven by the lash.
Do you see? He has come to help you up, so you can look back upon the half of the realm that belongs to you.
That crabapple tree blooms eternally. Its branches cross and tangle, bearing a profusion of bright, beautiful flowers. They bloom with such fury that they seem ready to burn away their very essence, illuminating a darkened sky.
Set against the Jingtai era of the Ming dynasty. Hei Hua is the only pairing. Ning Xiu is hidden. Those who dislike angst, please steer clear. Lao Yang and A Ning have substantial roles. My writing is poor, and updates are slow.
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Ah, I really want to complain when I see this. The protagonist A did something sorry for the protagonist B. In order to get rid of B, he infiltrated into B's team looking for a blueprint of immortality. The two of them had made a mess before to find a map. Then they left. On the way, they met A's accomplice beauty C. C brought some information and found out that AB was involved. He warned A not to be with B. There was a D in B's team who was an old acquaintance of everyone. E pretended to snatch the map to save his mother and ended up muddying the waters. C and D knew each other, so they secretly made an agreement. It turned out that C liked another beautiful woman F. Then B left A behind after hearing C's words, and all this was A's plan. A was reluctant to discuss something with D in depth, and ran after B. Both B and C almost died. C is not Han, so he left alone and probably died. A and B had a heated exchange. At this time, B told A that he recognized A as the person who was sorry for him in the first place. Then the two found the tunnel and walked together to find a map, but only one person could leave here. Ah, so sad. But A was very realistic and beat B and left him behind. B confessed to him affectionately and desperately. I don't regret it. =Dan=Author, you are really good at it. If it weren't for the writing, it would be a bit unreadable. The first half is a little slow, the second half is too rushed, and the plot is vague and unclear in some places. But author, look at me typing so many words and still have something to say. I think the part about the old itch is good. It has shaped the heart of a sophisticated person. The tears shed at the end can be considered a tactful way to let me feel his final despair and abandonment. In addition, although the plot is confusing and not meaty, you can still feel some things that the author wants to express, such as the inability to love, such as Aning's uninhibited and indulgent love for freedom throughout his life, such as Heihua's depressing entanglement. So I still think this article has some readable reasons, although its flaws are obvious. The author is young after all. I hope the rest of this article can be collected and the next article can be improved. Author, I failed to hook up with you, so I am writing this review (after reading this, you must still not be able to hook up with the yandere author!) Please see me!
After reading the entire article, I don't know what to say but I don't know where to start.
I have been silently watching the author write the article. Even though I have long passed the age of reading online articles, I should not have such patience.
I don't want to say praise, but the author's plot structure is still lacking. What interests me more is the emotion revealed by the author.
This point is carried out throughout, and the author structures the story on a desolate tone. Whether it is thrilling or adventurous, it is never pure love. Even if the blind man died for Mr. Hua, the purpose was to make him remember himself in such a tragic way. It was a decisive farewell and a punishment, making him uneasy forever. Hua Ye, on the other hand, uses love as a bargaining chip to deceive and pursue profits.
The author seems to be writing about love, but in fact, he has already told the blind man that it is just a carnival. It's rare to be indulgent and rarely uninhibited, but in fact it's a game between people who are deeply lonely.
Loneliness, a separation of life and death is just in the name of friends. As Jie Yuchen said, all this has never really been about Fengyue. Even if there is love, there is a lot of pity, a lot of admiration, a lot of ambiguity, not love.
In my opinion, the tragedy of this article seems to be that Yin and Yang are separated. In fact, the protagonists all live in reality. They may have pursued or fantasized, but they ended up deceiving each other.
Love exists or not.
It has to be said that Lao Itchi's insistence on his mother is worse than his insistence on love. Perhaps this is why he was particularly irrational when facing Heihua and the two, and even gave up on the goal he had worked hard for many years.
His end is very bleak, because the concept of love is also denied throughout the article.
In my opinion, his giving up was after seeing Jie Yuchen for the last time. His disguise and questioning all hoped to hear Jie Yuchen say that he loved him.
Except in dreams, I have gone there before. Unfortunately, Jie Yuchen has long forgotten it and is just living.
Lao Itch didn't catch love in the end. What's interesting is that this point was actually foreshadowed in the previous article, but I guess the author himself didn't realize it.
As for Ning Xiu, in my opinion, although their stories are based on a dark and cold tone, they are simple and frank to each other. Although they are different, they prove the existence of freedom.
Aning is happy.
