
Shrouding the Heavens: Becoming an Immortal
遮天之成仙
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 280k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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As for cp, I feel like they are a couple just to have cp. I have always felt that I feel more cp with the God King, my only confidant, etc. And after the God King left, I didn't seem to see the male protagonist playing the piano anymore. I always thought that they were a couple, or with Wu Shi. I also thought about it, but it turned out to be Ye Fan. I didn't expect this at all, but the overall impression is still very good.
Mmp, since you want to write about Ye Fan, then don't be with Little Moon from the beginning. What the hell is going on? If you want to dismantle the cp, just dismantle it and cut it cleanly. Otherwise, what's the point of following the trajectory of the original work? Suddenly I didn't know what to say. In what the author has to say, the author has always emphasized his three views. Well, the three views are to set the CP as Ye Fan who has a wife and daughter, which makes both of them have shortcomings. So is it so difficult to change the CP or not follow the original trajectory? It is written that Ye Fan has feelings for Chang Qing, and it is not impossible to not be with Zi Yue. It is so uncomfortable to play like this.
I have already imagined the story after Chang Qing and Wu Shi Emperor.
Wen Ke, but there are regrets about the CP.
It's normal for Ye Fan and Chang Qing not to be together, but Ye Fan and Zi Yue actually didn't break up, me. . . Ye Fan's heart is clear that he has evergreen.
I actually found this article. I saw 70% to 80% of the time I thought CP was a fan of God King! ! !
It's good. It's only true to have regrets.
I really like Da Da's article, and I also like Ye Hei, but why do I feel that in this article, Changqing and the God King are more suitable! Am I alone? O(╯□╰)o
At that time, I thought the CP was King Jiang Shen, but I didn't expect it to be Ye Fan. However, the teacher wrote it very well. There are so many unsatisfactory relationships, and there are many reasons why people you like can't be together. Normally, this should be B. If you dare to write this kind of thing among other fans, you will definitely be scolded. If you put it in I can only feel endless regrets in this article, and I really can't figure out how they can be together. This ending is the best, and it doesn't force Ji Ziyue to die. In the world view of Zhetian, the emotional lines of these people are not OOC. If you like pure love, don't read it. Although Zhe Tian was not originally pure love. Several people are very good. I hope the teacher can write a long paid article and refine the emotional line. I can do 1v1/n, and I can eat anything under control.
No, this, how should I put it, congratulations on the completion, the writing is very good, but the cp is a bit unacceptable.