
Reborn in the Fourth Year of Jianyuan
重生到建元四年(gl)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 210k Words
- Genre
- Baihe (GL)
- Updated
- 7y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
59Chapters
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8.7Score
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12.4kClicks per chapter
838Comments
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Looking back, I saw that Zhong Qiande was really powerful and probably had a good appearance, which attracted the Wen Zhuangyuan and later seduced the Western Wei Emperor to fall in love with him.
The end. This article is very good.
What about Zhu Gaofeng's story? What's it called?
I saw the fourth year of Jianyuan in the xx recommendation on the Baihe homepage. At that time, everyone was in the apocalypse, and everyone was reborn as Lily Su. Only Jianyuan, whose name was like a breeze blowing on the face, made people happy. It's just that there are only a few chapters left, and I'm a person who only reads the ending, so I simply collected it. After a long time, I found out that Jianyuan was finished, so I picked it up and took a look. In terms of positions, whether it is the emperor's brother, General Zhong or others, they are all quite plump. I particularly like the author's portrayal of General Zhong. Although the character is not likable, the author writes this character in a very three-dimensional way, whether it is the smooth, clever and unscrupulous person who is determined to climb up, or the sincerity of his fists towards Sister Yue. Thinking of the previous life, General Zhong said that he was forced to marry the princess, and I only have Sister Yue in my heart. I believe it. It's just that in that life, General Zhong didn't chase him for as long as he did in this life, so he could only discount his sincerity. However, I am actually a little disappointed with this article. Because at the beginning of this article and the little green words in the following chapters [I wrote myself to tears], we can see that the author actually buried very, very deep feelings when constructing this article. But it is a pity that this article did not arouse a very strong resonance. I don't know whether it was due to lack of writing power or a problem with the plot arrangement. But I prefer plot arrangement. Because I think the author has the ability to portray, but after many very sad points of abuse are reached, I will feel that this is a point of abuse, but what about that kind of resonance, where is the resonance? I thought about it, and I felt that there was not enough preparation in the early stage and no momentum, which resulted in several big abuse points being castles in the air. Why the princess loves Miss Yue so much, and how much the princess loved Miss Yue in her previous life can actually be expressed through Miss Yue's memories of the past. This can lay a solid foundation, solidify the abuse point, and truly achieve the effect of resonance. Also, this article is more of a stream of consciousness. Why did the plot jump again? Is it because I didn't see it somewhere? I often feel like this. Maybe it's because we didn't do a good job of connecting the past and the future. There is also the character of the Queen. This character's reversal happened so quickly that no one knew that she was the big boss. There were basically no clues or foreshadowing for this character's reversal, and she suddenly became the big boss. The author may say that there are obviously hints, but the author's hints are just like your stream of consciousness, which is basically invisible. I think clues and hints are tricks of language. They are written so that people will remember them but not expect them. When the real heat comes, they will explode together, making people feel like they are suddenly enlightened and amazed, instead of being completely confused. Oh, and the same is true for Liu Shangshu's feelings for General Zhong. In fact, it's not bad to be a close friend, so there is no need to write it in CP. There is also the part where Sister Yue returns. I think what Uncle Guo did to her made her want to die. This kind of psychology is very difficult to overcome. But Sister Yue raised her after diving, and then she was with the princess without any psychological shadow. This... Is obviously a huge abuse point, a great emotional breakthrough, and an event that creates a good character, so the author let it go. I have always felt that the rebirth story is a very impactful setting. When something is lost and found again, double the emotions will definitely be more tense. Unfortunately, Jianyuan only has twice the emotions. Generally speaking, it's a pity because I feel that I have the foundation to become a god. This is also the reason why I wrote a long review, which is a pity. By the way, I would like to praise the author at the end. I like Sister Yue's cool and gentle look.
After seeing the suspenseful ending, I finally feel relieved. It would be great if both of them are still alive. (I am too involved, my heart is a little fragile from being abused π_π) I don't know why I particularly like this article, and I probably won't forget it in the future, because I come back to pick it up and read it again when I have time. Perhaps it was Qiao Xi's deep affection that she didn't express until her death in her last life that touched me, and her personality, which was really to my liking anyway, and Yue Qingfeng's obsession and hard work after knowing about it in this life. This feeling is very touching (my heart). I would like to send my most sincere blessings. Come on, author, I support you! !
Yes, come out and make some bubbles, scatter flowers, scatter flowers
Zhong and Liu wrote a beautiful story. . . . .
After finishing it, I feel that neither Yun Zheng nor Zhong Qiande is annoying. I always thought Liu Yu was just a soy sauce character, but I didn't expect him to be very important... I thought Prince Ping was a piece of dough, sandwiched between his brother and sister, but he was actually a character who pursued different things. Many of the emperor's actions were indeed hurtful, but sitting in his position, it was not incomprehensible. It seems that the person who is the most useless is that uncle, who deserves to die.
Catching insects, this chapter twice writes Yue Qingfeng as Huilan Xin. It will be good if everything is on track. I have always looked down upon the unlucky Emperor of Western Wei. He bullied the Queen before and is bullying the Queen now. The Queen is still more powerful. Teach him a lesson! There was a time when I was very worried about Sister Yue's health. There was also a time when I was very stupid and didn't notice that the Queen was pretending to be sick and pretending to be pitiful. I thought that this double flag must mean that she was dead, which made me very sad... Fortunately, in the end, everyone had a good harvest in love and career, and everyone was happy~
I like the princess so much, I hope she and Sister Yue can be well