When You Become the Top

Write a long review silently. I promised the author Jun Manji for a long time... As expected, I delayed QAQ very much. "Second time travel" is still a relatively new concept in Jinjiang. The protagonist goes back to the beginning after many vicissitudes of life, and carefully designs an ingenious layout, just to give his original self the opportunity to choose another path. Did the Mu Chaohua at the beginning love Su Shi? If you love, how can you be willing to share it with others? Watching the other person get lost and fall into the arms of another person. At the very least, it's not loving enough. However, after many hardships and thousands of sails, when I stop by chance, I still think of the first person. It turns out... Haven't I always liked it? Little by little heartbeat, little by little depression, it's not that I don't like you, it's that I can't love you. Chaohua is such a proud person that he will never tolerate the person he likes ever committing himself to someone else. The moment he pushed Su Shi out, he had cut off all possibilities between himself and Su Shi. It's not so much a matter of not loving or liking, but rather a silent resistance to the system - he personally cut off the budding relationship between himself and Su Shi in a way that hurt others and himself. The contract that was announced to the world was more like a suppression and warning to one's own thoughts. I will try my best to make amends, and I want the world to look at me with disdain. "I actually don't love him at all" What about Mu Chaohua later? Love, but never respect each other. In his past and present life, he had never explained anything to Su Shi. Is it pride or willfulness? From the beginning to the end, I never thought about sharing it with the other party. Chaohua's final awakening and growth should be when he saw Su Shi who had gone through the catastrophe. I thought that no matter where I went, how far I traveled, how many times I watched the sun rise and the moon set, the ebb and flow, you would always be waiting for me where I was when I came back. Chaohua is used to having his junior brother who is always waiting for him by his side, who is clear and gentle, gentle and gentle, not irritating, not fighting, not grabbing and not talking too much. When I picked her up, it felt like she was melting. My favorite part is when Su Shi looks at his senior brother by the bedside. "Want to see it if it doesn't look good?" "You like it, how can it not look good?" There are too many bad things in Chaohua's life that cannot be ironed out and cannot be told to others. The memory is too long and there are too many experiences, and each part is like a thorn in a row. And finally there is someone who is willing to tell him, how can what you like not look good, how can there be sadness when being with you. Good times, beautiful scenery, miserable wind and rain, I will accompany you to see them all. Su Shi always had low self-esteem when looking at his senior brother, like a monkey fishing for the moon on the shore. Although he immediately hugged him, he always felt uneasy. You are like a flower in the moon mirror under the water, so beautiful, but I can't touch it. So he stayed there, not moving, saying nothing or complaining, and making promises with a waiting attitude. Finally, Chaohua also began to make a promise that we would never leave each other for ten years, one hundred years, and one thousand years. As the author said, love is a matter of one person, but love is a matter of two people. A person's shallow liking, a person's affectionate style, step by step, will eventually lead to love. The final story ends softly and affectionately, Chaohua finally understands how to love someone. The time is quiet and the years are gentle. Morning and evening, we stay together in silence. (The relationship between the two of us will be great in the future~~Meow meow~~I like sweetness~~acting cute and adorable) The author will not publish a new article until next year. Then, See you next year.

Finished reading! How can I put it, the style of the latter part is a bit different from the previous one, the plot is great, and then some of the plots can actually be developed further, and some parts are skipped too much, just like reading an outline. In fact, this kind of plot can be written longer, but the author is also great!

Congratulations to the author for finishing...

... So Yang Lin is also a member of the original virtual world~~

Finished with flowers. The pace of the story was great at the beginning, but it started to go off track in the middle. But in the end, I always felt that a lot of things were missing →_→Dear you, you were so anxious to finish it. This is purely my personal opinion. I apologize for any mistakes~