If you don't believe that there are bald heads in the world, the author has denied love just like his previous creations, such as giving away the country. What's interesting is that in the 10-year-old manuscripts published by the author, praise and pursuit of love can be seen everywhere. What exactly made the author deny love?
Regarding personal privacy, I am just making a guess. But in comparison, it just feels desolate in the end.
After all, those who hate the ladies on stage or me off the stage are not them.
"Burn away the beautiful family members like flowers, leaving only the passing years" turns out to mean this. No love, no hate, no regrets. It starts with deception and ends with deception. The meeting was just for the sake of a mirror, how could we ever express happiness!
This writing style is from the third year of junior high school. . . The author can consider developing in a literary direction.
The ending is a bit cruel, but it also implies that the black blind man failed to commit suicide and did not stab his heart, so he should still come back.
I'm so awesome, so awesome!
Lala, here comes the article.
First of all, I'm sorry that I haven't read Tomb Raiders Notes, so Xiaohen read it as an original novel, so please forgive me if there is anything wrong.
Wenwen's writing style is very good, and the plot arrangement is also interesting.
But there is one thing I think we should pay more attention to, that is, when changing characters, don't always use him as the name. You have to distinguish who this person is every time, especially when the two people opposite are of the same sex, but the same person is just a different person.
Keep up the good work!
Author, take care of yourself! I have also encountered this, it happens before menstruation. There is also a long-term irregular life and lack of sleep. . . . . . .
I was still somewhat impressed when I read the campus article, but I didn't like Black Flower so much that I didn't read this one. How should I put it? The author's writing style is quite good, and it can be seen that the plot arrangement is very careful. However, this article has more than 60,000 words, which left me with the impression that it is flashy and unrealistic. In other words, it's a little too floaty. The characters that appear now are Jie Yuhua, Heixiazi, Aning, Lao Itchy, Huo Xiuxiu and Jude Kao are two big supporting roles. I feel that Heixiazi, Aning, and Huo Xiuxiu are relatively successful, but Jie Yuhua, a character with relatively large room for development, is not so outstanding. Of course, the new update does a good job of fleshing out his image, but I feel that in the second half, after the first kiss, Hua Ye is weak. Currently, I am still looking forward to the counterattack at the end. The author's novel should be a long one, and I hope it won't end up like the other one that lost everything. Hope there can be greater progress. Let's give it the points, and the author is trying to get along with me for the two times I posted the review via mobile phone? I feel like the author is a bit serious.
It is densely packed, and it will look more comfortable if there is an extra empty line between paragraphs. It's very well written, I won't talk about the other concubines.
I'll give it a try first, and I'll leave a comment tomorrow.
Ah, I really want to complain when I see this. The protagonist A did something sorry for the protagonist B. In order to get rid of B, he infiltrated into B's team looking for a blueprint of immortality. The two of them had made a mess before to find a map. Then they left. On the way, they met A's accomplice beauty C. C brought some information and found out that AB was involved. He warned A not to be with B. There was a D in B's team who was an old acquaintance of everyone. E pretended to snatch the map to save his mother and ended up muddying the waters. C and D knew each other, so they secretly made an agreement. It turned out that C liked another beautiful woman F. Then B left A behind after hearing C's words, and all this was A's plan. A was reluctant to discuss something with D in depth, and ran after B. Both B and C almost died. C is not Han, so he left alone and probably died. A and B had a heated exchange. At this time, B told A that he recognized A as the person who was sorry for him in the first place. Then the two found the tunnel and walked together to find a map, but only one person could leave here. Ah, so sad. But A was very realistic and beat B and left him behind. B confessed to him affectionately and desperately. I don't regret it. =Dan=Author, you are really good at it. If it weren't for the writing, it would be a bit unreadable. The first half is a little slow, the second half is too rushed, and the plot is vague and unclear in some places. But author, look at me typing so many words and still have something to say. I think the part about the old itch is good. It has shaped the heart of a sophisticated person. The tears shed at the end can be considered a tactful way to let me feel his final despair and abandonment. In addition, although the plot is confusing and not meaty, you can still feel some things that the author wants to express, such as the inability to love, such as Aning's uninhibited and indulgent love for freedom throughout his life, such as Heihua's depressing entanglement. So I still think this article has some readable reasons, although its flaws are obvious. The author is young after all. I hope the rest of this article can be collected and the next article can be improved. Author, I failed to hook up with you, so I am writing this review (after reading this, you must still not be able to hook up with the yandere author!) Please see me!
