A Bowl of Deep Love: Final Edition

... I feel like the writing is a bit vague... It just feels like it ends inexplicably.

It is about how Shi Xie became a remnant soul in the fantasy world. It describes how Yin Shen came back to life because of Shi Xie's soul. . . Why did Shi Xie turn into a soul after being rescued by Yin Chen, and how could Yin Chen still live a good life after his soul flew away in order to save Shi Xie. . . . I'm really puzzled. . .

I was very confused when I read it. After entering the fantasy world of Zhang Heng, who is also Zizhen, it didn't say how Shi Xie remembered the past. There was also a section where Yin Shen died because of Shi Xie. In the next chapter, Shi Xie turned into a soul and Yin Chen was not dead. After reading the finale, my impression was that things in the fantasy world were messy and had no clue or logic. When writing an article, you don't just have to understand it yourself. The key is that the readers understand it, otherwise they won't understand what you are writing. I had a hard time reading it and wanted to curse. I had to bite the bullet and read the ending. I felt that apart from the unclear fantasy, this was a really good article. I'm not here specifically to troll you, I just want to share my point of view so that you can better understand the readers' feelings when you write an article next time. The filtering needs to be done well and not sudden, and the answers can be revealed first, otherwise people will feel uncomfortable reading and will abandon the article directly because they don't know what they are writing.

Confused. Who does the heroine like? ! Who is the hero! ! ! !

This won't end like this. . . Do you want to open another pit and write a short article? It feels good to look at. Sprinkle flowers

I kind of forgot the previous article T T

Although I can't calculate it, I still want to say that the combination of uncle and lolicon shouldn't be too cute.

I missed this chapter once~~

Is Shi Xie turned out to be Xuan Fei's sister?

I've even forgotten which one Chunfeng is. But it's also great as a stand-alone story~~