This is the first long review in your life, so treat it well. Well, this article was attracted by the introduction, about time travel and counterattack NPCs. I used to read and like to see NPCs, but now that I am older and have a mysophobia, I have no interest in NPCs that ignore moral integrity. There are also main jokes. After watching too many stories about how the main character is silly and weird every day and then being eaten every minute, I feel tired of them even though they are full of meat. Recently, I am a fan of them. Then, let's get back to the point. I think this article is a happy-go-lucky article with a relaxed and joyful tone and a bit of complaining. Of course, in the later period, it is a bit affectionate and exclusive. Therefore, it is natural that there will be a lack of outstanding expressions and features of some lamentations and deep feelings in the world that make people cry. It does not mean that the article cannot portray this kind of emotion. It is just that it is difficult to show it either in a long and silent way or in a heart-wrenching and sorrowful way, and cannot give people a direct and profound impression. Generally speaking, there are relatively few emotional dramas. But I think two of the characters are well-shaped to my liking. My favorite is the affectionate Su Xiaoshou and the Mensao senior brother. The senior brother and the younger brother are the best friends and they can't be more lovable. Let's talk about Su Xiaoshou first. She must be an infatuated, strong and beautiful Shou. Of course, she must be different from the weak Cuscuta flower in the original work (actually I think Su Shi in the original work is not weak either). In fact, maybe most people look down on or even hate the weak and kind-hearted. I think there is some bombardment of sentimental romances, but more of it is the change in the entire social trend, so that we no longer believe in and cherish kindness. Of course, this is just a small book review, and social issues will not be discussed. I hate the Holy Mother as much as I hate the green tea bitch. Sometimes when I think about it, it's really a one-sided view. Of course, the Holy Mother I am talking about refers to those who are tough and strong in heart, kind and caring for others. It is a state of fraternity. If you do not do well, you will naturally become a secular person, but you will definitely face infamy if you try to save the common people. But kindness (of course truly kind and not pretentious) is better than evil. But I think the so-called cruel and lonely approach, stabbing you in the heart with a sword and complaining that you have been responsible for his life, and then abandoning you in the sand of the emotional torrent is enough. Maybe we just hate pretending to be weak to win sympathy? And those who are truly noble and kind-hearted should not be cast aside. Emma, ​​I'm going too far. The topic comes back to Su Xiaoshou, such an infatuated Shou who has been neglected by his father since he was a child and has not loved his mother. He has suffered a lot, but he still has a strong heart and still wants to pursue the future. He also regards you as the salvation of his life (a bit exaggerated). He pretends to be full of satisfaction and revolves around you. Senior brother, how can you not bear to be moved? Of course, maybe Su Shi was contaminated by the dust of the secular world, but he always adhered to his own morality, did not violate his true heart, did not violate his righteousness, and was very affectionate (even in the original work, which was immoral, he only loved his senior brother). As for the senior brother, he looked like a loser in the beginning, but gradually he gained his charm, such as his sultry temperament under the aloofness of his grandmaster, his friendship with his master, his perseverance before disaster, etc., All of which showed every bit of his true temperament. Of course, what I like most must be his true and deep affection for Su Shi in the end, especially the performance of peeping at Su Shi and being tempted by Su Shi, and his idiotic heart that is not satisfied with his desires. Forgive me for not writing deeply. The main reason is that the author's writing is too joyful. There is another wonderful thing about this article. It is the dialogue between the senior brothers in the later period, especially those words where the senior brothers reveal their true feelings. The tone of voice and the words used seem to convey the burning and heart-burning emotions. People can't help but taste it again and talk about it endlessly. However, I feel that the senior brother's handling of his junior brother's feelings is a bit hasty. Although there is a foreshadowing before, there is still a sense of jumping too fast, especially from the resignation of the protagonist to protect the protagonist, to the later heart-warming, and to the deep and untiring love. It is all explained or relied on the system, and there is no process of discovery and understanding by the senior brother himself, or it can be said that the senior brother himself does not reveal enough. Finally, I wrote you such a precious virgin long review. The number of words should be enough. If not, I will talk about long-lost topics such as Attack 2, 3, and 4. Speaking of which, the legendary Gong San was adopted by the author as a male favorite? Author, if you don't have any extras, hehe.

It's finally finished! ! ! Throw flowers! ! ! Great! ! !

... It ends so quickly! ! Don't go! Please make a side story~ (Hold Xianyang-chan's thigh tightly)

Congratulations on the completion\(≧▽≦)/——Well, what I want to say is actually——is it over like this TOTTOTTOT? ! ! !

I thought I wouldn't see the ending before school starts.