[Naruto] Obsession Turned to Illness

The writing is okay, but there is one problem. Chinese poetry is too familiar, so it's okay to use it in a Chinese context, but it's not compatible with the style of Japanese comics. It feels weird when put together. It's better to look for suitable Japanese haiku.

Huh? I feel that Chao Ya feels different in Zhishui's heart... Hhhhh, Kakashi has more and more love rivals 23333

This kind of ending always carries a touch of sadness. The person who left a trace in everyone's heart chose to be a hero, constantly losing, paranoid, crazy and depressed.

Ah... It actually ended like this. I do have mixed feelings. But I think Chao Ya is not an unlikable protagonist. Human beings all long for light and warmth, not to mention that the object is a little sun like Minato Namikaze. It's not surprising that Asagaya, who has nothing, would fall in love with him, right? Precisely because that beam of light was salvation, the pain was so heartbreaking after losing it that I couldn't let it go. As for Kakashi, I personally think that he really came out and moved forward during the Fourth War... But in any case, it is precisely because he has experienced heart-wrenching loss that he can continue to move forward, which makes people feel more distressed and loved. If he and Asaya can have more time, and Asaya's health is better, maybe there will be a different ending... But if you think about it, this ending will come naturally like running water... Not abrupt, but with a touch of sadness. I think this story is really well written, and the character descriptions are spot on. Please keep up the good work! Looking forward to more works from you!

In just one chapter... There is so much darkness and despair.

I always look at everyone's decisions from God's perspective, putting myself in it but unable to understand it. A very nice piece of writing

It took me a while to read the entire article, but I read it a little too seriously, so it took me a while. I must give praise?, Because the author writes seriously. As the novel unfolds, the writing becomes smoother and the characters gradually become more fleshed out.

There are too many ups and downs in Kakashi's life, and those who remain at the end bear witness to the longevity of Konoha.

This is a different story from the main storyline of Naruto, different but reasonable. Although the protagonist dies in the end, death is already a gift to him.

This is the real shadow... Darkness, depression, paranoia... With unknown pain and undetectable attachment, in the twisted soul, find yourself and go to death...