[The Flying Swords of Dragon Gate] The Cult Leader's Life as a Favored Consort

The copywriting is good, but the writing is a bit dull. It's just a time travel. The eldest child is the reborn Zhu Yunwen, the second child is Zhu Yuanzhang (a female child), and the third child is a modern person! It's a mess~ Especially the pregnancy episode, where the emperor spent the night was recorded! Five pregnant women were diagnosed with pregnancy at the same time. It was a flower picker who did it. I am really speechless. The palace is so easy to enter! The imperial doctor could tell the time just by taking a pulse. It was impossible for the flower-picking thief to follow the emperor! Pick whoever you want, if you lock the target casually, wouldn't it be obvious at a glance that a concubine who has never been summoned by the emperor is pregnant~ This loophole is huge! Also, the image of the Eastern leader has been greatly damaged. The author made the male and female protagonists very smart, and made everyone else look like idiots. For example, the 4-year-old maid who just entered the palace, the Queen Mother actually wanted to give her to her son, which is very strange~

It just ruins the writing of the leader. You can write about any time traveler and it will be more acceptable than writing about the leader. If you don't have that writing skills, don't challenge a character of the leader's level.

Are you really embarrassed to end it like this? Are you embarrassed? Reach out and ask for a sequel!

It collapsed, it was such a mess. Don't rely on common knowledge~

The prince is probably Zhu Di's second brother. Zhu Jianshen and Zhu Jianze are really disturbing descendants!

My grandma was born in the first year of Datong. At that time, women still had their feet bound. When my grandma got older, she didn't dare to live or die. She would cry, make trouble, and hang herself. The family loved her, so they didn't have their feet bound. She told me that her sister's feet were bound and she couldn't help but feel the pain. Ai Ma, it's the boss' fault! In addition, the author, are you really writing about the leader?

If the author is spoofing Dongfang Bubai and Yu Huatian, please state that it is a spoof, okay?

Kind of amazing. After seeing so many fans, a lot of people criticized Yang Lianting, and after Dongfang Bubai was reborn, he felt repentant and so on. But when I watched Swordsman, Yang Lianting might have been bad to his followers, and even killed Dongfang Bubai's old brothers, but I didn't see anything about him being unprofessional towards Dongfang Bubai. After Ren Woxing and others fought their way up the mountain, they held Yang Lianting hostage and tortured each other, hoping to distract Dongfang Bubai, but Yang Lianting never begged, cried, or begged for mercy from the beginning to the end. On the contrary, he just kept letting Dongfang Bubai go back to deal with Ren Woxing and others when he was in such pain. It is true that the tone of voice is bad, but if you put yourself in his shoes, you have been caught and used to threaten the person you love. Your lover desperately wants to come back to save you and is always distracted by you. At this time, will you reason with him in a gentle voice, or will you yell and yell to make him look after yourself first? You can't even say: You take care of yourself first! But I want to say: If you die, they won't let me go, just concentrate on dealing with them! In this case. Think about it, Dongfang Bubai is someone who has climbed up from the bottom of the divine religion step by step. If Yang Lianting is really a treacherous villain with clever words, greed for life and fear of death, even if he is feminine, will he be so attracted to him? Not to mention that after dying once, you suddenly "see through" the other person's true face. The other person's attitude towards him was always the same until his death. If you want to change your mind, you have to find a better reason! As for Yang Lianting, he killed the middle and senior leaders of the sect and took over the affairs of the sect. As long as there are small and medium-sized enterprises that have experienced the system and are not yet complete, they can publish a book "counting the weird spouses of those bosses". When the spouses of these bosses join the company, they almost always want to seize the power in their hands and take charge of everything. They feel that they are very capable and capable, but they often ask employees to help them deal with the consequences. Sometimes the boss and the boss's wife will have different opinions, and the employees can only stand aside in embarrassment and listen to their scoldings and other consequences. And if you are great, they will also think that you are trying to compete with him for power... Or even for people. Don't laugh, it's true. These spouses actually link the power of the company to their loved ones, so as long as someone wants to take a step beyond them in the company, they will be very suspicious and will keep you in the shoes all day long. Turning back to Yang Lianting, his wife lost interest in the affairs of the church after falling in love with him, and left everything to him. But my lover is very good, but I am not as good at handling things as he is. My lover's brothers and friends vote against him all day long because they have good friendship with him and have been in charge of church affairs for a long time. Just putting on a show and jumping up and down to see your lover, talking about their past friendship all day long... Makes people angry. Not to mention their god/religion, they kill people without blinking an eye, just look at Ren Woxing. If he hadn't died early, Ren Yingying and Linghu Chong would have had no choice but to emulate Liang Zhu. So Yang Lianting killed the people he disliked, which was a very reasonable thing even from the perspective of Dongfang Bubai, because the general environment of God/religion was like that. So from Dongfang Bubai's standpoint, Yang Lianting is indeed a good lover. Unless he is reborn and feels that he is blind, and choosing a lover must not only be devoted to him, but also be a handsome man with all-round management skills and unparalleled martial arts skills, then there is nothing to say.

I went to see the photos of foot binding... OMG! It's just pig's feet! How could anyone like feet like this? Just looking at them makes your scalp numb. The ancients really had strong tastes. But when it comes to small feet, I think of my grandma. She used to buy shoes in a smaller size because she said the feet were too big and looked ugly. As a result, the little toes are now a bit deformed. Mothers must be careful if they want to take care of their children to their elders in the future, because from their point of view, they are doing a good thing~~~ Not to mention other things like using iron clips to pinch the nose...

It's so fake. Can things in the palace be so simple? Can so many people decide to be loyal so easily? Was Tian Huayu really so easy to abduct when he was a child? . . . . . The queen's love, newcomers, are they so good? The emperor has received the emperor's education for several years after all, are they so mentally retarded? . . . . . Ah, I can't stand it anymore. Seeing how hard you worked on writing, I'd like to share it with you two.