After reading the entire article, I don't know what to say but I don't know where to start. I have been silently watching the author write the article. Even though I have long passed the age of reading online articles, I should not have such patience. I don't want to say praise, but the author's plot structure is still lacking. What interests me more is the emotion revealed by the author. This point is carried out throughout, and the author structures the story on a desolate tone. Whether it is thrilling or adventurous, it is never pure love. Even if the blind man died for Mr. Hua, the purpose was to make him remember himself in such a tragic way. It was a decisive farewell and a punishment, making him uneasy forever. Hua Ye, on the other hand, uses love as a bargaining chip to deceive and pursue profits. The author seems to be writing about love, but in fact, he has already told the blind man that it is just a carnival. It's rare to be indulgent and rarely uninhibited, but in fact it's a game between people who are deeply lonely. Loneliness, a separation of life and death is just in the name of friends. As Jie Yuchen said, all this has never really been about Fengyue. Even if there is love, there is a lot of pity, a lot of admiration, a lot of ambiguity, not love. In my opinion, the tragedy of this article seems to be that Yin and Yang are separated. In fact, the protagonists all live in reality. They may have pursued or fantasized, but they ended up deceiving each other. Love exists or not. It has to be said that Lao Itchi's insistence on his mother is worse than his insistence on love. Perhaps this is why he was particularly irrational when facing Heihua and the two, and even gave up on the goal he had worked hard for many years. His end is very bleak, because the concept of love is also denied throughout the article. In my opinion, his giving up was after seeing Jie Yuchen for the last time. His disguise and questioning all hoped to hear Jie Yuchen say that he loved him. Except in dreams, I have gone there before. Unfortunately, Jie Yuchen has long forgotten it and is just living. Lao Itch didn't catch love in the end. What's interesting is that this point was actually foreshadowed in the previous article, but I guess the author himself didn't realize it. As for Ning Xiu, in my opinion, although their stories are based on a dark and cold tone, they are simple and frank to each other. Although they are different, they prove the existence of freedom. Aning is happy. If you don't believe that there are bald heads in the world, the author has denied love just like his previous creations, such as giving away the country. What's interesting is that in the 10-year-old manuscripts published by the author, praise and pursuit of love can be seen everywhere. What exactly made the author deny love? Regarding personal privacy, I am just making a guess. But in comparison, it just feels desolate in the end. After all, those who hate the ladies on stage or me off the stage are not them. "Burn away the beautiful family members like flowers, leaving only the passing years" turns out to mean this. No love, no hate, no regrets. It starts with deception and ends with deception. The meeting was just for the sake of a mirror, how could we ever express happiness!
This writing style is from the third year of junior high school. . . The author can consider developing in a literary direction.
The ending is a bit cruel, but it also implies that the black blind man failed to commit suicide and did not stab his heart, so he should still come back.
I'm so awesome, so awesome!
Lala, here comes the article. First of all, I'm sorry that I haven't read Tomb Raiders Notes, so Xiaohen read it as an original novel, so please forgive me if there is anything wrong. Wenwen's writing style is very good, and the plot arrangement is also interesting. But there is one thing I think we should pay more attention to, that is, when changing characters, don't always use him as the name. You have to distinguish who this person is every time, especially when the two people opposite are of the same sex, but the same person is just a different person. Keep up the good work!
Author, take care of yourself! I have also encountered this, it happens before menstruation. There is also a long-term irregular life and lack of sleep. . . . . . .
I was still somewhat impressed when I read the campus article, but I didn't like Black Flower so much that I didn't read this one. How should I put it? The author's writing style is quite good, and it can be seen that the plot arrangement is very careful. However, this article has more than 60,000 words, which left me with the impression that it is flashy and unrealistic. In other words, it's a little too floaty. The characters that appear now are Jie Yuhua, Heixiazi, Aning, Lao Itchy, Huo Xiuxiu and Jude Kao are two big supporting roles. I feel that Heixiazi, Aning, and Huo Xiuxiu are relatively successful, but Jie Yuhua, a character with relatively large room for development, is not so outstanding. Of course, the new update does a good job of fleshing out his image, but I feel that in the second half, after the first kiss, Hua Ye is weak. Currently, I am still looking forward to the counterattack at the end. The author's novel should be a long one, and I hope it won't end up like the other one that lost everything. Hope there can be greater progress. Let's give it the points, and the author is trying to get along with me for the two times I posted the review via mobile phone? I feel like the author is a bit serious.
It is densely packed, and it will look more comfortable if there is an extra empty line between paragraphs. It's very well written, I won't talk about the other concubines.
I'll give it a try first, and I'll leave a comment tomorrow.